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If my future girl appeared in front of me, I would definitely be numb, not to mention she came from time-travel and has to fall in love with my future wife [snickering] [snickering] [snickering] Don't be too happy with this plot setting! I like it so much!

My dear mother, this novel is so good. The author's imagination is really great. This kind of fanfic is somewhat similar to Naruto. As a senior fan of Naruto, I think this is very well written. The content is rich, the plot is compact, and it is also funny. It must be given five stars!

Now that I see it, my favorite character is more attractive to me than my future daughter Bai Lianmeng or my biological sister Bai Yun. She is really funny and can teach her brother about love. And in terms of personality, although she is very possessive of her brother, she will not really stop her brother from falling in love. She just talks but will not put it into action. She even has many assists. I like this sister Bai Yun so much!

Oh my god, I can't stand it anymore. This kind of pampering really drew me in. I also thought that such an omnipotent father was really charming. It successfully brought me in, the plot is pretty good, the author has his own thoughts, it's very enjoyable and interesting!

The male protagonist's strength is still online, and the overall atmosphere is relatively relaxed. The various things that happened after returning from the Naruto World after World War II to the Fourth War are really interesting. Every character is very vivid, and I love it so much.

The further I read, the more I read. I feel that the mental refining method is quite good, and the ninjutsu is also successful. I am so envious of it. I can only say that the author is very good at writing, and I am going to stay up late tonight to catch up.

All I can say is that it is so open and beautiful. I haven't seen such a beautiful novel in a long time. The characters in the novel are really attractive to me. The male protagonist is really the image of the father in my heart. He protects his shortcomings and is so flavorful. I hope that the plot will remain the same in the future. Come on!

I like the setting of the characters in the article, and the description of the details is also very good. The novel is full of charm, the story is very innovative, the author's imagination is very rich, the characters are vivid, the plot is novel and not procrastinating, and the characters have outstanding characteristics! It's so interesting that the male protagonist travels through the world of Naruto and back again, and has an additional daughter, I love it!

Four stars for encouragement, I watched half of it, the subject matter is novel, it's okay, but it's just plain water for me

The warmth that the future daughter brings to the protagonist is something he has never experienced in the original world or the Naruto world. Sure enough, the most binding thing is family affection!

The protagonist's daughter is so cute, it makes him live his life over again! In the past, his daughter was taken care of by his grandparents in his hometown, but now he suddenly appears in his life and asks him to find his mother to fall in love. OK, let's take it!

I really like the author's writing style. The characters are described very carefully. The little daughter is so cute. It melts my heart. The plot is progressive. I like the exclusive pupil technique that can control time.

The plot is so immersive. The interaction with the daughter is natural and warm. It is full of interesting points. It is really beautiful and gives people a feeling that they really exist. I hope the male protagonist will become stronger and stronger.

Daily writing, a bit creative, few superpowers.

It may be a bit dull in the early stage, but the more I read, the more exciting it becomes. The ups and downs of the plot design are still interesting, and it is easy for me to immerse myself in the plot and be unable to extricate myself ~ I encourage the author ~ Come on and update!

Those who were attracted by the title of the book did not expect it to be unexpectedly good-looking. Although it is a time-travel theme, it is not conventional. Everything the male protagonist has experienced is too interesting. He lives in a parallel world, familiar and yet strange.

I have to say that the author's imagination is so rich. The male protagonist's growth and coping strategies when facing difficulties are wonderful. The plot is full of ups and downs and the characters are vividly drawn. It's just a bit lacking. Please write more and it's not enough!

Can the author start a book club?

The plot is novel, the writing is profound, and the characters are vivid. It is a very light-hearted article about daily urban supernatural powers. It is great to have a daughter! You must go up the mountain of knives and the sea of ​​fire!

The setting is amazing, the plot is a warm daily novel, and it feels really good to read!

Okay, but can that person who announced something please leave immediately? That person really has a lot to do.

It looks good, and has a relaxing feeling like watching ordinary comics.

This is the first time I have watched this kind of urban fantasy time travel Naruto with children. The setting is really awesome, and the plot inside is very good. The protagonist has a good personality, and the interaction with the family makes me feel very warm. Write more, I love watching it.

It's a book I like very much. The characters the author describes are very vivid [cool]

This novel is really good. The author really wrote Bai Heng into my heart. The plot in it is really amazing. All the characters are really wonderfully portrayed. Whether it is the sister or the daughter, they all have their own characteristics. It is a rare good book and deserves five stars.

It looks good, but it's just a pigeon [crying]

The protagonist's growth path is greatly enhanced by having a future daughter, and his future wife is about to get it, not bad!

Come on, it's well written. It would be better if there were more battle plots later.

I like this kind of daily urban emotional articles, and the blessing of superpowers, which really adds some fun, very interesting, and very exciting!

The protagonist slowly builds a deep emotional connection with his future daughter. The growth and changes of the character in this process are often deeply rooted in people's hearts. A pretty good book!