Blue Lock*****

"Rin, you can choose to pass the ball to me..." "You, an egoist, can give me the ball." "Rin, no matter where you go, I will follow you." Soft and cute school girl + tsundere young lady + gentle older sister

Emmm... Generally speaking, it is quite enjoyable to watch. Then there are the two original characters added. The appearance of Hoshino increases the competitiveness of career talents. Of course, he has more than this one, but, as mentioned in the article, he is too cautious. The second is the protagonist. The character is very three-dimensional. I look forward to the subsequent plot.

Beautiful! The writing is pretty good, but there is still room for improvement. I quite like the protagonist's character, but I personally think it could be a little "crazier". Although the game process is not particularly detailed, it is not a streamlined account. It can be seen that the author likes to write about the back-and-forth anxious games. Ling's own personality may be a bit more "stinky". He probably doesn't care about the camaraderie of his teammates and only believes in his own type. But what is written here is acceptable. Overall, the characters are not too OOC. In addition to "eating", the protagonist can have some other significant or impressive "character or characteristics". Overall, I recommend watching it!

Come on, wow, it's not bad [Code]

Adding a few original characters is actually very good, not only to prevent the plot from being one-sided, but also to naturally promote the rapid growth of the original characters, just like a stone hitting the lake, causing the originally calm lake to have ups and downs~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~, the plot is still very good so far („• ֊ •„)੭, but there are some shortcomings in the scenes of goals, passing and cooperation, but overall it is still good, cheers, author

Okay, can be very good

Very good, exciting

I like Lan so much. The writing is so good that I eat it like crazy😋😋😋

Good looking, very good

It looks good, cheers for the author 😘😍😘😍[Sending heartfelt wishes]

Come on, I will keep watching

Come on! I think it's pretty good.

Jie is such a stubborn and unlucky child here [note][note][star]

There are very few fics written so well.

I think this book is very well written and it suits my needs. I hope the author can make the competition longer. It's not enough to read. Come on, author, I believe in you😄

It doesn't smell like that