The Eldest Brother Is Jealous, and the Buddhist Anchor Is Forced to Carry Water

For the setting, I give it one more point. The writing style is not attractive enough and gives me the feeling of a running account. The words used in some places only appear twice, which gives people the feeling of a lot of repetition. At the same time, the character design is not full and three-dimensional enough, and the heroine is too blunt or stiff. The rest of the characters feel too fake, and the people left in the live broadcast room seem too inexplicable from the reader's perspective. However, it doesn't look like there are any surprises at the moment. If there are any later, I will revise the review. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. You are describing and telling a story through words, rather than writing for the sake of writing. To make the characters come alive, you need to set up and complete the frame of the story. The author's writing style and choice of words and sentences still have a lot of room for improvement. The writing is dull and boring. It can be read by those who are not picky about writing style. It is suitable for newcomers. The pronouns change a bit frequently, there are too many sick sentences, the descriptions look unnatural, and the heroine doesn't look like she has experienced a lot. It's true that memories will disappear, but experiences and traces left in the brain and subconscious will not disappear. What's more, the heroine still looks like a newcomer when she comes to the group broadcast, as if she has never experienced anything. The world background framework is not set up, there is not much description of the surrounding environment, the characters are still too pale, and some settings and plots in the plot almost make me feel like I am reading an ancient novel. I wanted to keep reading, but it really didn't appeal to me, so I skipped to the back, thinking that the description and the heroine would improve, but I didn't see what I wanted to see.

It's very interesting to watch, and it's very novel and different. Why are so few people watching it? The author's writing style is also very good, and the character creation is also very distinct [Thinking] I'm really looking forward to the group broadcast plot in the future. There are few group broadcast articles, and there are even fewer good group broadcast articles [I'm about to cry] Come on, come on, it's great [Admiration] What's going on with this 6.6 Score? [Fear] It's obviously very good. Why? I really like this book. Is it because it will be transferred to the group broadcast later? But there are really too few good group broadcast articles. I really need this kind of spiritual food. Come on [please update]

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The plot of the anchor articles is relatively novel. Some of the anchor articles I have read before are usually sweet articles, sweet from beginning to end. The novelty of this one is that it is quite sweet at the beginning, but after the public opinion storm, it feels like a sour article. The line The plot is okay online, but it's more obvious offline. Some of the narrations of Yan Chuye's parents feel quite magical. The overall writing style is relatively green and suitable for novices. What makes me most happy is that Brother 34 has a solo episode at the end, which is complete⌯>ᴗo⌯ .ᐟ.ᐟ

It turns out it was you. You were caught by the system to do a task and came back to live broadcast. I forgot

Good-looking, Yuanyuan is very cute, I like [flying kisses][flying kisses][flying kisses]

Stock up more and see again.

Wow! Where did you escape as an elf? So pretty~👼

Baby Yuanbao is so lovable, and I'm so happy to see such a well-portrayed heroine! I like both Yuanbao and Xuanbao very much, and I hope the sisters will always shine together. I'm really looking forward to seeing the plot introduced. Although I think Yuan Bao will be sad if everyone is separated due to a misunderstanding, I'm also looking forward to everyone's reunion in the future. The process of growth will inevitably have some twists and turns. I really look forward to what kind of dazzling light Yuanbao will shine when he stands on the live broadcast stage again after several years of silent growth! I also really want to see Xuan Bao become a big star, and whether his straight male brother will become an e-sports male god in the future.

Updates were discontinued after being forwarded to the group broadcast, so I'll deduct one ⭐ [I'm about to cry] The plot of the solo broadcast is quite comfortable, but the gangsters of the group broadcast suddenly pounce on me, which makes me confused as I have never seen it ⚆⚆ა It's just that it's really fun to make money and do cp [laughing]

It's great, looking forward to the next episode

Like it like it like it🥰

It's quite interesting, maybe because there aren't many unfinished chapters so few people read it.

I love the teacher's quick updates so much [cool][cool][cool] Don't fall asleep and wake up to update [snicker][snicker][snicker]

I really like it so far. I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot development. I can't wait for the author to update 5 chapters a day. It's over. Now I'm in a state where I want to watch but don't dare to watch it. I want to directly stock up on the group broadcast. I like ˗ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗, it's great to watch, I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it, the author is great, I wish more people can see it-2025.2.20

I don't know how to put it, but it's just beautiful. I love watching it.

Beautiful, thumbs up to the hard-working author

I quite like 34, but it's such a pity that it's not with me because I can't sleep enough! ! ! My heart is broken[cry][cry][cry]

It looks good😊 but it's not good enough [smile][smile]

The plot touches people's hearts! Very nice! ! !

Your writing is okay, keep up the good work

It looks good, I feel very good-looking [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Super pretty! ! Recommended

It looks good, I love watching it, and I still want to watch it👀

Not bad, okay

Ah ah ah, this book is so beautiful, why hasn't anyone discovered it?

The author's writing is very good. I can't wait for the update to read @ Fantong's rice. Great work for the author.

It looks good. When will the author update it? I want to see the plot below.

It's beautiful, but I can't get enough of it. When will it be finished? I want to watch the rest.

It's super good-looking, but there are so few updates. It's tied [crying][crying]