Quickly Travel: Cannon Fodder and the Cp-Less Male Protagonist Are Together

After watching the first world, overall, the story and character settings are okay. I also like the interaction between the two protagonists [shy], the active and cool immortal is fragrant hehe... [Love] I like Xianzun's personal extras even more [Love] Just when I was watching, some parts of the content suddenly became incomprehensible. I needed to read back and forth and ponder over and over what the plot of this content meant. For example, in Snake Village, a man in black appeared dead inexplicably. All I know is that I was caught in front of me and I'm going to release the Demon Lord. What next? Then the matter in Snake Village ended. It was not revealed until later that the man in black was the original left guardian of the demon clan. Just a description that feels like the plot is not very coherent? There is some inexplicable lack of content to introduce, click on it, and then connect the next part of the plot content. I have never written anything, so I don't know what to say. It's the attack in the first world. I started doing plot tasks in the later stage (excluding the "perversion" of the Immortal Lord, so I call it the later stage). It can be said to be a hidden line? ? The Immortal Lord is a bright line, and what he does is the same as the Demon Lord written later. It is not the traditional life-and-death confrontation between immortals and demons. They are all pursuing the path of peace among the three races. But the hidden line does not clearly describe the content. Just like what I mentioned before, the one that wrote about a man in black who collapsed suddenly didn't understand what happened suddenly... (Maybe I didn't understand it somewhere) The same goes for the later part. There is a systematic time traveler in the middle. Apart from the fact that he fell in love with the Immortal Lord as the mission target, there seems to be no content at the end. About conquering the demon world, the later part feels like he was dealing with the time traveler. He did something that caused him to be in bad health and got poisoned? Then the time traveler died I just finished watching the first world, and there are still a few things I am confused about. Generally speaking, in part, the plot is not that coherent. Personal feeling (no other meaning) Or maybe the author has some ideas to write about, but he doesn't have enough writing skills to express them, or maybe he doesn't self-examine them? ——Above I just finished watching it, so I am trying to remember the general plot while typing my review. I apologize if there are any mistakes.

I think I like the settings of every world, but I don't know why there are always some that I can't understand. I hope the author can improve it and make it better and better. After all, he is a new author. Keep up the good work (personal opinion, you can delete it if it touches the ground) (*˘˘*). .:*♡

The plot is very good, but the author's ability to control the plot is insufficient, and there may be situations where he feels that he has missed something. However, the plot of the story is still very interesting, the characters are also very good, and the emotional lines are also very well written. I hope the author can continue to work hard and finish writing this book. Maybe he will make progress as he writes.

The interaction between the protagonists is very sweet, and the character settings are also very attractive, but the reading feels a bit incoherent.

It looks good, I just like to see this kind of thing, I can get into it

The first world is very good. Although I personally feel it's a bit sadistic, I still like it [Adoration]

I've watched Three Worlds. It's so good. Come on, the author. Come on, I will always support you.

Looks good, hisssssssssssssssth it [Adoration] [Admiration]

Brother, why is your book sealed?

It's super pretty, but why was it banned? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful, and there's a nice feeling of being surrounded by a sweet atmosphere (covering your face with your chin) (๑Ő௰Ő๑)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Hey hey hey, it looks good, I love watching it, please have some more

The plot is very attractive, and I especially like the protagonist in the book. The character of the protagonist is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I really, really, really like it! ! ! Sir, why don't you write it? I will always follow you... Ahhhhhh...