God-Slaying: the Beginning Teigu Is Haunted by Evil Ghosts

I really can't give more stars. I think the two stars are to encourage you, the author, who must be a newcomer. I originally like to read novels with novel themes, but your focus doesn't seem to be on your title, Teigu, and is just a bunch of abstract descriptions. It was a bit embarrassing to see me. I don't know if I can see the author. I'd like to give you some advice. If you don't want to change the plot, just follow the plot. You can add additional private enemies. Don't twist the plot mindlessly. Describe more abilities and settings. Conceive more battle scenes. If you don't know how to write about the heroine and the character's emotional scenes, write less. If you want to write about a heroine, be more careful in laying the groundwork first, otherwise the heroine will look like the author is obscene. If you think what I said has affected your mood, what I said is wrong and is bullshit, and reading a free novel means so much, then you can just pretend that I didn't say it.

Didn't you get the ban on using ghosts and gods? Or have you eaten the ban?

Good luck to the author!

Very good, well written, brother [like]

Okay, brother, it's good