Zhanmei: Start by Becoming a Super Dangerous Species!

(This is purely my personal opinion. If my opinion is different from yours, please follow your own opinion. I will always say sorry to you first.) There is room for improvement, and the overall quality of the book is still good. If some unreasonable aspects are corrected, it can be regarded as a dark horse in the track of Zhanchi. I don't give five stars because I'm afraid of being treated as a robot. Also, the character and appearance of the protagonist don't feel like a medieval style, but overall, it depends on the author. The character is a bit erratic, sometimes melancholy and sometimes a happy kid. In the first few pictures, I can see that I wanted to write a more lonely or melancholic character. It may be that I didn't write it well, so the character of the protagonist is a bit broken. When I grow up, I personally feel that the only fault is the costume. Although it is all based on imagination, I still can't imagine it. The main character is wearing something very formal (?) Or very serious, with a dragon face on the back. To put it harshly, he looks like a gangster. I don't know if you know about Arataki Ichito (I don't play the original, I just watch it occasionally) Walkthrough video, I have no desire to play it now, because not only the plot is broken, but also the reviews are very poor. I personally don't have a good impression of Hara. ), The overall feeling is the same as Yidou, not that he is as sunny and cheerful as Yidou, but more silly. As for why I say this... It's because I personally think I have a deep connection with the previous melancholy person setting, and suddenly the only reference I can think of is a bucket like this.

I just like to watch this kind of plot that saves all the beautiful girls. You did a good job. You did a good job! [Sinister smile]

What is a good second-generation novel? Even if you haven't read it or have forgotten the original work, you can still read it and understand it. This is the most basic thing. It is obvious that the author has written very well so far, whether it is the emotional scenes or the plot and rhythm of the fight dramas. The only problem is that the number of words is too small and the updates are too slow, making it painful to read.

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Come on, I'm here to support Zhan Chi when I meet him, but if I don't understand the plot, it's not easy for me to watch it.

Friends, if you have watched Zhan Tong, like Zhan Tong, and like Esdeath. There is nothing wrong with reading this book. The author knows the original work very well and even designed the illustrations for the characters, which is not OOC. Go!

At least it's still fun to watch it so far

Come on, author-chan

I haven't seen Zhan Tong, but it's pretty good.

The writing is pretty good, but why no one reads it?

Very good. Among the few Chitong fanfics, both in terms of emotional expression and plot, the best [Flowing Kiss]

I think it's very interesting. Maybe it's because I haven't read the original work. Anyway, I give it five stars.

Update, brother, I also want to read the sweet story between Eli and Esdeath [crying]

Looks good, hit my xp

Can you post more pictures? If you haven't seen it, you won't know who is who. It's not a big problem, but I don't know why I don't have the desire to read on.

It's pretty beautiful, but why does it feel like there's no one there?