[Because it is a new book, the rating will be a little lower... But it is beautiful! Everyone in the comment section said yes, I believe you will like it after reading it!
Recently, Li Zixuan discovered something unusual...
His neighbor has a "genius disease" and Qingmei will show strange expressions behind his back.
His classmate, Qingmei No. 2, Whom he met in elementary school, is a talented pianist who seems to be plotting something weird with his neighbor Qingmei, but he just won't tell Li Zixuan...
After that, Li Zixuan had a dream...
He found himself tied up and imprisoned in a small dark room by two people who had turned into yanderes...
Someday after that...
He saw those talented girls smiling at him,
Li Zixuan took a deep breath...
Then he ran away,
Try your best to stay away from those girls who are suspected of being yandere...
Reader comments
Current version hero strength:
t0: blue (son of version)
t0.5: Fang (the god who goes up the mountain)
t1: Lin (because he is about to be banned, he can be ranked in t0 at the peak)
t2.5: Yu (to be strengthened)
😡Author, you don't want to be like this either✌️🥵✌️
The male protagonist's character should be tougher and more distinct, so as not to look like a time traveler.
The heroines have distinct personalities, four is enough, including yandere, idiot, tsundere, and mental patient. (The most important thing is not to be a bull or a poisonous person)
The logic is self-consistent, there are fewer typos, the word order is smooth, there are some hot topics, and it is rated as above 9 points.
The male protagonist's current situation is okay. He realizes his excellence (and wants to date someone), but he is a little sensitive and has low self-esteem because of Xiao Qingmei's leaving without saying goodbye. He thinks that he has let them down so he leaves without saying goodbye (when will this misunderstanding be resolved). Moreover, a plot before adulthood is skipped. I wonder if there will be several more female protagonists in it (I hope this Shura field relationship can be handled well)
The current situation is that Qingmei and Qingmei join a team (female star plus superwoman) and wait for the opportunity (if the male protagonist is exposed or exposed to someone else, it will be extreme)
The female patient (voyeur) secretly looks for opportunities to get acquainted with the male protagonist
The rich woman (female classmate) takes the initiative to attack (if the male protagonist disobeys, the underworld lady will either go or be imprisoned)
The plot is great, but is there something wrong with her? But the plot is very interesting, but do they have something wrong with each other? The main plot is very interesting, but is there something wrong with them? Although the plot is really interesting, they all have their flaws, right? But the plot is still very interesting, but he also has problems, right? But it's actually pretty good-looking, but they all have their flaws, right? Oh... By the way, this is a yandere novel. It's normal to have problems, but they have problems, right? But it's really good to read. I haven't read this kind of book for a long time. To be honest, I couldn't stand the beginning. If it were a flashback to the campus first and then the past, it wouldn't be a lightning strike at the beginning. It was a bit disappointing to read the beginning, but the later part is really sweet. All in all, good looking
It's well written, but it's too hasty. The first two female protagonists are well described, but the latter one is a bit empty. The male protagonist is also unconfident because of the psychological gap between the two female protagonists after their lives separated. It depends on how it is dealt with later on. Not many people read it, maybe because the number of words is relatively small now. Come on, author [Admiration]
I have finished reading this book. To be honest, the creativity in the previous paragraph is really refreshing, and I can still remember it clearly after almost two months. It's a really good story, but only in the first half.
When I was looking forward to some wonderful stories that would happen when I grew up, I never expected that I would be given a huge meal. It's not that the back doesn't look good, but compared with the front, it's like wearing a decent suit on the upper body and leaving the lower body naked. It feels like the author has no memory of what he wrote at the beginning, and keeps introducing new heroines, and the characterizations are not very detailed. In the end, I was locked up in a dark room and it was unfinished.
In summary, this was a daily article that was worth looking forward to, but because of the shitty platform and the author's possible lack of inspiration in the later period, it fell apart.
