[Big Heroine Series] [Double Protagonist] [Growth Type]
In the vast universe, there is a blue planet of life.
The Blue Star mutates and the spiritual energy revives. Many people on the Blue Star have various powers. They are called spiritual warriors.
The heroine Bai Xinyan detected a rare super S-level talent in the genetic talent level test, but she failed to awaken any powers.
"So what if I don't have superpowers? I'm still invincible!"
Across the world, standing at the top of the universe.
In the new era, someone will surely stand up and write a new chapter!
Reader comments
Personally, I think it's okay. It's a slow-moving novel after all, but some plots are too blunt. Although the heroine has grown up since she was a child, some parts are not handled properly, such as:
1. The heroine has a strong sense of responsibility and prefers to keep it all by herself. This is not good. After all, she is the eldest heroine. It is normal to want to highlight her power, but she can also rely on her teammates appropriately and not have to do many things by herself. It takes a period of growth and change (for example, during the period when entering the college entrance examination spiritual void) , knowing that there is a person in front of you who has malicious intentions towards you, you should be careful and guard against it. When you run away, you should not go to the bottom of the story. In the end, you will be pushed into the mouth of a strange beast by that person. The heroine is not mature enough and needs to grow up, especially in this dangerous world. She has the ability to protect herself. She hopes to be able to see through the way others treat her in time)
2. Some plots were not handled well, and I hope they can be improved in the future (for example, when I opened the door to Ye's house and was slapped by someone else when I opened the door knowing that I had a perceptual ability, I was very angry. Even if the villain wanted to slap, the heroine should have known about it and shouldn't have been caught off guard; also There was that game, when I had to use the same skills as Yang Rui, but I hurt my teammates. To be honest, I didn't handle it well, and I ran directly to Kyoto afterwards. The plot transition was rather stiff. After all, the heroine needs to grow up. I hope that the heroine's awareness can be better developed in the future)
3. Even if it is a female channel, I still hope that the villain will not be so impulsive and try to have some intelligence and thinking of his own (some villains often beat up the heroine without investigating the identity of the heroine, which is not appropriate. To be honest, if the heroine does not have a golden finger and his master to protect him, he will be easily harmed by the villain, so I hope that the female author can handle such situations carefully in the future)
Finally, let me make a small summary: the above opinions are personal opinions, and there has been a shortage of books recently. In addition, the author is a novice, and the writing style is not bad. I can still read it. I hope the author can use my suggestions to help the heroine grow better. The subsequent plot can be written with a little ups and downs, but it is not forced. It can be written according to the author's own strength and order. Finally, it is not easy for the author to write books, so I will give you a five-star encouragement. I hope the author will get better and better in the future, [Like] [Like] [Like]
Personally, I think it's okay. It's a slow-moving novel after all, but some plots are too blunt. Although the heroine has grown up since she was a child, some parts are not handled properly, such as: 1. The heroine has a strong sense of responsibility and prefers to keep it all by herself. This is not good. After all, she is the eldest heroine. It is normal to want to highlight her power, but she can also rely on her teammates appropriately and not have to do many things by herself. It takes a period of growth and change (for example, during the period when entering the college entrance examination spiritual void) , knowing that there is a person in front of you who has malicious intentions towards you, you should be careful and guard against it. When you run away, you should not go to the bottom of the story. In the end, you will be pushed into the mouth of a strange beast by that person. The heroine is not mature enough and needs to grow up, especially in this dangerous world. She has the ability to protect herself. She hopes to be able to see through the way others treat her in time) 2. Some plots were not handled well, and I hope they can be improved in the future (for example, when I opened the door to Ye's house and was slapped by someone else when I opened the door knowing that I had a perceptual ability, I was very angry. Even if the villain wanted to slap, the heroine should have known about it and shouldn't have been caught off guard; also There was that game, when I had to use the same skills as Yang Rui, but I hurt my teammates. To be honest, I didn't handle it well, and I ran directly to Kyoto afterwards. The plot transition was rather stiff. After all, the heroine needs to grow up. I hope that the heroine's awareness can be better developed in the future) 3. Even if it is a female channel, I still hope that the villain will not be so impulsive and try to have some intelligence and thinking of his own (some villains often beat up the heroine without investigating the identity of the heroine, which is not appropriate. To be honest, if the heroine does not have a golden finger and his master to protect him, he will be easily harmed by the villain, so I hope that the female author can handle such situations carefully in the future) Finally, let me make a small summary: the above opinions are personal opinions, and there has been a shortage of books recently. In addition, the author is a novice, and the writing style is not bad. I can still read it. I hope the author can use my suggestions to help the heroine grow better. The subsequent plot can be written with a little ups and downs, but it is not forced. It can be written according to the author's own strength and order. Finally, it is not easy for the author to write books, so I will give you a five-star encouragement. I hope the author will get better and better in the future, [Like] [Like] [Like]
Good, good, good