Awakening Tianhui at the Beginning, I Deduced the Method of Cultivating Immortals

I think the pace of the article is moderate, there are few typos, and there are almost no [likes] There are currently 3 men and 1 woman among the teammates. The male protagonist is a think tank and a part of the output. He lives in harmony and unity with his teammates and grows together. There is also a comfortable social distance between the male protagonist and the female, which makes people feel that it is a good relationship between partners. In my opinion, the article is very warm, with the passion of young people and the enthusiasm of defending the country. It does not have any poisonous points for me at the moment, nor does it step on any minefields. As a new book, there is relatively little updated content, and the number of readers is relatively small. The ratings have not been released yet, but I have seen that the author's updates are very efficient and stable. It is worth investing in and I look forward to future development. However, there is one biggest shortcoming, that is, the author has not updated it yet [making faces] and update it soon! ! ! Please update! ! ! [Attention][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Aren't you afraid of accidents when you put an intelligent and leadership person on the front line? Shouldn't this be the kind of thing that civil servants dare to do? Even if they go to the front line, they will learn from the commander's side. Why are they still rushing to the front line? Commanding a squad is not taught in the same way as commanding an army.

The writing is very good. The main theme is that the world does not develop enough abilities and energy. It is up to the protagonist to develop them. The combat power is reasonable. The demon world has obviously become a system. This kind of thing has not been fully developed and then faces a world of war. The technology tree has been crooked. The research on abilities has been limited to superpowers, which suppresses creativity in disguise. The lack of development in other aspects has led to insufficient exploration of superpowers. I say so much just to explain the rationality. Many people can't understand it. Then there is the discussion on the plot. For example, the protagonist is only a Sequence Five at the beginning. Some people must have doubts. Later, the performance is very strong. All doubts should be eliminated. But there are still seeds, but the development is not enough at present. Others are about expressing the power of the top ten powers in the Sequence. How about it (search thesaurus). Anyway, all kinds of powers can be expressed faster. Why is it so rare? Because the protagonist is in contact with the top group, but some people just can't figure it out. The various shaping of the world view must be shaped first. This kind of book does not need to worry about some details, but some still need to be shaped. Just look at the overall picture. Has the protagonist already entered the core? There is still too little shown so far, so there is no need to write in detail. Okay, I know what I said is not very clear, and I still have some detailed suggestions, but I am in a hurry now, so that's it.

It's pretty good. There's no obvious poison. Come on, author.

The writing is very good, the protagonist has very good abilities, and is recognized by the world as a serious time traveler. He is an intelligent type, which is rare. The only drawback is the dull part. Reminds me of the evil of human nature. I don't want to see the Free Federation that follows. Sorry, I'm leaving. Thanks to the author.