Two Hundred Years Early, I Steal the World-Ending Demoness

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There are more than 800 chapters, which is not bad. There are no major flaws. Each female character has her own characteristics. Later, there may inevitably be some small flaws in the protagonist's character and plot logic, but overall they can be ignored. After all, there are already more than 800 chapters. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. Among the harem apocalypse novels, it is considered to be the top batch.

The subject matter is good, the plot and characterization are good. There are no major flaws, and the plot is very smooth. It can only be said that there are small flaws. For example, in the last chapter, I gave you something tomorrow and in the next chapter I will give it right away. The male protagonist is not a eunuch, and there is no such painful plot, such as whether the two of them know each other or not. I originally thought that there would be such a speechless plot in the part about the Blazing Witch, but I didn't expect to write it back right away. I can only say that the author is very good at catching people [laughter] I said he wanted to give the woman 5 million and he caught a lot of people, but I didn't see the following and I will give you two stars directly. Overall, it is a very comfortable book. Neither the various heroines nor the growing protagonist are objectionable, and the plot does not feel very urgent. I think if there was traffic, this would be a book that could get a score of 9.4. Finally, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The gap between the reading sense of the apocalyptic part and the realistic part is a bit big, which makes it not feel like two lines of progress. The fun part of the apocalypse is almost all about the witch. As for building a shelter and meeting the alliance army, I can only say that I am not disgusted with it. There is no fun point at all, which makes people want to skip the description of the relevant parts. Now the apocalyptic part is more like a tool for meeting the heroine to advance the plot. The fun part lies in reality. But on the other hand, the heroine in the real world is more like a tool to conquer the witch. She only has a lot of description before completing the strategy, but after the strategy is completed, it seems that this person is no longer there. For example, Bai Ya is obviously the person who lives with the protagonist. I was still thinking about the protagonist kidnapping Wang Yujia. How to deal with whether to go back at night or not. Unexpectedly, the author did not write about whether to go back at night. What about Bai Ya, just to promote the attack on Qin Yueling, the protagonist met her and made a scene. I hope the author can balance the look and feel of the two worlds, but if it is a feature, that is the author's original intention. The main world is fun to fight, and the apocalypse [laughs evilly], then I didn't mention it. (However, I still hope that the author can describe more interactions with the heroine in reality.)

Everyone says Emperor Huangtian is very miserable, but how can he be as miserable as me? I was born in the Age of Ending the Dharma. I was born with the holy body of an ox and a horse. Not only can I not practice cultivation, I even have a lifespan of less than a hundred years. I have been busy for half my life. I still have no partner. My family inheritance may be cut off. I was born in a farming family. When I landed, there was no vision. My parents were illiterate and barely over 100 years old.

It's pretty good, I like it. The plot is smooth, the emotional drama is reasonable and loving, and the lightning protection is pretty good. It's a rare novel with good emotional drama and plot. I give it full marks haha Unfortunately, after more than 300 chapters, three major problems arose that made me lose interest. First, the plot becomes bland and boring. Second, the protagonist OOC. At the beginning, the protagonist can be said to be neutral and kind, and only kills the most evil people. But when he arrived in Thailand, he became free of self. He would kill anyone who was sacrificed by others, huh? Is he still the protagonist? Third, and the most serious point that made me abandon the book, the mask thunder really exploded. Some of the previous female protagonists could be said to have rubbed themselves around the mask thunder, but because they only wore masks, their faces were still their own, and the male and female protagonists recognized each other immediately after returning to the apocalypse, so I don't think it constitutes it. It's okay. Accept it, but when it comes to the Decay Witch, it's completely mask-like, with a completely different face, and she was forced to die inexplicably. The plot here is also quite confusing, and then there is the plot of the heroine working hard to resurrect the masked trumpet. I can't stand it. All in all, this book is quite good. I think you can give it a read. Unfortunately, it deteriorated in the middle period, so I can only recommend it reluctantly. Oh, you also have to pay attention to Mask Ray. If you mind, don't read it.

I have read the latest chapter, and it is still very comfortable to read without thinking, which is the characteristic of Tomato. If you look into it, it will make you feel stomachache. However, for me personally, there is not much poisonous point at the moment. It can be regarded as a very good relaxing work in my spare time. Although there are not too many poisonous points, there are still some minor flaws. One is the balance between reality and the apocalyptic plot. Reality basically advances the plot, but the heroine's scenes after the red strategy are too few. In the apocalypse, the heroine's scenes are the main ones. This is not to say that this is bad, but I hope the author can balance the scenes on both sides. Second, many readers have complained about the protagonist's problem of expanding the number of people in the shelter. From the first chapter until he saw the scarecrow, the author has not given any reasons or reasons for the protagonist's obsession with containing people. There is only one hacker who can barely be regarded as a witch who can open the box of the container in real life. This is one of the reasons why the protagonist has been complained about by many comments.

I have seen more than 300 chapters, Harem Witch Collection. It's just that the protagonist is too obsessed with death. The various organizations of upright villains and villains are all created by the protagonist seeking death. If he doesn't improve his strength, he is seeking death and it will be a waste. There are obviously many better ways to solve the problem, that is to commit suicide or waste money. It's tiring to watch, a little bit addictive, but overall it's still watchable

It looks good, keep going, but I suggest you not write too detailed about the national plot, try to mention it in one stroke, or try to show it as little as possible, otherwise it may be easy to cross the line, and these are not easy to control.

It was rated as a clever and refreshing article. The protagonist is very strong, has a sense of security with his resurrection ability, and can travel through time and space after sleeping to change the future. This gives him various opportunities to gain the favorability of the witches in advance. The two quasi-witches currently on the scene, an introverted god-sister and an earth-type "magical girl", will both be powerful in the future. This theme is very novel to me. The emotional development between the protagonist and the witch is also reasonable, and I look forward to its subsequent development.

The introduction should have been changed. I took one look at the previous introduction and crossed it out. This time the introduction was changed and I felt it was interesting, so I came in. You can skip 10 chapters while reading, and just skip the part about the villain.