My Possessive Childhood Friend Is Forcing Her Love on Me, So I Have to Run for My Life

The first part of the story was okay, but when it came to the story about the innate breakthrough, I knew that the author wanted to write about the protagonist's temperament changing due to his improvement in cultivation, but your writing style and plot ideas couldn't meet that requirement. As a result, the next few chapters updated to the present can be said to be quit chapters. We saw before that the protagonist's depiction by the author was actually pretty good, but later on The story about the ruined temple of the protagonist is a bit disgusting, and it feels like the protagonist's cultivation has improved and his temperament has changed drastically into a BT-type [face-covering] emotional type. I think the author can ask the female author of the female channel or the female author of the male channel. Like you, you can just abandon this kind of plot, because if you can't write it well, it will turn into a failure. Keep up the good work, you can refer to it more

Earlier it was said that the original owner licked it, but later the protagonist licked it himself

Don't miss it if you pass by, take a look. Maybe this novel is the one you, the audience, will like [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I didn't want to complain at first, but now I have to complain about how I'm pretending to be so cool. It was just a perfunctory plot, so forget it. I'm here to watch the regret flow. I'm not watching pretending to be cool. I stayed in my mother's womb for three years from beginning to end and didn't even see what came out of cultivation.

I don't know why the rating is so high. I don't understand what's good about it. It's not that I'm far away from cause and effect. I'm far away from it.

Another headline-grabber

Well enough. .

I couldn't figure out the title of this book at all from the book, or it was unclear to my ex-wife.

You, the female group leader, can't get this kind of writing. If you do, you won't be able to compete with the others. If there are too many people, your rating won't go up. You should write this female group leader a little worse at the beginning. This kind of writing can't be washed away, so you have to write it as a regretful writing. You read Breakthrough Xiantian and almost no one here wants to read it.

Just look at the beginning