As They Grew Older, the Daughters Discovered That Their Father Was a Cute Girl

Selling Dog Meat by Selling Sheep's Head, It's Selling Good, Selling It's Wonderful, Hahahaha, Now I've read more than 100 chapters and the plot really begins. Although it's selling dog meat by selling sheep's head, I approve of this book

This book by the author is much better than the previous one. I can read it logically and comfortably. I can accept it as well. In short, it is a good book if it ends well [Cool] (Purely my subjective opinion, if there is anything wrong, you are right [cool])

What a shame, the senior Lily Chef is already excited and excited!

It's beautiful, I love it, I want to see it, Master Mengbei❤️I want it more❤️

I have been chasing it for a while. At first, it was based on the title of the book, but I didn't expect that the author's writing was so good. The plot is very exciting and the characters are well portrayed, especially Mushroom and Xiaoqi. One is a perfect description of the dependence of a child, and the other is a high-level performance and portrayal of the princess when she is suddenly hunted down. It's really good, I give it five stars.

I can only say that this writing style impressed me. Although I haven't read much of it yet, the development in the first few chapters is completely at the level of a masterpiece. I feel that giving it five stars is not excessive at all. I will wait and see how the rating is. First of all, the description of the time travel from the perspective of the protagonist is very realistic, and the golden finger is just right. It does not make people feel unreal and boring when they are directly invincible. There is a lot of room for growth. The wandering in the beginning has a tense atmosphere. The world view is slowly revealed. Redemption may be the main line, but with the change of the protagonist's gender as the title, I hope that the follow-up plot can make people's eyes shine. If the world view before and after time travel can be connected in the end, the system will be perfect, and the overall stability can be called a masterpiece. I've just read the latest chapter. The word count is too small, so I can't tell what's going on. But it feels pretty good. The pace of development is relatively slow, and it has a classic feel that has been narrated. The atmosphere of time-traveling rivers and lakes is also slowly coming out. I hope that the subsequent plot will live up to expectations.

It's a very interesting change, and the reason why the protagonist changed really made me happy. "Eat Melon" is not a work that pays special attention to sugar and knives. It is more reflected in the warmth and growth of family relationships. It can be said to be a very personalized work. The plot development is very well controlled, and the narrative is not sluggish or compact. After reading the author's two books, I can only say that the author is really good at controlling relaxation. The character creation is also very successful. Each character has its own characteristics and reflects the different charms of each girl in various aspects. However, the characters added later are slightly thin, but the flaws are not concealed. It's just that the author buried the foreshadowing too lightly. Maybe it was my hindsight or the author's inspiration from reading netizens' comments. A lot of the content was predicted in advance. In the later stage, I only had the feeling of "oh, it's true", without the feeling of enlightenment and enlightenment. Some of the content was not completed appropriately. It is logically acceptable but not perfect. It can be felt that the author wanted to create a grand scene in the ending part, but with all due respect, the soothing writing style in the early part of the book is really not suitable for this kind of narrative method. Fortunately, the original writing style is restored later, which can be said to be a seasoning, which is refreshing.

It's a good read. I've read too many novels in which the protagonists engage in intrigues, kill, and set fires for profit, and I feel bad all over. I just read this novel to clear my mind. The novels I mentioned above all scored upwards of 89 or 9, but the author's book only scored 7, so I must support it. I hope that readers who like to see the protagonist "kill decisively" can be merciful. Whether the protagonist is a virgin or not is just a different audience and cannot be a criterion for judging whether a novel is excellent. I also hope more people like me can read this novel

It's very interesting. Su Qi took in four girls with different personalities in a different world. The only flaw is that the Western Region chapter is too boring. Xiaoqi's regaining the throne also ended hastily. Murong Xu, the big boss, was easily eliminated. The plot is not exciting enough. I hope it can be supplemented in the extra chapter [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

It's interesting among tomatoes. I suggest the author update it quickly, otherwise it will be refined in an instant [laughter]

In the first volume, the protagonist's combat power is not very high, and fortune telling requires money. The overall plot is okay. In the early stage, I don't know why the poster came out and ignored the protagonist and went home directly. The poster's role is gone. It seems that it was decided not to write it at the last moment. It is difficult to stretch the epic transition without a dividing line. The part where Xiaochun stabs someone is a bit strange in the plot. Generally speaking, it is acceptable. I prefer the writing style and have the desire to read further. In the second volume, there are always transitions with unclear meanings and small stories with unclear meanings... Although dividing lines are added. A lot of space is taken up on the protagonist's side, and the viewing is worse than the first volume. The gl text is filled with a large BG plot. We fell in love with each other on the first day we met. We wrote the BG in one go. We also repeatedly used epic transitions. After writing a BG, we would jump back to the protagonist group, and then jump back again every once in a while, which created a strong sense of fragmentation. To sum up the first and second volumes, there is no foreshadowing in many places. There is no reason, and it is impossible to tell what the purpose of this paragraph is. Anyway, the protagonist is very cute, but it is strange that many supporting characters have so many scenes. In short, the plot and characterization need to be improved, but there are no major problems in other aspects. In short, I have no desire to continue reading the second volume. I wish the author better and better, and see you again.

