Two Hundred Years Ahead of the Game, Cut Off the Witch and Destroy the World

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There are more than 800 chapters, which is not bad. There are no major flaws. Each female character has her own characteristics. Later, there may inevitably be some small flaws in the protagonist's character and plot logic, but overall they can be ignored. After all, there are already more than 800 chapters. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. Among the harem apocalypse novels, it is considered to be the top batch.

The subject matter is good, the plot and characterization are good. There are no major flaws, and the plot is very smooth. It can only be said that there are small flaws. For example, in the last chapter, I gave you something tomorrow and in the next chapter I will give it right away. The male protagonist is not a eunuch, and there is no such painful plot, such as whether the two of them know each other or not. I originally thought that there would be such a speechless plot in the part about the Blazing Witch, but I didn't expect to write it back right away. I can only say that the author is very good at catching people [laughter] I said he wanted to give the woman 5 million and he caught a lot of people, but I didn't see the following and I will give you two stars directly. Overall, it is a very comfortable book. Neither the various heroines nor the growing protagonist are objectionable, and the plot does not feel very urgent. I think if there was traffic, this would be a book that could get a score of 9.4. Finally, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The gap between the reading sense of the apocalyptic part and the realistic part is a bit big, which makes it not feel like two lines of progress. The fun part of the apocalypse is almost all about the witch. As for building a shelter and meeting the alliance army, I can only say that I am not disgusted with it. There is no fun point at all, which makes people want to skip the description of the relevant parts. Now the apocalyptic part is more like a tool for meeting the heroine to advance the plot. The fun part lies in reality. But on the other hand, the heroine in the real world is more like a tool to conquer the witch. She only has a lot of description before completing the strategy, but after the strategy is completed, it seems that this person is no longer there. For example, Bai Ya is obviously the person who lives with the protagonist. I was still thinking about the protagonist kidnapping Wang Yujia. How to deal with whether to go back at night or not. Unexpectedly, the author did not write about whether to go back at night. What about Bai Ya, just to promote the attack on Qin Yueling, the protagonist met her and made a scene. I hope the author can balance the look and feel of the two worlds, but if it is a feature, that is the author's original intention. The main world is fun to fight, and the apocalypse [laughs evilly], then I didn't mention it. (However, I still hope that the author can describe more interactions with the heroine in reality.)

Everyone says Emperor Huangtian is very miserable, but how can he be as miserable as me? I was born in the Age of Ending the Dharma. I was born with the holy body of an ox and a horse. Not only can I not practice cultivation, I even have a lifespan of less than a hundred years. I have been busy for half my life. I still have no partner. My family inheritance may be cut off. I was born in a farming family. When I landed, there was no vision. My parents were illiterate and barely over 100 years old.

It's pretty good, I like it. The plot is smooth, the emotional drama is reasonable and loving, and the lightning protection is pretty good. It's a rare novel with good emotional drama and plot. I give it full marks haha Unfortunately, after more than 300 chapters, three major problems arose that made me lose interest. First, the plot becomes bland and boring. Second, the protagonist OOC. At the beginning, the protagonist can be said to be neutral and kind, and only kills the most evil people. But when he arrived in Thailand, he became free of self. He would kill anyone who was sacrificed by others, huh? Is he still the protagonist? Third, and the most serious point that made me abandon the book, the mask thunder really exploded. Some of the previous female protagonists could be said to have rubbed themselves around the mask thunder, but because they only wore masks, their faces were still their own, and the male and female protagonists recognized each other immediately after returning to the apocalypse, so I don't think it constitutes it. It's okay. Accept it, but when it comes to the Decay Witch, it's completely mask-like, with a completely different face, and she was forced to die inexplicably. The plot here is also quite confusing, and then there is the plot of the heroine working hard to resurrect the masked trumpet. I can't stand it. All in all, this book is quite good. I think you can give it a read. Unfortunately, it deteriorated in the middle period, so I can only recommend it reluctantly. Oh, you also have to pay attention to Mask Ray. If you mind, don't read it.

I have read the latest chapter, and it is still very comfortable to read without thinking, which is the characteristic of Tomato. If you look into it, it will make you feel stomachache. However, for me personally, there is not much poisonous point at the moment. It can be regarded as a very good relaxing work in my spare time. Although there are not too many poisonous points, there are still some minor flaws. One is the balance between reality and the apocalyptic plot. Reality basically advances the plot, but the heroine's scenes after the red strategy are too few. In the apocalypse, the heroine's scenes are the main ones. This is not to say that this is bad, but I hope the author can balance the scenes on both sides. Second, many readers have complained about the protagonist's problem of expanding the number of people in the shelter. From the first chapter until he saw the scarecrow, the author has not given any reasons or reasons for the protagonist's obsession with containing people. There is only one hacker who can barely be regarded as a witch who can open the box of the container in real life. This is one of the reasons why the protagonist has been complained about by many comments.

