Fantasy *********

The subject matter is novel, and there is no old-fashioned prophecy to explode the combat power into a super game, which is commendable. Then I will mention my understanding. I will not talk about the various energy bombs of the Saiyans. The rules of the Dragon Ball world are so meaningless, but martial arts and boxing techniques are currently not there. Why should he pay attention to teaching pig feet? His female master taught him a set of boxing techniques, but can the fists of immortal cultivators be counted as punches? If Lao Yuan punches out, a shadow of the fist will run towards the enemy. To put it bluntly, it is still a function of energy. Saiyan punches to the flesh. You should learn more skills in fighting. Although the female master teaches you with fists and fists, but to be honest, the immortal cultivator's boxing methods have already added the understanding of energy effects and other aspects when creating the creation. It does not apply to pig's feet. If someone insists on lifting Kong, let me put it another way, if you are a martial arts master, you can only fight with fists at the beginning. Later, you break through your innate ability and can release your internal strength. Will you still fight with fists? Later, you understand the meaning of the fist, and countless fist shadows appear when you think about it. Finally, you enter the Tao with fists, without even a thought. When you appear, fists from the sky are falling randomly, and golden fists surge from the earth. Now that you are writing a boxing technique, is this punch still a boxing? Is it still related to fists? So I think Saiyans are in the world of cultivating immortals and don't understand cultivation. However, it is possible to train and strengthen their bodies, and they also need to learn fighting skills. Pig's feet do not require weapons, so when practicing boxing, you cannot simply and crudely learn the boxing techniques of cultivators. What skills can the boxing techniques of cultivators have? Here is some personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. You should bring the pig's feet to the mortals to learn from some mortal boxers. The skills of mortal boxers may not be inferior to those of immortal cultivators. After all, Kakarot also learned every move from Kame Sennin since he was a child. Although the fists of cultivators have their own moves, after all, they are practicing "qi", and some of the movements may also be to prepare for the shooting of fist shadows later, just like Duan Yu, who was tossing and turning and suddenly fired a six-meridian divine sword (internal force is released externally). To learn this from a pig's feet, it is better to rub energy bombs with your hands. Pig's feet should be used to practice "physical" skills. You should learn some technical boxing techniques such as Wing Chun's close combat or Tongbei Fist. As you improve your physical fitness, you will have more physical strength. The more physical strength you have, the easier it will be to rub energy bombs with your hands.

Super Saiyan Level 1: Qi training period foundation building period blood refining period Muscle training period bone refining period Gathering period Tongdan period The spirit period Yuanxin period heavy stage innate stage Transformation stage Imperial Period (Super Saiyan Level 1) Super Saiyan Level 2 to be followed...

The writing is good, but it's a pity that it only writes a low-level warrior. In fact, I think this old routine is completely unnecessary and it would be better to write a middle-level one. Then as for the female protagonist, it's Li Keyao. She has so many scenes and the feel is good. There's not much to say. I just hope that since it's a fan-made original work, there's nothing wrong with it. But I don't want to see the original characters in this world, or other universes, or planets. Otherwise, to be honest, it'll be a bit of a drama, because this book is quite interesting. This plot development is hard, but fortunately the theme is extra points, it is not invincible, there are weakening and maintaining the original work. It can be understood in the early stage, but you can let it go in the later stage, but I still suggest that Super Saiyan should not be placed in the middle and late stages. After all, everyone doesn't like Super Saiyan, right? But it doesn't mean that it will come out very early, and then there is the heroine. Well, as a low-level warrior who knows nothing about emotions, I still suggest that after the language is written, the relationship can be patched up, otherwise the male and female protagonists will be together for a long time. Also, I hope it is a single female protagonist and not a harem.

So pretty! I have never seen anything like this before. Even if there is, it is systematic and uncomfortable to watch. The author should hurry up and type. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Come on! I really like it!

To ascend to a higher level of the universe, one must at least start with Shen San. [Sinister smile]

The character of the Saiyans is well written. It's not that they are invincible at the beginning, but their fighting strength remains strong after that. It would be nice to have more fist-fighting fights.

The protagonist is an aborigine who came to the world of immortality. It is true that the language barrier was not clear at first. By the way, have you considered letting No. 21 Come here in a similar way to the protagonist?

The writing is not bad, there is no bloody plot, it's a clean slate, I think it's pretty good, keep up the good work! !

It's not bad, it's pretty good to watch. It will be the first time it will be transformed into a Super Series later on. I hope the scene will be more shocking. It will be even better if it is under the spotlight [Adoration] [Adoration]

Looks good, looks good, come on