The writing style is brisk, the content is easy to understand, and the character of the protagonist is easy to understand. Although it is a system novel, there are many interactions with the characters in the book, unlike the other thirds where they all interact with the system. Good reviews

Let's give it a good review first. It looks okay from the beginning and can be read as a sweet article. The author has a knife, as long as she is an immortal girl, otherwise I will give you seven stars [laughing evilly]

The writing is good, and the plot is okay, but the ending feels a bit abrupt, and I feel it could be written more. I think the author is very good at handling the growth and changes of the characters, and can clearly express the growth process of the characters (Xiao Qi, I think the changes from before and after are very connected and natural, although Xiao Qi really couldn't understand it at the beginning)

Simply the most perfect book I have ever read. First of all, I would like to thank Su Qi for his company for half a year. The characters are all vivid, and the personality and plot are very suitable for the kind of hermit boss and super lolita. Looking back now, the story of Su Qi and the Nursery is still vivid in my mind. Their 11-year story, watching everyone grow from a little kid into a tall and graceful girl, feels a little emotional. I originally opened the book with the intention of reading it casually, but I didn't expect that it would leave so many unforgettable memories.

It's okay, the material selection is very novel, and the writing style is okay, but the characters are not well drawn, probably because the number of words has not been increased yet, and the update speed must be praised. I suspect the author wrote it based on the plot of Death by Hungry: A Thousand Miles Journey in the Late Ming Dynasty [smile]

For me, it was quite satisfactory. I was able to read it because I happened to be looking for Bianbaiwen recently. The main character, Da Shanren, happened to fit the type of protagonist I like. There really weren't any big surprises. The time, place and people were perfect. First of all, I would like to praise from the reader's perspective. The author of this book should be very attentive. It can be seen that he really wanted to set up the plot and wrote it carefully. The plot is not formulaic. The heroines except Su Xi are well shaped (I just finished the first volume). The protagonists, Xiao Qi and Mushroom are portrayed with flesh and blood, and they can be easily involved. Let's start with the shortcomings. The first thing is that the pace of this book is too slow. Of course, the character portrayal is very successful, but I continued to read this book when there was really nothing to read. Otherwise, he would continue to eat dust on my bookshelf. Then there was the fake sacrifice of the mushroom at the end of the first volume. To be honest, I didn't feel any sadness at all. Of course, there may be a problem with the author's writing style and he couldn't relate to it at all (it may also be my problem). Finally, cheers to the author. The writing of this book is still good. With the experience of this book, it should be more convenient to start a book next time. Come on.

I personally like this kind of subject matter, it's very beautiful Referring to jobless reincarnation, the protagonist's story does not need to be in the fourth dimension of the world. Growth can be reflected by many means, including rebirth, salvation, and time retrieval. Including the growth of several heroines, each should have its own story. This part is described through different world lines, but a certain growth of the original world is missing. But everyone does not need to rely too much on Su's care. A kind of logical temporary growth is the eternal reunion.

Good-looking, rich and complete content, clear logic, ups and downs of the plot, full of drama; clear theme, clues throughout the text. Appropriate foreshadowing; vivid characters, distinctive characteristics, appropriate psychological description; attracting readers' interest in reading for two and a half years [Sending Hearts] It's nice to watch, and the content is exciting, but where can I watch the extras [crying]

I like the writing very much, the characters have distinct personalities, the plot is also exciting, there are many pitfalls, and I am full of expectations. Let me tell you a little bit about my opinion, it is Han's disappearance. It seems to me that Han's relationship with the protagonist group is not that good. I feel that the protagonist's behavior due to Han's disappearance is too much. I did not see in the previous article that their relationship is as good as this. By the way, this part is quite similar to Dragon Clan, but Chu and Lu's fateful friendship is not comparable to that of Han and the protagonist. The latest chapter is 117 when this paragraph is posted, so please pay attention to its effectiveness when reading. Only represents personal views, rational discussion