I have seen more than 300 chapters, Harem Witch Collection. It's just that the protagonist is too obsessed with death. The various organizations of upright villains and villains are all created by the protagonist seeking death. If he doesn't improve his strength, he is seeking death and it will be a waste. There are obviously many better ways to solve the problem, that is to commit suicide or waste money. It's tiring to watch, a little bit addictive, but overall it's still watchable

It looks good, keep going, but I suggest you not write too detailed about the national plot, try to mention it in one stroke, or try to show it as little as possible, otherwise it may be easy to cross the line, and these are not easy to control.

It was rated as a clever and refreshing article. The protagonist is very strong, has a sense of security with his resurrection ability, and can travel through time and space after sleeping to change the future. This gives him various opportunities to gain the favorability of the witches in advance. The two quasi-witches currently on the scene, an introverted god-sister and an earth-type "magical girl", will both be powerful in the future. This theme is very novel to me. The emotional development between the protagonist and the witch is also reasonable, and I look forward to its subsequent development.

The introduction should have been changed. I took one look at the previous introduction and crossed it out. This time the introduction was changed and I felt it was interesting, so I came in. You can skip 10 chapters while reading, and just skip the part about the villain.

This book is quite in line with my taste, but I still want to make some comments. Modern people still have too little sense of crisis and have not yet realized the horror of the apocalypse. We can increase our efforts. The protagonist can make arrangements in many aspects, such as establishing a witch association in advance and belonging to the protagonist's own witch organization. The protagonist's ability is too single and can be strengthened. The ability of the blood vine looks a bit like venom. It is better to develop in the direction of venom and copy other people's abilities to strengthen himself.

I have seen Chapter 635 so far, please leave your comments: The protagonist is currently traveling between the apocalyptic worlds 200 years ago and 200 years later. By gaining favor with the undead human witches, he recruits the witches who have resurrected after the apocalypse, builds an apocalyptic base, and then appears in front of people 200 years ago. The behind-the-scenes operation is to revive the spiritual energy and solve the monsters. This is basically the plot. So far, it can be seen that the protagonist has no eagerness to save the apocalypse. The purpose of conquering the witches 200 years ago is to give them shelter in the apocalypse. The purpose of killing the monsters before the apocalypse is to kill the monsters that will be resurrected in the apocalypse. He also deceives the top officials of the country to create spiritual energy recovery to prepare them. The point of this book is that the end of the world cannot be prevented and is bound to come! The protagonist feels indifferent to other apocalyptic bases. In addition to looking for people to fill the base, even if a dozen people in the base are killed by the witch, it will not affect the protagonist's strategy and love for that witch. Then there is the character of the protagonist, which mainly depends on the author's writing style. The protagonist's basic outlook is pretty normal. The behavior in the apocalyptic world is okay, although it is a bit indifferent to the death of others, but it is due to human selfishness, and at least there is a normal explanation. But the behavior of the protagonist in the real world is a bit strange, as if he is doing trouble for the sake of making trouble. Although the author has given an explanation, the reasons are a bit far-fetched. As of Chapter 630, the protagonist's outlook on life is quite good. The protagonist is not directly involved in the death of innocent people, and some of them are brushed aside. Basically, those who died were evil people, gangsters, warlords, capitalists, foreigners and beautiful Chinese. But after Chapter 630, in order to defeat the witch, the protagonist went to the beautiful country and created a mutant subordinate. He ignored him and let him destroy everywhere. The reason was inexplicable for conducting experiments. The officials of the beautiful country used blood to create a superhero mutant to hunt down the protagonist's subordinates. In the process, he killed the witch's mother. After learning about it later, he said in his heart that the mutant's actions were not controlled by him. The superhero was also created by the beautiful people, and her mother's death was none of his business. The protagonist has completely become a hypocritical villain. The book currently has 1146 chapters. I couldn't help but comment after I saw chapter 635. Although the protagonist's behavior before was not a pure good person, it did not deviate from the bottom line of three views. However, after this chapter, the bottom line of the protagonist's three views has been obviously distorted. I will continue to watch. If the witch still falls in love with the protagonist, then the protagonist will become a hypocritical villain. In Chapter 640, the witch of the apocalypse resurrected the mother of the human witch in the real world. Although the protagonist's inner activities are a bit hypocritical, the plot is considered perfect. The author's writing style is okay, and there are no poisonous points.

