One Punch and I Become the King's Substitute

How to say it? The only drawback may be that the avatar can chat with the main body. In fact, I personally prefer to watch the king discover it on his own, and then slowly learn to use this ability. The protagonist is too silly, it would be better if the system's presence was lowered

The system is intelligent, but the petty-tempered person died violently. Maybe the author thinks that such answers are interesting and the jokes are interesting, but in fact the reading experience is a mess. However, the interesting part of this book is that the king's initial mentality and self-awareness are well described. The scenes of worry, self-doubt, and self-questioning are quite real. Xiang Ying It's interesting to see Xiong slowly transform. It's not a brainless harem theme. All in all, this book is pretty good. I hope the author can reduce some of the jokes. In addition, if you think the enemies are too difficult to innovate, the enemies you write don't have to be limited to those in the one-punch world. You can also include some from other worlds, as long as you don't mess up your own rhythm.

It's super good-looking. I was particularly moved by King's transformation from social terror at the beginning to his fearless hero role now, as well as the emotional aspect. But in fact, the main bad point is that after the system died in that article, the protagonist had no emotions at all and seemed very stiff and not handled well. From there, I felt that I couldn't stand it.

I finally found someone who wasn't Shi. Well, Jimei came up and gave me mouth poison. But I have been looking for food in Shi all the year round, so I can still handle it, but I can't stand it anymore because of the apprenticeship [sneaky laugh]

It would be perfect if there was no system. After all, the friendship between two teenagers does not need a girl to accompany it, such as Naruto. Do you know that when I saw K going to challenge a weirdo, he had Jojo's tough guy temperament? Do you know how much trouble there will be if the system suddenly pops up?

The content is very good, but it is a bit slow to pick up, the protagonist is strong but not strong, and there are some poisonous points in the systematic plot. However, despite this, the flaws are still not concealed. This book is still quite good, and I look forward to the author's progress. And... Lots of updates! ! ! (●♡∀♡)

Ah, I was poisoned to death, give me back my system girl [laughing evilly] There is definitely something wrong with the way God's Virus is handled. You have already poisoned the people who don't like the human-changing system, and now you're poisoning the only people who like it with this show [laughing and crying]

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Basketball is such an inconvenience! The ripples are attached to the basketball and dribbling, and you can use the rippled basketball to complete the K-Throw while the enemy is dazzled! This is the Kun Dao ripple rush! !

Author! You must hold on [crazy][crazy][crazy] Immortal magic* five-star recovery technique [love] [punch] [love] The book is very beautiful, whether it is the bond between Zhongfenkun and king, the perspective of the stand-in, and the original plot, the best thing is that the author really listens to the readers' opinions [Blow kiss]

The writing is still good. As for the part about killing the system, it is a bit abrupt, but to be honest, it doesn't affect the overall look and feel. I rarely see fans who write about one punch on Tomato, so I give you some support~

Unknowingly, it has already reached more than forty chapters. Generally speaking, the control of the plot is very good. One chapter a day is fine to maintain this quality. If it is not to make money, just keep it this way. Don't listen to them to rush to update. Follow your own inspiration. If you can write more, save the draft first, and you can revise it slowly.

I like the subject matter very much, and I like the book very much. I hope the author can stick to it. The content is really good. You can take a look. If you don't like it, it's okay. But please give me your support.

This is the best story I've ever read in which a king is the protagonist. There is no competition or system. This time the king truly relies on his own talent to gain strength. A man who has the courage to face four dragon-level monsters with an ordinary body has the power of courage, which makes me feel that he deserves it, rather than being lucky enough to get the golden finger.

The writing is pretty good. Speaking of which, should we also recruit unlicensed knights to be king's apprentices? I feel that unlicensed knights are very suitable for practicing ripples [Thinking]

There are very few people writing about this subject. I hope they can work harder, not to interrupt or eunuch, and to add more elements of dihua.

I rarely comment, but it looks good. The hymn of mankind is the hymn of courage, and the greatness of mankind is the greatness of courage. Needless to say great, five-star praise.

It's nice, but the pictures posted by the author are a bit too realistic. I want to see Jojo's style [laughs]

The writing is very good, and it has the flavor of a hot-blooded comic. I hope it can keep up! Write more!

More words, 4000 per chapter is OK or not.

Personally I think it's well written (first review) This isn't the first time I've commented (angry)

There are really very few fan fictions about Yi Punch and they are basically diaosi harem stories. This one is really good to read. I just hope the author will not be too high-minded and too low-key.

It's so good. I couldn't help but read twenty or thirty chapters in one go last night [Love] It's hard to quit (I won't read it for the time being, I am busy with my studies and have opened too many books) [Chigua] First, let me give you a good review and encourage and support the author [Note] I hope the author will continue to insist that there can be system scenes but not too many (for example, there can only be a few hundred words of system in a chapter of tens of thousands of words [sneaky laugh]. Then why should we hide from Saitama? It's not like the protagonist has never seen a punch, otherwise he shouldn't know King and Saitama, so he should know that Saitama will not take the initiative to hit you unless you are really evil. Even if you take the initiative to hit him but he doesn't care (he feels that it doesn't matter to him, as long as you don't hit other ordinary people [eat melon])

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

It's pretty cool, but the system is really a little bit poisonous to me. [Chigua] I'll give it four stars to encourage it.

It's as good as being drunk for 30 days [Like][Like][Like]

There are very few One Punch Man works. This one is very good.

It's a very novel subject matter. I like this book.

Man, this book looks good, but the updates are too slow. I kept reading it after reading more than ten chapters. I was going to read it today, but it only updated a little bit.

OK, I've wanted to read this kind of book before, and finally someone has written it, and it's very good. Come on, author.