I am really unhappy, very unhappy. I really like the first half of this work, very much.
I hope the author can rewrite a work with this beginning and commemorate my feelings for this book with this comment
Lan Qingying, the heroine, looks so much like Ruan Mei. If you try harder, the heat will be even worse [laughing]
The best yandere article I have ever read on Tomato! ! ! It's so good that it's half the ceiling in my mind. After all, free is the best bonus. As long as the climax part is better described, then it will be the ceiling of Tomato Yandere!
Okay, great. If you compare those ordinary yandere novels to Erguotou, this one is simply Feitian Maotai. The character descriptions are very good. I really want a childhood sweetheart like Sister Lan. The other characters also have distinct personalities. In short, I am relying on you as the author. Please don't stop updating.
It made me laugh so much. I watched it while I was fishing at work. The three people in the Blue Forest House are really very, very good girls if only one of them comes out. Can you take them all in? ! !
Although the two childhood sweethearts are enough, adding them later would be a bit cliche, but the writing and plot are still very good. I haven't felt so excited for a long time. It's so good-looking, five-star support! ! ! !
Not a double heroine? Why did two more come? I hope it will be enough to have two heroines. There is really no need to do so much. The two obstacles to becoming two childhood heroines will also be fine.
It's very interesting. If it weren't for entering a small dark room, this plot would seem too sad. I believe that the subsequent plots will definitely let us feast our eyes and see happiness at a glance. Unfortunately, I was born at the wrong time and was blocked. I feel very sad in my heart ಥಥ). I hope everyone has a healthy girl who loves you in their lives [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]
The rhythm is very comfortable, but it is a pity that the author seems to be ending. I feel that the chapters about childhood, Fang Lan, and Yu Xiaofeng are all good. It would be nice to write one more chapter and then the ending. I wonder if the author will write another chapter later, and then write the ending of the two green plums, mainly the emotional lines of the two green plums. It mainly focuses on the fragments of childhood, and does not write too much about the current emotional lines. It may be a bit abrupt to write the ending directly, but it is indeed a very good book.
It's really great, but it was removed from the shelves by Smard Tomatoes.
It's very interesting. It occupies a place among the yandere novels I've read. I personally like it and recommend it.
Is there anyone coming back to visit the grave? [Crying][crying][crying][crying]
This book is really beautifully written. It stands out among all the bj articles. The author should slow down and don't stop updating. I will keep following it.
Two childhood heroines are enough, author. This is perfect, I will definitely support it to the end. If it's more, your description won't be detailed enough. Come on, the author must only have two childhood heroines.
Is there any follow-up?
The future is promising! It's so beautiful! The author must stick to it [blowing kiss]
It's awesome, I feel it's a lot of fun😋, but I don't know why there are so few people watching it
I feel that Lan Qingying is a bit similar to Ruan Mei, and Lin Shihan is a bit like... A robin
The content is okay, but for yandere stories, I feel like there shouldn't be so many female protagonists. For the female protagonists, I feel that two childhood sweethearts are enough. Ning and Wai can have roles, but I still hope there won't be a female protagonist.
How to say it? This novel. Each of his characters has very good characteristics. Especially the one at the beginning. The same goes for the girl who was saved from a domestically violent mother. Of course, the most description of the two of them in this plot is the heroines. And I feel a bit sorry for this novel. Although it is said that everyone has a perfect ending in the end. Although it is said to be about yanderes, there is not much yandere content in it. Moreover, the male protagonist has not lost the vitality that a young man should have when he returns from time travel, and he is very righteous. I am the kind of person who is willing to help others. The most regrettable thing is that there are a few. I feel like I haven't seen enough. Overall, it can be said to be a very good novel. Of course, I don't think it represents everyone's point of view.
Science fiction film, Liu Cixin's "The Three-Body Problem" is still too conservative
Author, I beg you, please give me two more chapters. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. My whole body is itching. I feel so uncomfortable. I beg you, please give me two more chapters. Really, I swear this is the last time. Please, I will steal money for you. Please give me two more chapters.
