Network God: Across Kyushu

It's okay, but it's weird. The author is like a new author. The first fifty chapters were written a bit slowly and the details were not well controlled. But after fifty chapters and then read about ten chapters, all the threads are connected, a sophisticated person. It feels like the feeling of coming back after writing a novel for a long time, or among the older group who are writing novels for the first time. If this book is charged, I think it would be more appropriate to charge 8.5 Or above. It's 🍅at 9.8. I hope the style doesn't change later and the story line doesn't jump too fast. Now that the theme has been clarified, I estimate that if I write along this route, it will not exceed 500 chapters. In the first fifty chapters, writing the narrative feels like finishing the final chapter first. I'll finish writing Zhou Xing's line around Chapter 120. After combining the annual and life plots, I can write about 220 chapters, and the hidden big brother and offline party types can write 180 chapters, which makes it 400 chapters. The next few dozen chapters are just about trivial matters and things to do to reach the highest level + a happy ending, which should not exceed a hundred chapters. After all, this book has a single heroine, and there won't be many story lines about the heroine. Some notes: If you write about trivial things in life, such as things that happen to the heroine one after another, your rating will be reduced. After all, the male protagonist is too high-profile and has many tricks. It will be very uncomfortable if you waste time on trivial things. Just deal with simple things simply and don't complicate things. Sometimes it's not good to think too much. Ranking list of people retained in branch lines: First, write a charity line, and you can find it through your own nanny or heroine or live broadcast. Second, write the online and offline big brother branch, which mainly involves the protagonist solving problems and then socializing with small groups. Third, write branch plots based on the heroine's perspective, which can be daily life or campus, but the main plot should still be low-key. Fourth, this branch line can be written casually, including company-level matters, some business wars, and strategizing. But it's difficult to write, so I recommend you not to write it. When it comes to writing, it's best to crush it directly, with a back-and-forth and a sorry foreshadowing of the main line. It feels like the protagonist can turn the tide once he takes action. That's all the advice I've given, don't give too much advice.

The beginning of the story is good, but the back part is very slow and fragmented. There are some shortcomings that a new author can understand. From the looks of it, I feel that the author wants to describe the protagonist as stable and casual but also domineering, breaking away from the clichéd nouveau riche's perverse character, and then hates fighting in reality. He wants to rely on external descriptions or surrounding characters to highlight the strength of the protagonist. However, the writing is not strong enough and it seems fragmented, as if he is cowardly and domineering on one side. It can be seen that the author actually wants to write something different. I read the latest chapter and gave the author personal suggestions: 1. In fact, the live broadcast god novel is the most difficult to write. It is either written as a novice upstart novel or nondescript. I don't know if the author has an outline. If there is an outline and I don't know the author's goal of the protagonist at the end or what the protagonist has become, or what kind of point of view he wants to express, the author can think more. 2. The protagonist in any novel is actually like playing a level-breaking game by himself. Each level is a conflict point and conflict resolution. How to reasonably create and resolve conflicts depends on the author's thinking. 3. The exciting points of any novel are different, but the summary is: wealth, power, IQ, and force. How to make these points reasonable and attractive is also what the author thinks about. 4. New authors should try to write as few branch lines as possible, because failure to grasp experience issues can create a sense of fragmentation. 5. Come on, everyone actually has a good story in their mind, but they can't write it out for various reasons. But when the author writes it, it may not be very good, or it may actually be completely divorced from the original story in the author's mind, but if you write it and send it out for others to see, you are already better than many, many people. (4 Points for the idea, 3 points for the good ideas at the beginning, 1 point for encouragement)

Watched it for a while! This book is unique among Tomato's many great writers. It's really good. I hope the author won't stop updating it!

I've read Chapter 452 so far, and I can't stand it anymore. I just can't stand it anymore. I gave up on it for many days, but I still endured it for a while and looked at it again. I can only say that it seemed too frustrating. You are a very capable person. You meet a clown who slanders you. It can indeed be solved from the Internet. But a clown comes to trouble you several times. But there have been no consequences. It just feels incredible. I can only say that the author's beginning is really good. Caught my attention. It makes me want to pursue it all the time and have desire. But the author does not write the middle content very well. Well, I really can't stand it anymore, so I have no choice but to give up. But this is the author's work a long time ago. It's really understandable. I can only say I'm sorry. Yeah, yeah, maybe it's not what I want to see. But I think the author just has the strength to write well. I hope the author will work hard. Come on!

There is no brainless pretense, no forced comedy, it is relatively fresh! ! It fits the character of a rich but lazy person. His laziness makes people feel comfortable. Come on. . . It would be nice if there were more chapters. I'm very lazy and tired of chasing books [smile][smile][smile]

The main poisonous point is that Xiao Xixi...[Awkward laugh]

Add some followers to the protagonist, create a group, and be alone every time. Such an awesome protagonist doesn't even have a few awesome rich second-generation friends or brothers. Get some followers or friends to give the protagonist some blessings on the platform, and he will be a polished commander every time.

It's very well written, and it's a good novel. But in your update, the number of words in one page is really a bit short. You can fill up on this kind of novel, just like an eagle. It doesn't require you to write a perfect score, just about the same, just a large amount is fine.

Good health, good health, good health, good health, good health, good health

It looks comfortable. What kind of updates are there? There must be a lot of saved manuscripts, because the update time is the same every day. Can the progress of the love line of the male and female protagonists be accelerated? When will cultivation be achieved? I can't even find any articles about single female protagonists in live broadcasts, but you are the most suitable one.

It's good to watch, at least I didn't jump to watch it. I can read it, but there is too little written about it.

It's pretty cool. I wonder if there's a female protagonist? Single heroine?

I really like reading it. Come on, author.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The rating almost misunderstood me. The style is different, but it's okay.

There are already a lot of frustrations and sufferings in real life. I just want to read some refreshing articles to escape. Don't delay it any longer. Can you please forgive me, a reader who is on the verge of committing suicide? Please forgive me.

A different kind of live broadcast reward, I like to watch it. It's just a bit short, wait until I raise it and then kill it, it's not enough to watch [laughs evilly]

It looks good, much better than the ones that cost hundreds of millions with one swipe.

I don't know if you like it? Anyway, it suits my taste.

Yes, it is a very interesting book among Shenhao's novels.

A very good divine novel

Yes, it's pretty.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Still remember remember

Good-looking, good-looking

I feel that some of the settings are quite similar to those of Internet giants. However, the scope of writing live broadcast rewards is also small. It's not that bad. As long as you don't use your brain, it's still quite interesting. Among all the reward articles I have read, at least a dozen of them should be in the top five. The other reward articles seem to be the same. This one can give you a new feeling.

It's super good-looking. It's not an ordinary high-profile novel, and there aren't many girls messing around. The protagonist's character is really loveable [laughs], and I can't find a meal replacement at all! Quick update

Come on, the plot is unique among Internet gods. I give you full stars.

Looks good, why is the rating so low?

It's pretty good, I'd love to give it a thumbs up.