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I am commenting here. This novel is of pure blood and is a faithful novel.

Finally, someone is writing about the Forbidden Army. I feel that in the future, the protagonist can become an Eye of the Emperor, participate in various major events, and write thousands of words. The Warhammer literature is becoming more and more colorful. It would be great if there is another Fallen Angel book sometime.

Books are fine. In terms of expressiveness, some people say it is not satisfying enough, but in terms of design, it is already strong enough. After all, no matter how strong it is, he will not be the original body. It is the author who is often tripped up by subspace navigation. It's easy to be dragged into fighting the webway war by yellow skin.

The pacing is well controlled, there is no breakdown in combat power, the understanding of the Warhammer world is in place, and the recent description of the Horus Heresy is very popular. I give it 5 stars and keep up with the updates.

The writing is good, the writing style is very delicate, the characters are very distinct, and it is indeed very good-looking. However, most of the early parts are indeed not very different from the original work. I can also understand that the adaptation of Hammer World is indeed very difficult, but the author's literary skills can also be seen from the things added by the author himself. It's solid. I hope the author can continue to accumulate experience and try to challenge difficult adaptations. After all, Hammer World is too fucked up, and the author has the ability to write a tender side. Through difficult adaptations, human beings can live less miserable lives, and the emperor can't be sucked so miserable, for the sake of the emperor! !

It's good to watch, there are no messy jokes, and it's full of flavor. But there are too few updates. I'm looking forward to the plot of the great rebellion in the future.

The writing is very good. It does not directly ask the protagonist to prevent the great rebellion like other novels. After all, the great rebellion is destined. Come on.

It's good-looking, much better than other so-called mindless cool articles. Warhammer is originally a dark world, and if you can see some light, it's already the best OOC.

It's full of flavor and very beautiful👍🏻The author's writing style is also very good, and it feels very immersive when reading [laughing] The plot is also great, the only drawback is that the update is too slow and I can't see enough, please hurry up and update it.

I feel that the writing is very good, but I don't understand why the author's writing is okay. Why are you teaching people to do things? Every time I finish writing this piece, what impact will it have on the subsequent plot? The author can't tell if he doesn't write. The author has a sense of proportion. I am really convinced. The combat power is still well written. It is much better than the official protagonists who casually destroy the original bodies. The combat power of the forbidden army is also reasonable.

The writing is quite good, and I was very happy to read it. The only thing I am curious about is what is the fate of Angron in this film? I hope it can get better, but if it doesn't work, give me a break and don't be tortured by nails anymore. Every time I hear about wet parts, mounts, etc., My heart aches 😣 I don't particularly agree with this post, I just feel a little distressed

The author's writing is very good. He writes very well about Warhammer. However, the combat power in the early stage is a big flaw. Later, I will correct it and update it quickly. What you updated is a little little and a little slow.

It's a pretty good Warhammer story, and I'm very curious about how the plot will be written in the future. The protagonist's strength as a forbidden soldier is limited. How much can he change in the future? Will the emperor still be a toilet? The Warhammer worldview is so desperate that it is very attractive.

Very good-looking, a rare Warhammer novel. I hope the author will keep up the good work. There are too few and it's not enough to read. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Admiration]

It's super good-looking and highly recommended. The characters are also very profound, and there are thoughts and feelings that we can understand when we travel to the past. Come on, the author, may your soul return to the Golden Throne [shy] I just need to understand the author's sister more. After all, she also has things to do. I hope everyone can wait a little longer. After all, after reading this book, I have read most of the fan works and I feel that they are almost boring. Moreover, I feel that the emperor and the old horse are really brought to life. Come on, I will wait until the end. I have been waiting for half a month. If I can wait for a few days, I look forward to the confrontation between the Warmaster of the Great Rebellion and Hermes @loyal corn

To put it bluntly, the details are more exquisite than Red River (after all, Yi Damo does not pay much attention to some details many times). Compared with not crying, it feels more in line with the darker style of Warhammer.

I haven't seen such an excellent Warhammer fic in a long time since reading Master Commander.

It looks so good, and there are many things in it that are consistent with the original plot, but it has been slightly changed. The main gospel is that the reason for the Horus Heresy has been eliminated.

The pressure in the early stage is too heavy, but it becomes better in the later stage. But I guess except for the super tolerant Mr. Hammer, basically no one can withstand the early stage. However, except for Mr. Hammer, if others want to read Warhammer novels, the threshold is very high, so it will be fine.

It's one of the best among Warhammer fanfics. It's much better than the many Warhammer fanfics nowadays. I just said it's useless and I didn't know how good this book was until I read it myself. It's just that one book a week is not enough to read [crying]

The subject matter is quite novel. It's the first time I've seen the main character being a Custodian in Warhammer. It would be great if some of the established facts about the original body could be changed. I think it's a pity, but it's still very interesting to watch [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Although I am only Yun Zhui, I can tell that this book is very well written. Most of the plots are consistent with the formula book I read. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good and he likes to communicate with readers. In short, it is a very good book. (＾ｖ＾)

It's very good, very real, and every character in it is well portrayed. It's not as mindless as other Warhammer fics. The author writes it very well! The best Warhammer fic, the only one is slow to update [Punch Out][Punch Out][Punch Out]

The Forbidden Army, his sword and the shield of mankind, the most powerful and last warrior in the era of the Unification War, the extension of his consciousness and the container of power, his ruthless rationality, and the perfect machine that strictly abides by instructions.

With the mentality of passing the time, I clicked on it and read it. The more I read, the more I became obsessed with it. There is something good about this book. Such good works are rare. Unfortunately, the updates are too slow. The author should work harder. Mr. Huang will protect you!

The writing is very good, but many details are left out in one stroke. Most of the writing is about major events. The writing is really good, loyal to the emperor, and the protagonist is well portrayed. The emperor here is really written👍. Warhammer is a rare good article. Finally, I want to say something that will make the galaxy burn!

It's okay, but some chapters are a bit skippy. I hope that after the important story points are over, I can write some daily stories, such as a cool plot about showing off my strength in front of the Astartes [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's so commendable. It's rare to write about the Forbidden Army and it's pretty good. It's so commendable! [Adoration]

@ Loyal Corn The author Warhammer has released a new novel "The Carrion Lords of the Empire". It tells the story of the life and death of the Emperor and the true situation of his current situation, as well as the thoughts of the Custodes and their attitudes and feelings towards the Emperor.

It's very interesting, but I don't know why there are so few ratings, and the author's update speed is too slow (｀Δ´)! If you don't update more than a dozen chapters a day, your loyalty will be lost immediately [Start]