What a pity, the hateful censorship and random sealing of books!
It looks good, but it's a pity that it's gone in the end.
A salute in advance for the day of return🎆🎆🎆🎆🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇
The protagonist of this book has an 80% chance of being baptized by the sun when joking with the heroine.
Current version hero strength: t0: blue (son of version) t0.5: Fang (the god who goes up the mountain) t1: Lin (because he is about to be banned, he can be ranked in t0 at the peak) t2.5: Yu (to be strengthened)
😡Author, you don't want to be like this either✌️🥵✌️
The male protagonist's character should be tougher and more distinct, so as not to look like a time traveler. The heroines have distinct personalities, four is enough, including yandere, idiot, tsundere, and mental patient. (The most important thing is not to be a bull or a poisonous person) The logic is self-consistent, there are fewer typos, the word order is smooth, there are some hot topics, and it is rated as above 9 points.
The male protagonist's current situation is okay. He realizes his excellence (and wants to date someone), but he is a little sensitive and has low self-esteem because of Xiao Qingmei's leaving without saying goodbye. He thinks that he has let them down so he leaves without saying goodbye (when will this misunderstanding be resolved). Moreover, a plot before adulthood is skipped. I wonder if there will be several more female protagonists in it (I hope this Shura field relationship can be handled well) The current situation is that Qingmei and Qingmei join a team (female star plus superwoman) and wait for the opportunity (if the male protagonist is exposed or exposed to someone else, it will be extreme) The female patient (voyeur) secretly looks for opportunities to get acquainted with the male protagonist The rich woman (female classmate) takes the initiative to attack (if the male protagonist disobeys, the underworld lady will either go or be imprisoned)
The plot is great, but is there something wrong with her? But the plot is very interesting, but do they have something wrong with each other? The main plot is very interesting, but is there something wrong with them? Although the plot is really interesting, they all have their flaws, right? But the plot is still very interesting, but he also has problems, right? But it's actually pretty good-looking, but they all have their flaws, right? Oh... By the way, this is a yandere novel. It's normal to have problems, but they have problems, right? But it's really good to read. I haven't read this kind of book for a long time. To be honest, I couldn't stand the beginning. If it were a flashback to the campus first and then the past, it wouldn't be a lightning strike at the beginning. It was a bit disappointing to read the beginning, but the later part is really sweet. All in all, good looking
It's well written, but it's too hasty. The first two female protagonists are well described, but the latter one is a bit empty. The male protagonist is also unconfident because of the psychological gap between the two female protagonists after their lives separated. It depends on how it is dealt with later on. Not many people read it, maybe because the number of words is relatively small now. Come on, author [Admiration]
I have finished reading this book. To be honest, the creativity in the previous paragraph is really refreshing, and I can still remember it clearly after almost two months. It's a really good story, but only in the first half. When I was looking forward to some wonderful stories that would happen when I grew up, I never expected that I would be given a huge meal. It's not that the back doesn't look good, but compared with the front, it's like wearing a decent suit on the upper body and leaving the lower body naked. It feels like the author has no memory of what he wrote at the beginning, and keeps introducing new heroines, and the characterizations are not very detailed. In the end, I was locked up in a dark room and it was unfinished. In summary, this was a daily article that was worth looking forward to, but because of the shitty platform and the author's possible lack of inspiration in the later period, it fell apart. I am really unhappy, very unhappy. I really like the first half of this work, very much. I hope the author can rewrite a work with this beginning and commemorate my feelings for this book with this comment
Lan Qingying, the heroine, looks so much like Ruan Mei. If you try harder, the heat will be even worse [laughing]
The best yandere article I have ever read on Tomato! ! ! It's so good that it's half the ceiling in my mind. After all, free is the best bonus. As long as the climax part is better described, then it will be the ceiling of Tomato Yandere!
