A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Longevity Begins with the Spirit Gathering Array!

It's really super good-looking. There are no flaws in the characters or the plot. There is no heroine. I can't walk without seeing a woman. I have to save women at every turn. Those kind of flaws. The resources of cultivating immortals are not enough. Giving opportunities is not a master and apprentice, or a kinship relationship. It is also about saving people. There are no great opportunities. Originally, cultivating immortals is the kind of opportunity. How can it be once a month? The author is very stable in writing. The rating is really low. I got above 9 points.

I haven't commented for a long time, and I don't know if the author will read it. This book is the best one I have read this year. I have read it perfectly since I read the book Zhetian in 2016. I couldn't finish the fantasy in the past two days and started reading Mortals and the like. The author's character portrayal of the protagonist is also good, the ideas are very good, and the special Not only the part about killing the senior sister, but also the part about awakening the senior brother. When I saw the senior brother talking about his wind spirit root, I even thought that this part was ruined. I think his role is to tell the protagonist that sooner or later, if he does not become an immortal, he will become an immortal and no one cares about him in a hundred years. In this way, he can spur the protagonist to pursue the Tao. , But the author cleverly used his younger brother to write it, and it feels very well written. If you can read it, I have a little personal suggestion. Judging from the current development, the master may one day become the protagonist's Taoist companion, but the protagonist's current image is that of a selfish and single-minded Taoist image. I believe that many books This is why friends fell into the trap, so he shouldn't have this. If it does, it will definitely affect the protagonist under certain circumstances. Not to mention other things, resources must be divided. Writing his drama must be about a hero saving a beauty. This does not conform to the low-key style. In fact, you can write a disciple with high talent in Fu Dao Formation Dao. This is just a personal opinion. If it affects the outline, you can write it according to your own ideas. I am looking forward to your next writing. Come on👏

This novel can be said to be a real mortal novel. I feel it is better than the beginning of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. I finished it in half a day today. Why are good novels so short? It is not enough to read. Come on, author.

It is a rare good article to read. It can be seen that the author first read a lot of books, then gathered hundreds of experts and added his own ideas. The rhythm has ups and downs, and the plot has ups and downs. It is not a thrilling novel, nor is it an everyday novel behind closed doors. The protagonist is not a genius with no tricks, but he is not a Virgin or Teddy either. It is good to be decisive in killing. There is no unrealistic feeling of leapfrogging to kill an immortal, nor is there any invincible crushing at the same level. Every step is done at a steady pace. There are definitely flaws, not many, and they are all acceptable. The five-star rating is well deserved. Please continue to work hard, author! Fellow Taoists passing by, please stay and take a look inside!

Good book, good book, the author writes it really well. The protagonist has a firm heart as a guide, unlike other protagonists. I'm sorry, I'm not convinced. Two people came to me for no reason, and I beat you and other provocations for no reason. Anyway, so far, there is no heroine, which I think is very good (✪▽✪) After all, in the world of immortality, you have no resources or strength. If you want to find a Taoist companion, all principles are true, and all principles are the journey of the great road. Find a weak one. You need the support of the protagonist. Find a strong one. Why do you like the protagonist? For example, sometimes the heroine is not written, but the protagonist is written, but the writing is better.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good traditional novel about mortals cultivating immortality. The author also respects women. Even without even appearing, a female character describes their body in large quantities to attract others' attention. The protagonist concentrates on cultivating Taoism, is a man of great perseverance, and is not ignorant of human relationships. He cultivates immortality and has a wealthy couple. The protagonist has planned and fought for himself step by step from the four spiritual roots. Now he has established the foundation and the future is promising. Although the protagonist spends most of his time practicing hard, he is not unsophisticated. Although most of the time he is indifferent for the sake of the road, he also has his own bottom line. He will help people he is familiar with and people who have helped him when he is able. He is also merciless towards enemies. I quite like this kind of protagonist. The author has a good sense of balance. He is neither a virgin nor a completely heartless person.

It looks good, it's really good, it has a few flaws, but this book is ranked in the top ten on Tomato. If it continues, it can create a classic. After all, there are almost no novels about immortality based on the formation of formations on Tomato 👍👍👍

It's a masterpiece among the mortals. It doesn't have too many bad points. It was just average before, but now it's slowly getting better. I like the character of the protagonist. He's cautious but not a virgin. The author must write it down. We will accompany the protagonist to slowly walk through the road to immortality.

To be honest, she looks better than a mortal! At least for now, his personality and behavior are good! If there is such quality in the future, I dare say it will be among the best in tomatoes. Come on author! (You don't have to accept my little suggestion. Why don't you arrange a few women? You don't have to have a heroine. It's everyone's wish to cultivate immortality for immortality, but it's understandable that there is no heroine for bondage. On the road to immortality, you don't even have the desire for women, right!) This is just the desire that we men should have, isn't it? But Are there any articles of this quality for mortals cultivating immortals here? Family members are OK too. Please recommend me. Thank you fellow Taoists.

I have read so many novels about cultivating immortals, and this one is more to my liking. It is step-by-step, step-by-step, without excessive cheating. It is more reasonable, ruthless when it should be, and humanistic sophistication when it should be. There are dangers, strategies, tolerance, decisiveness, and planning. IQ is online, I can give it 9.3 Points, but it's really uncomfortable to watch it being taken off the shelves.