It's not why you built the shelter. You won't die in the end of the world, and you have so many witches to protect you. If other people's shelters are destroyed, you will accept 8,000 refugees, feed them for free, and protect them. What can they bring to you?

A rare good book with a novel plot and no obvious poisoning. The comment section is really annoying. I discovered this book very early and read the comments first and it felt like rubbish. Later, after looking at it for a long time, I realized it was a good book.

The writing is very good, but I would like to remind the author that there is a problem in harem novels that is difficult to avoid. Once the number of people in the harem increases, it is easy to favor one over the other. Some people may not mention it for a long time. Moreover, this novel is double-crossed. Multiple heroines each time are equivalent to two people. At present, the novel focuses on the end of the world, and the present world itself accounts for less. In this way, some early heroines in the present world may not be mentioned for a long time. I hope the author will pay attention to it.

It's really good-looking, but can the witches not be all in Anhai Middle School? I also suggest that the author write more about Shura Field and the intimate plot between the male protagonist and the witch. I recommend that the author read "Stay Steady and Farewell" written by Dancing to learn how to write a plot to save the witch. Also, the witch's hatred for humans and the world feels a bit far-fetched and exaggerated, and is not logical. It can be modified appropriately in the later stage. Book title suggestion: "Saving the Witches, Starting from Time Travel Two Hundred Years Ago"

Qiuqiu author please update soon 555 As long as you update, I can do anything to you [cry][cry][cry]

To be honest, this is the best novel I have read this year. It is not a simple post-apocalyptic novel, but a new perspective on traveling through the past and liberating the future. The quality of the novel is also very good at the end. It is not a simple stallion novel or a cool novel. The protagonist becomes stronger step by step, and it is not a particularly weak protagonist. It also has its own characteristics and strength. Each character has distinct characteristics, and there is no confusion at the end like other novels. The author's writing skills are extremely solid. Generally speaking, few people will read novels like this to the end, and I also think that apocalyptic novels are generally not very good at the end, especially novels with multiple characters like this. But this novel made me realize that as long as I have this kind of writing motivation and creative passion, I can create a novel without flaws.

If the witch completely awakens the memory of the past, it will be like the past and the future merge into one, time has no meaning here, and I am the only one. Just like Zhengdao Daluo [laughing] [laughing]

Logically speaking, it is barely three stars. I have read Chapter 133 so far. The extra star is because I like the genre. The plot is not bad, but the content has some flaws. It may also be that I have not watched enough. Here I want to talk about why humans are still using gunpowder weapons for more than 200 years. The writing of the doomsday human side is too weak (I feel that it can develop into the space age). I feel 2 There is no difference after more than 10 years after more than 200 years. Another thing that is even more outrageous is that last year there was an unfinished building that has been preserved for more than 200 years. This is a bit outrageous. The plot explanation is that it is close to the edge of the city and no one has developed it. But what I want to say is that it has been more than 200 years. No matter how remote the place is, it has been developed. Furthermore, even if there is no development of an unfinished building, it has been preserved for more than 200 years. It cannot be justified. (Mainly because Mo described the human side as being like a chicken, which is too weak and seems a bit unreasonable) If there is anything wrong, you can leave me a message. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] But all in all, I still like reading this type of writing, so come on, author!

It is narrated in the form of two different worlds: the city and the end. I have read more than 70 chapters. Let me give you a brief evaluation: All things considered, I highly recommend reading it. It's a good book. 1. I usually read cool books. I originally planned to read this book casually, but I was really surprised to see Urban Blood Slave. Usually I give 4 stars to cool books on the market because they are cool enough but not interesting enough. This book is just the opposite. 2. The other one was written in a behind-the-scenes manner and is now showing its sharpness. Still a good sight to see Of course, the final question is: 1. The protagonist's current position is that of a chess piece, with no system assistance and no powerful abilities. In the city, he relies on women to become a blood slave, and in the apocalypse, he also relies on women's looks. I generally like to watch female protagonists, but in this case, I am most afraid of someone suddenly stabbing the protagonist. 2. The urban blood slave chapter is a good attraction, but how long can it remain an attraction? I also hope that the protagonist can win-win with the official. The protagonist is shocked by the superiors and comes to provide logistical support. Finally, I really hope that the author will strengthen the protagonist a little bit more [learned] [learned] @ pancake master Te meow can't really be the mastermind behind the scenes, right? [Angry][angry][angry]

In the world 200 years from now, monsters will be in sync with those 200 years ago. Where did the 200 years go in between?

