I Got a God-Tier Sign-In System from the Start

I read in the newspaper that the writing is not good, very childish, and then there is the character of the heroine. She lived for more than 20 years in the previous life, and lived as a fetus for more than ten years. The two lifetimes combined make her almost 40 years old, and she is still childish. Then she casually saves people, and even generously forgives the twins who bullied her since she was a child, and gives people money to help them practice. I can only say that the heroine is quite "true, kind and beautiful". Then there is the inexplicable female rivalry. Don't normal people appreciate kind people when they see them? Would a child raised by a wealthy family use words like country bumpkin on the street? And it is at a critical period when large sects are recruiting students. After all, not only talent is important in cultivation, but character is also indispensable, right?

Overall, it's okay, but I always felt that the heroine's emotional line was a bit weird. The heroine is 13, right? A group of men fell in love with her at first sight, and a group of women hated him. How could they do this if they were all the chosen ones? And the heroine's appearance doesn't need to be described so much, I know he is beautiful. It's a story about strong women, right? The female protagonist has been in the sect for several months, the male protagonist has gone from no cultivation to the foundation building stage, and the female protagonist has not touched her cultivation level. The sixth elder is a sixth-grade alchemist, and a proud fifth-grade alchemist. Good guy, is this reasonable? Or is it that the Sixth Elder is very good? But he also described the Sixth Elder as a top alchemist respected by everyone, and each paragraph said his own thing?

Halfway through the movie, I realized that the heroine was either rescuing people or helping the poor. She was very kind to these outsiders. However, the beast she contracted with had a bad attitude and kicked her. Others were too weak and unmotivated. She knew that her mother had a hard time at home, but she didn't work hard to practice. She just relied on the system and then ruined it. The mud couldn't support the wall.

1. I can't stand the heroine's bad behavior (if it's just this, I can accept it) 2. The heroine's name is unacceptable (this can be accepted if the plot is good) 3. The heroine likes to be a holy mother. She punishes and judges others from the highest point of morality every day; she generously forgives others when they have done something wrong (this is very unacceptable) Without the plug-in, she would be nothing (๑‾᷅^‾᷅๑) acting cool every day. She was showing off every day. If it weren't for the system, she would have been hacked to death long ago when she went out. Her cultivation level was not that high. Have you failed? Why don't you work hard? If you give your system to others, they won't cherish it so much ╮(_)╭You don't understand how a big tree attracts the wind and you show good things there every day.

Yeah, it's the first time I've seen indigenous people express themselves in modern terms in ancient Chinese novels.

The protagonist is not motivated at all, and the audience is speechless. She doesn't have the feeling of a big heroine. It's written like a child's play house. I can't stand it after reading a few articles [laughs awkwardly]

I don't want to read anymore after reading Chapter 8... I want to know what the heroine is thinking. She doesn't want to practice immortality to protect herself and the people she wants to protect, but she just fantasizes about saving people and becoming someone else's savior? Are you so arrogant now that you are only in the late stage of foundation building? I feel a little good about myself, as if I am the most powerful person in the world of immortality. And the heroine's mother is still in the Jin family, right? Don't want to take her out? The heroine also doesn't want to think about the fact that the Jin family thinks that she is good to her because of her spiritual roots and high talents. The heroine has become arrogant in the Jin family. If she is not around, will the Jin family's mistress abuse the heroine's mother? Or one day something unexpected happens to the heroine. How will the heroine's mother be treated at the Jin family? Will the mistress of the Jin family take out her previous sins on the heroine's mother? After all, the heroine's mother is just a concubine at the moment. The heroine doesn't want to change her mother's situation. Now she looks arrogant. It's hard not to doubt the heroine's IQ? On the contrary, everyone has been saved. Even someone who dug up his spiritual root can find a way to make him become an immortal. Why don't you think about your mother? Let her become an immortal and have the ability to protect herself. She can leave the Jin family. It is better than being a concubine in the Jin family. If it doesn't work, you can find a way to give her an equal wife, right? Aren't you awesome? Embarrassing, I'm most afraid of this kind of thing that starts high and then goes low. The heroine doesn't even know the most basic situation in this world of immortality. It's funny.

It's just average. There's nothing interesting about it. There's also some inexplicable female rivalry. The heroine feels like she can't hold herself up to the wall. Lightning protection 🤦 🤦 🤦

Is the heroine a holy mother? She will save anyone, regardless of her own safety [pouts]

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