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The content is good. This is the first time I have read the setting of Ma Liang, the magic pen. It is very interesting. The golden finger is not too open, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. Some places do not need to be described at all, which will make people very tired to read („ಡωಡ„) Shuan Q

Fortunately, I persisted in reading it. At the beginning, it was very typical of newbie writing, with exaggerated adjectives and the like, and occasionally some parts were awkward. But because the collection of supplies and the interspersed plot were quite interesting, I insisted on reading it. As a result, I am so happy now! ! This novel is really great! I can really feel that the author's level is constantly improving, and those little problems are getting less and less! The dungeon at the beginning of the second terrain is particularly exciting and very immersive; the revenge on the enemy is also hearty; the new family members will not be held back or marginalized, but will become a real backbone; The various creatures and NPCs interspersed in the middle are very interesting, as if they are really creating a complete world! At first I thought the heroine had a big golden finger, but now in my opinion, this golden finger only allows the heroine to better lead us readers to visit the world! The third terrain has a puzzle to solve at the beginning, which is not obvious. The author has managed to integrate some boring reasoning and knowledge into the plot smoothly. This is the most diverse content among the various survival novels I have read recently. I don't feel tired after reading it in one go. I hope the author can finish this book without it being too unfinished. I really like reading it. Please~ [Love] [Love] [Love]

Nice! The heroine is very good and has great ideas. The ability of the magic pen Ma Liang is also very novel and interesting in a survival novel. The characters are well created and the storyline is very smooth. I couldn't stop watching it. I stayed up all night to read it. Thank you very much! The quality is very high! Highly recommended👍🏻

It's beautiful🤩It's well written. The heroine is determined not to be a virgin, but she's not cold-blooded either. The description of the survival world is also very interesting. The heroine's current ranking is consistent with her character. She's not the kind who doesn't put in much effort but is the first because she's the protagonist╮(¯▽¯)╭. The author greatly requests updates (~¯▽¯)~

The storyline is good, but it really feels like too many parts were continued by AI. But I really love the storyline. The author should improve it a lot.

It's rare to see an apocalyptic game article with such good writing style

It looks good, it looks good [you taste it carefully]

The subject matter is different from ordinary survival. The heroine is an ordinary person, not a heroine. Rebirth does not mean that the IQ will increase [facepalm] The storyline is still okay. I hope the heroine will continue to work hard to improve herself.

The setting is relatively novel and different from other general survival stories.

It's quite novel, with a special plot. You can even travel through the game after rebirth. It's awesome.

Overall pretty good Make sure there is no CP, there is a team (but a small team), and there are family members around

It's beautiful, why are there so few people watching it?

It's beautiful. It's a very new setting by Ma Liang. It's the first time I've seen it. The golden finger is just right. Looking forward to the future.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

No rating

Okay, it's pretty good-looking.

It's good to watch, but not enough

It's pretty good, you can take a look

Looks good, has a good rhythm

Very pretty! Very novel~

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Nice! Looking forward to the new book hehe

It's okay, there's so much to read

Not bad, good looking

Unexpectedly good-looking

Quite a good subject. But have you not updated in two days?

Well written, keep up the good work, keep up the good work

The front has always looked good, but the stamina is a bit lacking. Overall, it's okay.

It was great, but it ended too quickly. I didn't see enough.

It looks great. The heroine likes it very much. But I haven't seen any description of the heroine's father.