Okay, great. If you compare those ordinary yandere novels to Erguotou, this one is simply Feitian Maotai. The character descriptions are very good. I really want a childhood sweetheart like Sister Lan. The other characters also have distinct personalities. In short, I am relying on you as the author. Please don't stop updating.
It made me laugh so much. I watched it while I was fishing at work. The three people in the Blue Forest House are really very, very good girls if only one of them comes out. Can you take them all in? ! !
Although the two childhood sweethearts are enough, adding them later would be a bit cliche, but the writing and plot are still very good. I haven't felt so excited for a long time. It's so good-looking, five-star support! ! ! !
Not a double heroine? Why did two more come? I hope it will be enough to have two heroines. There is really no need to do so much. The two obstacles to becoming two childhood heroines will also be fine.
It's very interesting. If it weren't for entering a small dark room, this plot would seem too sad. I believe that the subsequent plots will definitely let us feast our eyes and see happiness at a glance. Unfortunately, I was born at the wrong time and was blocked. I feel very sad in my heart ಥಥ). I hope everyone has a healthy girl who loves you in their lives [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]
The rhythm is very comfortable, but it is a pity that the author seems to be ending. I feel that the chapters about childhood, Fang Lan, and Yu Xiaofeng are all good. It would be nice to write one more chapter and then the ending. I wonder if the author will write another chapter later, and then write the ending of the two green plums, mainly the emotional lines of the two green plums. It mainly focuses on the fragments of childhood, and does not write too much about the current emotional lines. It may be a bit abrupt to write the ending directly, but it is indeed a very good book.
It's really great, but it was removed from the shelves by Smard Tomatoes.
It's very interesting. It occupies a place among the yandere novels I've read. I personally like it and recommend it. Is there anyone coming back to visit the grave? [Crying][crying][crying][crying]
This book is really beautifully written. It stands out among all the bj articles. The author should slow down and don't stop updating. I will keep following it.
Two childhood heroines are enough, author. This is perfect, I will definitely support it to the end. If it's more, your description won't be detailed enough. Come on, the author must only have two childhood heroines. Is there any follow-up?
The future is promising! It's so beautiful! The author must stick to it [blowing kiss]
It's awesome, I feel it's a lot of fun😋, but I don't know why there are so few people watching it
I feel that Lan Qingying is a bit similar to Ruan Mei, and Lin Shihan is a bit like... A robin
The content is okay, but for yandere stories, I feel like there shouldn't be so many female protagonists. For the female protagonists, I feel that two childhood sweethearts are enough. Ning and Wai can have roles, but I still hope there won't be a female protagonist.
How to say it? This novel. Each of his characters has very good characteristics. Especially the one at the beginning. The same goes for the girl who was saved from a domestically violent mother. Of course, the most description of the two of them in this plot is the heroines. And I feel a bit sorry for this novel. Although it is said that everyone has a perfect ending in the end. Although it is said to be about yanderes, there is not much yandere content in it. Moreover, the male protagonist has not lost the vitality that a young man should have when he returns from time travel, and he is very righteous. I am the kind of person who is willing to help others. The most regrettable thing is that there are a few. I feel like I haven't seen enough. Overall, it can be said to be a very good novel. Of course, I don't think it represents everyone's point of view.
Science fiction film, Liu Cixin's "The Three-Body Problem" is still too conservative
Author, I beg you, please give me two more chapters. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. My whole body is itching. I feel so uncomfortable. I beg you, please give me two more chapters. Really, I swear this is the last time. Please, I will steal money for you. Please give me two more chapters.
What a pity, the hateful censorship and random sealing of books!
It looks good, but it's a pity that it's gone in the end.
A salute in advance for the day of return🎆🎆🎆🎆🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇
The protagonist of this book has an 80% chance of being baptized by the sun when joking with the heroine.