I Am the First Fire Who Crossed the Border?

Some time ago, I was looking for a second book of Dharma Ring. I think this one is the best one I have ever read. Although some of the plots are a bit watery, the magnanimity and courage of the king are really enjoyable to read. The story is really amazing. The information the author consulted also shows the initial prosperity of Hidetaka Miyazaki's works and the sadness of decline brought by time, the sadness of the ancient king, and the courage of the new king. This is also my favorite and most hoped-for plot in Ying Gao's works and self-splicing. The author praises it! I hope more people will read your book! "There is fire in front of you, witness the King of Fire, and praise the sun!" (Praise from Wanwan residents)

This book is indeed a top-notch work among Circle of Magic fans. I personally think it is on par with the Elden Sword Master on Shuke. It can be seen that many of the characters in this book are borrowed from that book, and the author is most likely a book lover. It's quite similar to the book "Juggernaut". Author, please don't make the story about the protagonist rescuing someone from an accident at home. If you do, just complete the plot in one go. Otherwise, don't blame me, Aruba. If it were really written like this, it would not be a reference. The characters are similar, the plot is similar, and the overall rhythm is also similar. It would be a bit difficult to judge if the next plot sequence is that the protagonist plots to kill Xiao Ge, and then becomes famous and attracts witches, and even Vic's witch is Alicia who was saved before, and fights La Tarn. I can accept your reference. After all, that book was backstabbed by the DLC. Yours was written after the DLC, but I really can't accept it being exactly the same. Think carefully about the rhythm, and it will be more comfortable to watch before resurrection.

A man and a woman recognized by the world, no need to say more

I finished reading the book offline. It is another good hair ring fanfic that I must support. It still doesn't taste good to read. Various descriptions and embellishments are enough but not enough emotion. It's like it's tangible but not soulful. Battles and conversations are all written in one line. It's obviously not enough to just add a description of the environment. Sometimes the right "pause" can make the subsequent emotions more intense.

Invincible and beautiful, I was so excited that I went to the account and beat up Valkyrie and then came back to death and continued watching.

It's pretty good. As long as it doesn't crash, it will definitely be considered the top book among Laotouhuan fans. I don't understand what kind of mentality was behind those Dark Souls and Laotouhuan funny books. There are also "Don't be an eunuch, don't be an eunuch, don't be an eunuch." This is a big deal, but don't be a pigeon.

This book is well written and has no flaws. It is difficult to find another well-written Dharma Ring fanfic on Tomato. Even if this book is placed on other platforms, it is still a top-notch Dharma Ring fanfic. It is worth reading for Dharma Ring fans. Tomato rarely writes fanfics about Ring of Magic. Ring of Magic is a soul-based game with high play requirements, and the fan audience is not large, so the fan audience of Ring of Magic is even more niche, so the book traffic will not be too high. At present, the number of readers to read this book is not very large every day. Although there are only a few people, everyone has been supporting the author. I hope that more people will discover this book in the future, and I also hope that the author will get better and better.

Five points is a perfect score. The quality is probably comparable to that of Mao Zhan. And the protagonist's entry point is also very novel. The only drawback is that there are too few [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Five stars, it completes my view of the world of this game. I doubted the details at first, but after entering the game, it turned out to be exactly what the author wrote [Like]

It is very well written in the Dharma Ring fanfic. The quality is good and it is very good. I hope the author can continue to write it.

There are a lot of them, some are not. Just collecting Marika is worth five stars. The 3D area has more characters from the same fandom than all the other ring characters combined. I don't know how other people can endure it.

Let me give everyone a reminder that the protagonist is relatively weak in the early stage. Basically, apart from the ultimate martial arts, Chuhuo has nothing to offer. It wasn't until he returned as a fader that he started to take off, and he became more and more beautiful later on.

The content is pretty good, there are many female protagonists, so those who like single female protagonists can avoid this.

Objectively speaking, I think this is a better written fanfic of Dharma Ring. This emotional description is relatively detailed, including the world view and the competition between various forces. The male protagonist is not a casual person who just meets one after another, even though there are multiple female protagonists. Like(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It looks good, and as a cloud player, I enjoy watching it.

A good book, the readers are mainly insiders. For those familiar with the Souls series, it should be pretty good. But if you are like me and are not familiar with it and are just curious, the first half before you become a fading person is very good, and the pace is just right for the reader to know who is who. But the road to becoming a king later on, to be honest, the pace is a bit fast, and it is a bit difficult for outsiders to understand. There are many characters and it is easy to pass by, but it should not be a problem for insiders.

This is my first time writing, and it is very interesting. Really, I have read a lot of novels, and I basically guessed the follow-up after reading half of it. I really followed the updates every day to read this one. Come on, author [shy][laugh] It's really beautiful. Why is the rating not higher than 9? Upvote it so that more people can see it and let the platform give the author lots of gold coins and then update it hard.

Come on, author! There are really few good books on Dharma Circle. This one has great potential. Don't be a eunuch. The only potential Dharma Ring fanfic I've read before was Eunuch.

It's good to watch [I learned it], the author is very knowledgeable, and I'm really looking forward to the next plot.

The second book to be finished (the others are still being serialized). This book, how should I put it, has the feeling of an epic version. The front is a normal and slow rise, and the back is the domination of the king. It looks good, but maybe 90% of it is fighting? So it may feel a bit boring and boring, but it feels good to open up new maps step by step.

This is another Dharma Ring fanfic worth reading. This book is not only a Dharma Ring fanfic, but even on the entire book site, there are not many that can compare with it in terms of endurance.

In fact, it's pretty good. It's of this quality on Tomato. But because it's a Ring of Magic fandom, the audience itself is small. If you want to watch it comfortably, you have to at least have a little understanding of it, not just through the game. But I still recommend it. It would be much better if you read it with a little background story.

A very potential fan of Elden's Ring, go to the bookshelf to gain weight and then read [top post]

Finally I have a satisfactory Dharma Ring fanfic, let's give it a look first

It should be a potentially good book. The author's writing is online, and the plot is still unfolding. Looking forward to further developments. Also, I'm looking forward to the love line hehe

This is one of the better Dharma Ring fanfics I have ever seen on Tomato.

It's not brainless, the writing is natural and smooth, it's very comfortable to watch, the plot is in line with the original work, the pace is slow, it's an excellent old head ring fan [like]

Okay, it's an old ring. Is it my imagination? I always feel that some details and general plot arrangements are very similar to the Elden Sword Master on a certain cat. I feel familiar when I read it.

It's okay, but some chapters are really hard to understand and feel like there are some plot breaks, maybe some deletions? I can't see the prelude to that kind of deletion.

Evaluation, non-toxic and harmless, a recommended Elden Circle plot fan novel. It's just a little bit less, ૮ ºﻌºა