Traveling Through *********

The plot is unreasonable, the jumps are too big, and it is forcibly fabricated. You have no outline plan for making up the story.

I feel anxious, but I don't know what I'm anxious about. Obviously it can develop slowly, but the protagonist comes up with various designs and takes the initiative to warm up to others' cold butts. The key is that no one can take it seriously [face covering]. There are also methods of doing business, poems that are pretentious, and they are all explained in one stroke. Even picking up girls is the same. Tao Yaoyao's brother was robbed, but she didn't report it to the official. She directly asked a powerless protagonist for help (here is a detailed description), and then in just one sentence, her brother was saved [face covering], and there was no plot. Even how the protagonist falls in love with Tao Yaoyao has no plot. It's only been three chapters. I thought the fourth chapter would be the finale. It's so urgent [facepalm]