Pay attention to turning off the comments when reading the previous ones. People often jump out and scold them. I feel a little physical discomfort. If you want to watch Shennong, you can watch it. If you think it interferes with the viewing experience, I suggest you turn off the comments and read again when there are no more [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

There is actually no need to delve too deeply into the logic of the author's story. But I also have some relevant understanding of the witch setting that I can share with you. First of all, the witch must have had nothing to do with the male protagonist at the beginning. She just had a miserable life experience. This is also the fundamental reason why she hates humans after her resurrection. As for the setting of memory, I prefer that the author himself is similar to the Creator God, giving these poor people a chance to be redeemed. In the original timeline, the witch died in misery, and there was no follow-up, so other than hatred, the memory is a blur. The appearance of the male protagonist changed the original direction. The memory in the fog was rewritten into the memory of getting along with the male protagonist, and thus he was redeemed. But in fact, there are bugs in this. For example, the original Bai Ya can be explained by this theory, but the latest Wang Jiayu, her obsession must have a cause and effect, because the male protagonist keeps killing monsters. This conflicts with my understanding. I don't know if the author had a good idea of ​​the setting from the beginning, and I haven't thought about it in depth. Without a strong foundation at the beginning, problems can easily arise due to logical contradictions later on. Maybe it's some readers who are determined to die, or maybe the subsequent pitfalls are a bit buried. Of course, these are all things the author should consider [eating melon]

"I conquered the natural disaster witch 200 years ago and 200 years later"

An honest review of a book that has both advantages and disadvantages. A common problem with long novels is that there are too many characters, and the conquering process is not particularly smooth, but through a special mechanism, it cuts 200 years ago and 200 years after. It's also relatively mellow. After all, time is a butcher's knife. As for the problems of dealing with various bosses, alas, they are all mechanical problems, 200 years ago and 200 years after. The highlight is the set mechanism, but there is nothing else. Various logical problems are also solved through various mechanisms. The design can be said to be perfect, but the writing is not. In terms of scoring, 60 points is a passing grade. 75 Points, above can be said to be viewed. A score of 95 or above is an excellent standard for the entire network. Of course, this book cannot be rated above 95 points →_→ It can only be regarded as a standard that can be seen between 75 and 95. Then draw a range of 20 points, 75 to 85, 85 to 95, this book can only be ranked in the range of 75 to 85. You need to draw a range between 75 and 85. I can only give you 79 to 85. Even if it's a little bit close, I can give it 79, which is considered good enough to watch. If you get a better deal, you can probably only get a maximum of 85. Just a general standard line, not excellent, but not too weak, but not very good either. It can only be regarded as a universal standard line that can be seen on the entire Internet.

The plot is pretty good, a story about passionate young people saving the world and falling in love. We have been recruiting new witches since then, and the roles of witches being conquered are becoming less and less. There are too many witches, and the protagonist is the type who wants to give all witches a home. I thought that after reaching a certain level, I would switch from the conquering line to the career line. I originally thought that witches are special, but in the end There are witches everywhere in the back, with many levels ranging from S to B. It feels like a bad street. Now I feel that the witch is a high-level special elite monster, the kind of bad street. Only a few can become boss level. The plot is okay, but if you watch too much, you will get tired of it.

It's okay. I hope the plot will be promoted more and not every witch will be included.

I looked at the reading time, and it should have been dozens of hours. There are some minor flaws, but overall the flaws are not outweighed. Really a great piece of work. From beginning to end, you will become more and more fascinated. Each character is actually well drawn. If you encounter a woman who you can't conquer and has a bad personality, you'll just kill her. There is also a tsundere witch who is completely devoted to the protagonist and often gets frustrated, which is a lot of fun. Later, in the chapter about the sisters and witches in Little Japan, although the younger sister has a bit of a bad character, she was handled very well, and it was very enjoyable to watch in the end. In addition, I actually admire the author for being able to ensure the quality of the work while insisting on updating it every day. It's a pity that I'm still underage, otherwise I would like to give the author a gift.

I just like to watch this kind of works with more than 80% emotional drama.