[One Piece fan original heroine/Marco cb]
15-year-old Marco caught a dark egg, and a beautiful red-haired girl hatched out of the egg.
Reader comments
Personally think it's a good novel
It is summarized as the story of "the protagonist who was miserable at a young age was picked up and cured by the Whitebeard family and then personally solved the root cause of the misery" (maybe not the whole story)
Although the ending personally felt a bit "understated", the overall impression was quite good.
Please continue to work hard [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Oh my god, I just now know that Phoenix is also called Phoenix. I released this song while listening to music, and then I learned that Phoenix is also called Phoenix. The teacher is really good at details... [Crying] (I feel so stupid, I only know it now [face covering])
I finished reading it in one sitting. The story starts from the young Marco, the perspective is very interesting. As an adult, Marco is reliable and steady. As a boy, he was lively and cheerful, hey hey hey. The heroine is always chirping, like a bird, and so cute (*/∇＼*). The life story and foreshadowing of the heroine are also too long. There are so many chapters and the mystery has not yet been revealed.
Please tell me, this is a basic world view of One Piece. It is another story that has nothing to do with the main plot, but the story is very interesting and the ending is surprisingly simple. There are some pitfalls. I feel that it is not filled in. I feel that it can be expanded.
I really like that kind of pirate routine.
I think it's pretty good-looking
Read on February 6, 2025
I feel like the little bird is so cute, and the big words are super warm [send heartfelt]
Personally think it's a good novel It is summarized as the story of "the protagonist who was miserable at a young age was picked up and cured by the Whitebeard family and then personally solved the root cause of the misery" (maybe not the whole story) Although the ending personally felt a bit "understated", the overall impression was quite good. Please continue to work hard [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
Oh my god, I just now know that Phoenix is also called Phoenix. I released this song while listening to music, and then I learned that Phoenix is also called Phoenix. The teacher is really good at details... [Crying] (I feel so stupid, I only know it now [face covering])
I finished reading it in one sitting. The story starts from the young Marco, the perspective is very interesting. As an adult, Marco is reliable and steady. As a boy, he was lively and cheerful, hey hey hey. The heroine is always chirping, like a bird, and so cute (*/∇＼*). The life story and foreshadowing of the heroine are also too long. There are so many chapters and the mystery has not yet been revealed.
Please tell me, this is a basic world view of One Piece. It is another story that has nothing to do with the main plot, but the story is very interesting and the ending is surprisingly simple. There are some pitfalls. I feel that it is not filled in. I feel that it can be expanded.
I really like that kind of pirate routine.
I think it's pretty good-looking
Read on February 6, 2025
I feel like the little bird is so cute, and the big words are super warm [send heartfelt]