Traveling Through the Collapse of Iron Begins with Playing Ting Yun Instead of Huan Hao

Talking about my feelings about the first 70 chapters, I can only say that it flows smoothly, has constant conflicts, attracts readers, and is full of dangers. Why do I say this? Most of the Star Rail fanfics start out either invincible or acting with the train crew, and there are very few villains. It can be said that a star iron novel written about a villain will greatly increase the reader's enjoyment of watching it. This is proven, and I also read one in the past. The perspective is mainly that of the villain, rather than a relatively decent character, and the same feeling holds true for this book. But when that book changed the main character from black to white, you could already tell that book was unreadable for me. It can be said that writing a villain is definitely a greater test for the author, because it is a great test of the author's wisdom to play well with decent characters. Although there are some logical flaws in the first 70 pictures, these problems are not enough to judge this book, and even become a key factor in the score of this book. I can give you a quick overview, from zero to having the little guys versus the big guys. The threatened kidnapping of Tingyun is the first turning point in the book. The author looks at the protagonist's calm response. It really made my heart tighten when I finally saw the branches of Jianmu about to leave the fairy boat. Jing Yuan's pursuit reversed again. All I can say is that I highly recommend reading this book. At least until now, as long as the author does not have any major flaws in logic and keeps writing according to the idea of ​​a villain, whether it is the train set or Pinoconing, or going to a certain place, it will be described from the perspective of a villain, and there will be such a unique label as a heroine or not, this book will definitely be wonderful.

He looks really good, but don't expect too much from the protagonist. He is just an ordinary person who has reached the high level of ordinary people. The plot is developing steadily and has reached the climax of the plot👏

I'm curious how the protagonist will break the situation next? Jing Yuan has discovered that the protagonist is the mastermind behind the scenes, and personally leads the team to stop [eating melon] How does the protagonist escape from the fairy boat? !

Among all the Bengtie fanfics I have read, this one is the most exciting. It has a novel plot. It is not as cliche as other fanfics. It only follows the protagonist group, and the character's personality is also described very well. There is no Beng character set. The writing is very good in terms of wits and force. I highly recommend it and give it five stars.

It's a very novel angle. It's really rare to confront Jing Yuan from a villain's perspective. Based on my superficial knowledge, I feel that Jing Yuan's resourcefulness is shown well. I'm looking forward to the next development. The interaction between the vests is also very interesting. I'm also looking forward to the climax of the following story. Come on!

It's quite interesting to watch, especially the climax. The plot between the protagonist and Jing Yuan made me enjoy watching it. However, after the protagonist got a god, it didn't feel that interesting, and I don't know why. But no matter what, this is still a good work. Thanks for accompanying me [like]

Changsheng, it's rare to see fanfics about Xianzhouqian from this angle. It's quite interesting.

The author's writing is very good. [Admiration] is the most palatable among the Xingtie fans I have seen on Tomato.

The plot is compact and the writing is good. So far, this story has limitations. The author will either stop updating it later, or tell the same story dozens of times, or introduce a new story theme. In that case, the book will usually be renamed. If the author keeps updating later, it will be changed to 5 stars.

Flashing Chang Lotte, elbowing Ting Yun, the ambition to save the fox is still effective against the villain from another world! ! A terminally ill boy travels to another world and seems to have a chance to obtain the elixir of immortality. In fact, it is the beginning of the star god's rebellion against the game's setting of the entire universe to upgrade! ! The villain high school student goes around cheating. If you have the courage to dress up as a woman, you will succeed in whatever you do! ! In the later stage, no, basically the entire text is an original plot, a battle of wits, so cool😊

Often! The plot interpretation is definitely very good, from stealing immortality to the connection between the two worlds, the fighting scenes are especially good! There is nothing missing in the plot, but I personally think the final ending can be divided into several parts, it depends on your own wishes❤️

The previous plot has ups and downs, the rhythm is tight, the logical structure is relatively clear, and the character, behavior and psychological state of the protagonist, an ordinary person, are well grasped. The key points and the climax are also very well written, but after the protagonist's crisis is resolved, the plot begins to become more routine, bland and boring. In my opinion, it is a bit unfashionable, but it is still interesting and I can continue to watch it.

Urgent, urgent, urgent, I saw that the critical moment was gone [crying][crying][crying]

The reason for giving four stars is that the update is too slow and the itching feeling is too torturous.

The main thing is to plan the game, not some mindless plot.

It's quite interesting. The protagonist's transformation is quite powerful. After all, even though he can do fireworks, he can still see the energy of Happy Life in him if he is strong enough.

Author, please, don't stop updating. The book is so beautiful, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

This book gave me a very vivid feeling, which is different from other mindless and refreshing articles. The settings and adaptations added by the author really feel like they brought the story to life. But I actually came to watch it to play Ting Yun at first, but later I saw that it didn't seem to be the main character [laughing and crying]

The protagonist looks cool as he fights for survival! [Praise]

Nice, but the author is too short

God, it's so much fun

A good book, I hope the author keeps it up, and the protagonist advises not to be partial to the good

This is the most beautiful Bengtie novel I have ever read.

As an ordinary person, this is wonderful

The writing is very nice, but the main character's goal is too small. I don't know what else to write at the moment.

After reading this novel, I suddenly felt sad. No matter how hard I tried, it was of no avail. Even if the dimension is raised in the novel, they will always stay in the low dimension and will never be able to access the narrative level. However, this novel is indeed quite good, and it can be considered a good work of Bengtie fan fiction among Tomatoes.

It's just food and grass. The plot is relatively slow, but it's rare and smooth. The secret of stealing the fruit of building a tree has only reached the climax now [face covering], it's too little.

It's nice to watch, very good. I haven't watched the lifespan of the simulator yet. I like the character of the protagonist.

Although the protagonist is a bit frustrated, the fun behind it is really getting better and better\(//∇//)\

It's so beautiful, so over the top, (the crawling of the sun)