Comprehensive Comic: a Journey to Another World with a Shiny Template

I feel that the writing style is pretty good. As for OOC, I don't know. This book successfully made me realize one thing. I seem to have forgotten all about the ordinary profession that makes the world's strongest. It's better to say that when I saw the two words "pingzhi", I could think of the ordinary profession that makes the world's strongest. It already surprised me.

I changed my name to Jin Shining and traveled to another world. I can travel [face covering] and my personality is gone.

Not bad, not bad, really good~ As an old reader who has read the original novels and comics, I praise it. The plots are perfectly integrated. The protagonist's golden magic board has no problems in the world of ordinary people. Later, when the level is increased, it can be more unrestrained. FGO's power system is a dimensionality reduction attack on ordinary people. If you crush it, it will be OK. Don't forget to bulldoze the empire that treats demi-humans as slaves. In the original work, the high-ranking officials of the empire were not killed. I look forward to the follow-up plot. Come on, the author [learned it]

It's beautiful, but the author is still hiding the truth [blowing kiss]

It's okay, but some settings are problematic. Shooting a hundred heads is a noble phantom that is improved by martial arts, not the stone axe.

I hope that the protagonist can be more than Jin Shining in the future, I don't want the protagonist to just become Jin Shining.

Brother, I rejoice in the books you write.

Personally, I think it looks pretty and suits my taste.

It's very interesting. I just hope it doesn't stop updating. As for why I gave it four stars, it's because several of the other five-star books have stopped updating, so it's better to give it four stars. When I get 100 pictures, I'll change it to five stars.

There are too few equal-level fans, but this one is pretty good among them. The pace is not laggy. I hope I can maintain the level in the future.

The protagonist was taken away? My personality has also changed [smile]

Gives me the feeling of a sparkling character invading

The author must continue to update, don't stop updating [crying]

It's very good-looking, but the main character has been marinated by Shining, and it feels like Shining.

It's a rare piece of fan fiction with equal roles. I support it. What's even more surprising is that the author is the author of Meng Wang's book. It should not be discontinued.

It seems pretty good so far

Come on, hurry up and get to land

The author is faster

It's okay. This is the first time I've seen this fan. [Learned]

I think it looks pretty good, what do you think?

It's pretty good. Come on, author, don't give up.

If you add less "ya", more people will see it.

It's okay, I can only say, but there are too few fans with equal roles, and the plots are almost the same, I forgot about them [Thoughts]

Hurry up and update it, it's not enough [please update]

There aren't many people with equal jobs, they can be said to be the rarest among the rarest. What kind of airplanes do you need? Some of them look good, and at least the writing is okay, better than AI.

Not bad, not bad👍It would be better if there were dialogues between multiple characters

It's okay to pass the time, no big problems. Although there are no advantages, there are no disadvantages. In addition, there are very few people writing about this topic on Tomato, so it is still highly recommended.

The writing is very good, please don't stop updating it😐[Shy][Admiration]

This anime has very little fanfic, so it's just okay to watch.

Not bad, very pretty