At the Beginning, Iron Sand Palm Is a Success, and You Can Take Fatty Hu Flying!

It's over, let's comment on ourselves [face covering] The plot at the beginning is very fast, and the writing is really not satisfactory. The newcomers' writing is not good, so everyone can avoid the pitfalls. Later I thought it was okay, and the ending was happy [face covering] If I were to rate myself, it would be considered below the passing line, although I gave myself five stars [laughing]

It is quite a complete book. Although there are some breaks and the hooks are relatively large, hahaha, the whole content is more internally logical and makes sense. This has surpassed 95% of novels. This rating is too low. 9 Points is possible. If it is longer and the hooks are smaller, it can be given higher. Thank you! Go read the author's new book!

This is a high-quality fanfic, the protagonist has a very comfortable personality, and the character descriptions are lifelike! ! ! The plot is also very exciting. The only pity is that it is a bit short and not enough to watch, but what can I say, I have almost written what should be written. But I haven't been to the Qinling Sacred Tree yet! ! Did the author forget? ? ?

It's been a long time since I've finished reading a novel [laughter] I guess I haven't read this subject in many years. It's pretty good. These bosses feel like false gods [laughter] Although they were born at the beginning of the world, they always feel like defective products. According to ancient mythological novels, the gods in China are definitely higher in latitude and space than these awesome ones. These monsters can only survive in this time and space, and are wretched and insignificant on the earth. [Sinister smile]

I started reading it on May Day, and it was a whim at the beginning. I discovered this fanfic halfway through reading the original Ghost Blowing Deng. Although the ending was a bit rushed, it was quite imaginative and relieved me of many regrets. I also hope that Lao Hu and the others can live happily, haha. The summary combines a variety of stories and is worth a read.

It is very consistent with the original work of Tomb Raider Notes, especially the part about the conjecture about the God of Bangchui at the end. But I feel that the existence behind the bronze door is from the sky, and the nameless existence of the underground dragon vein is native to the earth. I remember that there is an interview video with my third uncle that talks about it.

The author is full of sincerity and highly interactive. Without the tomb robbing part, I would give it 80 points. The fat man in the tomb robbing part was a little separated, and somehow his relationship was deeper than that of Lao Hu and Lao Han. The tomb robbing part was also written in a hurry, and I was anxious to finish it. If I had written it slowly, I would have been willing to get to at least 500 chapters. The part that made me feel baffled for the first time was saving Uncle Ming. Uncle Ming is the NPC who unfolds the story. The original character was not likable, but the book is still not likable. Maybe it was to express Han Zhen's friendship or to show the status of the green forest boss, or to lay the groundwork for saving the Fatty and the three several times? The author has grown up very quickly, and the writing is getting better and better. Professor Sun and Quetzalcoatl are well written, and the rescue by Lao Hu and Sima Hui at the end is also very cute. The author could be more relaxed. As for the author's point that the beginning is not good, apart from the fact that Han Zhen defined it as time travel at the beginning, it didn't appeal to me (of course the ending is full circle). The author's writing style is relatively simple. A sincere novel by a sincere author is very attractive to me. Lao Han is really a lovely person, a person with bottom line, cleverness, strength and love. In the later stage, he was a little kidnapped by the fat man's brotherhood. If possible, I hope he can feel more comfortable. Maybe one day, the author can write a "Biography of Old Han". I am looking forward to the author's next book, and finally I hope the author will get better and better. As for fan fiction, if the traffic and income are not too much, the author is already very good. I hope the author hopes that Lao Han can "May you smile until the end of the world and return to the youth of drunkenness".

I finished reading Chapter 57 and it was pretty good. It's good not to procrastinate, and it's good not to be ambiguous. Finished reading. .

It looks pretty good at the moment. It's not completely moved. It's original by the author. I hope the eunuch protagonist doesn't hang too high.

It's almost like a fast-forward version of the original work with some personal additions... If it could be expanded, it would score 8 points, and now it's about 6.5 Points.

The parts of the original work that I haven't seen are simply too exciting. I can't imagine how exciting the original work is.

There are a lot of flaws in the front, but the back looks pretty good.

It looks good, but can't Iron Palm continue to be upgraded? The end?

The reason for hitting 4 hearts is that you are not original. The author writes slowly, don't be anxious, and don't worry about the roots. Make a good outline at the end and write a fuller story.

After absorbing the power of entropy, your strength will change qualitatively.

It's very interesting to watch. Come on, author. Each character fits his or her own personality. The pace is fast. It's very enjoyable to watch. This is the first tomb robber fanfic that I can read from beginning to end. The characterizations are very consistent with the characters' personalities, and the plot is smooth. Although many of them are written in one stroke, it does not affect the reading experience. In fact, I have always wanted to read the story of Chen Yulou. Although Chen Yulou debuted at the peak and was also his last glory, the previous stories can also be conceived. There will be many stories from the time when he took in the mute Kunlun slave. The author can write more details and slowly move the plot to Pingshan and Partridge Sentohui. Together, the protagonist can be Chen Yulou through his soul, or he can be the captain who touches gold. At that time, he touched gold, unloaded mountains, moved mountains, and traveled from Pingshan Mountain in western Hunan to the Tomb of King Xian in Yunnan, Blackwater City in the Desert, Jingjue Ancient City, Kunlun Seven-story Demon Pagoda, and many other stories. At that time, there was also the old Jiumen Zhang Dafo, many wonderful stories . I hope the author can come up with it as soon as possible.

Not bad, pretty good-looking.

It's great to watch, and the plot is exciting.

It's okay, but the details on the front are lacking or missing.

Why did it end so quickly? I haven't finished watching it yet.

Excellent book, the rating is too low now, at least 9.5 Points

Yes, it makes up for the strongest combat power in the early, middle and late stages. Ha ha.

It's a really good book, the only drawback is that it's a little short and not enough to read.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, I love watching this kind of thing

Very well written. Really heard the latest in one breath.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! So pretty

Classic male videos Start a fight from the bottom of the mountain practice practice midway The ending is invincible

Super super super beautiful, highly recommended! I especially like the characters in the book who make jokes, laugh, curse, and talk nonsense. It's great. Like it! !

Very good, the plot is very harmonious

The pace of writing was a little faster in the early stage, but I got a good grasp later on [Like] Friends who are in the book world can check it out.