There's Something Wrong with This Martial Arts World

Why do you have to contact Xunsu if you want to go home? What if you really die?

Three and a half stars, I am Shen Nong, an accurate evaluation by a ten-year-old bookworm. Although the plot is a bit abrupt, the plot is classic and has a retro novelty.

Three and a half stars. Of the half stars I deducted, there are factors that I personally don't like. I will write about it later. If you don't care, just give it four stars. First of all, the novel is actually pretty good so far. Of course, some parts of it are a bit stiff, but you can actually see that the author has made some progress. Based on the subject matter, although this subject matter is not new, it is also rare. But in fact, it is quite appropriate. Personally speaking, I have never been very fond of works that can be seamlessly accepted after time travel. I personally criticize ancient times, whether it is martial arts or realism, for modern people, it is history. The protagonist's goal of going back is clear, but he also has a reasonable enough explanation to stay and do these things, and the two kings portrayed so far are both good, and the portrayal of other characters is not distorted, except that women are easier to develop a liking for, but in a way, this kind of thing is welcome. Okay, then let's talk about the shortcomings that I personally don't like. Judging from the writing style in the early stages of this book, I think the author wanted to write a harem story. But as far as the latest chapter is concerned, the author doesn't want to write it anymore. Maybe he was frightened by the Tomato style. Let me talk about my position first. I can accept the novel whether it has a harem heroine or not, but I personally have emotional mysophobia. I really don't like the fact that the author has to write a single female protagonist but also other female characters besides the female protagonist. I like the protagonist's style. This would make me feel very sick to my stomach. This experience came from a novel I read when I was a child. It was so old that I forgot the name and content. I only remember the ending. The protagonist became famous and decided to live in seclusion, and then took the heroine with whom he had an unrequited love to live in seclusion. Behind him, there were two supporting heroines who liked him but were secretly sad. So after this experience, I really don't like this kind of plot that clearly intends to follow the route of a single female protagonist, but has multiple female characters fall in love with the protagonist. Then again, aside from my personal preferences, if the author can see it, I want to tell the author that you are an author. Being able to listen to readers' suggestions is a good thing, but there is a very classic psychological case. It is a restaurant. It has an opinion wall where guests can write down the unpleasant parts of their meals, and the boss will correct them one by one. However, the restaurant later became less and less popular until it could no longer be opened. The reason is simple: satisfied people will not write reviews, and dissatisfied people will not come again after visiting once, and your changes may make originally satisfied people become dissatisfied. Of course we can listen to reasonable opinions, but don't change the tone of your own writing because of the audience's comments. Well, this is based on the premise that you planned to write a harem novel from the beginning. If you planned to write a single female protagonist novel from the beginning, then I can only explain that your plan is not clear because you conveyed the wrong message to the readers. Of course, there is no mockery here. I sincerely suggest that the author think carefully to avoid this kind of problem. If you want to write a harem story, but this latest chapter makes me feel that you want to write a single female protagonist story, then this is also an inaccurate message. As an author, you need to figure out what you want from the beginning and set a general tone for your work.

It is good-looking and well written about a person with correct three views. Unlike other novels, human life is not used as a bargaining chip, and his three views are not shattered by the ancient environment. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The protagonist has a good outlook on life, the plot feels good and not toxic at all. It would be nice if there were more scenes with the female boss [blowing kiss]

One of the few tomatoes that can be read in one sitting The author arranged for the protagonist to kneel down and kowtow to beg others, which is indeed a bit frustrating.

It's okay, but I don't like it. I want to be a teacher. I want to teach a child who has his own world values and three views on life. It's done in a few days. I believe you have a system. I don't help the poor and needy people, but I educate people to respect and accept it. It's like seeing someone who is waiting for a price. Although I despise it, don't say anything and just stay away. Seems like an ideal student dream

I've read Chapter 66, and I think the previous chapter was okay. The male protagonist's martial arts are considered to be advanced combat abilities, and he also lost his virginity. But there are flaws, When it was time to worship the general, the minister didn't recognize the hero again, and he was still a wanted criminal in front of him. The male protagonist cannot defeat the eunuch apprentice (refer to the warning when stealing ginseng) The male protagonist defeats the Emei gate master The eunuch apprentice doesn't think he can defeat the Emei Sect Master The most frustrating thing is that my things were stolen by a child, and then I went to a local gang to kneel down and kowtow, and my head was stepped on.

The protagonist's outlook on life is terrible. He follows objective rules when thinking about problems and doing things. He is not a holy woman or cruel. His ideological level is extremely high and surpasses that of most people. However, it may be because it is too advanced that few people watch it.

At first glance, I thought it was just average! But after reading it carefully, I thought it was a good book! Nice writing! Rich content! Not bad, not bad

Give people the feeling of being able to watch

Just like the title of the book, it is a somewhat problematic novel. The problem should be that this online article is too offbeat. It makes people want to put it down because of the depth, politics, ideals, and reality in the article. Lu Yao is not only the protagonist, but also a passer-by. The role he plays in this world is also very strange. It is possible to live without him, but it seems impossible to live without him. I feel like I'm running out of words, but it's a good book anyway.

I have to give it a thumbs up. I haven't read such an interesting low-level martial arts novel in a long time.

This is the best martial arts novel I have read on Tomato. The content of the book fully meets my views and expectations for a hero.

It's very interesting, the characters are vivid, the scenes are well written, the writing in the beginning is a bit immature in a few chapters, but it becomes more and more mature as it goes on. It's a rare good book for Tomato! No more eunuchs! Don't suck!

It's really a very good book.

There are some poisonous spots that you can still see

It's okay. I watched it for a while.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I should at least practice some practice. From the starting level until now. Although I have read more than 100 chapters, it is a good book. But I feel it's still not as good as the one in "Rat on the Street" even though it's a eunuch.

How can such a beautiful book be given such a rating?

Isn't this well written? Why is the score so low?

The people in this book have a kind of personality, which is rare

The different world of martial arts also has all kinds of risqué operations. Recommended by book-hungry patients, it is worth a read and deserves the author's update!

It's okay initially, I hope it won't be unfinished in the future.

The author describes the protagonist around the idea of ​​"going home". As his experience changes, the protagonist changes from wanting to go home but not being able to, to being able to go home but not being able to go home yet.

It's beautiful😍, this time travel is interesting to write about

The plot is not cliche and quite interesting.

Everyone in it has their own ideas, unlike the human-machine characters in previous novels, and the protagonists all have very good views [Love]

It's okay, I hope it doesn't collapse

Great. Is it possible to eliminate the knife for the inner demon?