When I read this book, it already had about a million words. Now I have read the third volume. The whole book feels very good to me. I feel like it is a redemption that saves a yandere but ends up being locked up in a dark room? (That's what I say but I haven't seen what I want to see.) The last part that makes me feel controversial is the part where the protagonist rescues the little princess who is being married. To use a game analogy, this is a dispensable branch line. The player (the protagonist) can choose to ignore or rescue the NPC (the little princess). Either act from the beginning and save people until the end; or just ignore it and keep out of sight (this option is not in line with the character of the protagonist). But the author chose to save it after the fact. The author spent more space than other NPCs describing the little princess, and then ended up like this. From a commercial perspective, it may be thankless. After all, I saw that there were obviously fewer paragraphs in the later chapters. Although it was later added that the entanglement and confusion stemming from the protagonist, the logic of "I don't want to be superior because I save people, so I think I am the savior of others" has been slow to move... Originally, "marriage" is a kind of history that induces negative psychology, and Shuangwen failed to stop it. This is enough for some people to put some labels on the author. It can only be said that the author has his own opinions and experiences. Overall, it was a very pleasant reading experience, and the author's writing style also made me feel comfortable reading it. It's just that I've read the third volume and still haven't seen what I wanted to see. I started writing about my feelings from the beginning of the world. When do I fast forward to the little dark room?

It's good-looking, very comfortable, and there are some embarrassing moments in the book. It's a pity that there is still an ending day. I started catching up from last week to now, and it ended so quickly. Saibo lost his love... Although the ending of the article is not very satisfactory, it can be regarded as letting everyone have a departure that belongs to them, and their feelings are over.

It looks good, please train the author so that he can't be offended, and then keep updating [laughter]

What can I say, I still think it looks pretty good. As a novel, the setting of hiding the gender of the protagonist is quite novel. Each character is well portrayed, but the emotional line is not handled well, and many pitfalls are not filled in well. The final ending is still too sloppy, and the extras are not very good at making up for it. Overall, there is room for improvement. Come on.

Well, the five stars come from here: "In the huge net intertwined by countless "ifs", he was like a nimble butterfly, lightly and accurately catching the slightest loophole." He didn't look at her with lustful eyes, he was like a friend or elder to ordinary people. He asks about your past and tries to relate to you. "I'd like to hear the details." Even though Lingzi hated Wang Ren, he even hated him enough to eat him. But she had to admit that Wang Ren's words were like a steel nail that pierced her heart. It turns out... People have classes! It turns out that a prostitute like her really doesn't deserve any power! Thinking of this, Lingzi looked at the indifferent Su Qi and suddenly felt a little cold.

The writing is very delicate, and the plot is well connected, especially the protagonist group's image is very distinct. It's okay if the plot is slower, so just make it longer. Anyway, I like to watch [cool][cool][cool]

Well, how to put it, I feel that this book is impeccable in its handling of details and foreshadowing, and its portrayal of the character shows that this character is not actually one-sided, and expresses the character's experience in many aspects, creating his current character. This kind of portrayal is as natural as storytelling. Makes people feel comfortable while reading. Overall, this book can be considered to be relatively high-end in terms of characterization.

It's not bad. Some of the plots really make people unresponsive. I hope there's more foreshadowing, but I hope the name won't be abandoned in the future. "Su Mushroom" [thought] [top post] It's okay, the subject matter is very attractive

Not bad, at least the interaction between the protagonist and the mushroom is quite sweet The system ability of 666 can imprison any heaven-defying poison, and it is also "surrender or die". If the plot is not smooth, don't force it. As long as there is some logic, in the moment before the poison is inserted, isn't it good to use the instant? You just want to be left there, right? Okay, okay, I came back and changed it again, I was almost pissed off.

As for this book, the plot is a little unexpected. The appearance of Su Qi and the truth about the world later explain the origin of the system to a certain extent. Of course, the author can actually use this to write something else instead of just explaining the origin of the system. The images of Gu Wu and Xiao Qi are relatively full and three-dimensional, while Su tide and others are slightly less well portrayed. But overall, the supporting characters and protagonists are portrayed quite well, especially Su Qi's mentality and tangled contradictions towards the people in the Nursery. The overall plot is a little confusing in the first volume, but it is explained very well later on. Only the protagonist's situation in the first volume is more dangerous and the atmosphere is more depressing. The subsequent volumes become more relaxed due to the strength of the protagonist, and of course there are some knives interspersed. Overall, the author's writing is quite good, and it has penetrated into my heart [eating melon]