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Summary: The skill names are relatively average, and there are many original world views. When I read it, I always felt that there were no comments. There are a lot of monthly memes (but we have to put them into practice [laughter]). If you have the patience to understand the world view, it is worth watching. Brother, brother, how do you persist? It's already 1 million words and you haven't rated it yet and you still insist on writing [face covering] [OK]

Overall, it's good. I borrowed the protagonist's background similar to the Center of All Worlds to change some things (change the knife or pave the way for the later stage, etc.). The logic is relatively smooth. From the current tens of thousands of words, it can be seen that the outline is still good. However, what is a bit disadvantageous is that the number of words is currently too small, and some key plots have not yet had time to unfold. For some readers who want to see the key plots or characters, they may not be able to wait and then buy or abandon the book [face covering].

This book contains a lot of meme elements, and the protagonist is a bit too lively. I personally don't accept this style very well and it is difficult to read. However, the author's setting is quite attractive. It's a pity that I can't read it in detail. However, I would like to encourage the author with five stars and hope you can write better works.

Comment on yourself: The content of the prologue and the first chapter is not that good due to the imperfect early outline and writing problems. After the follow-up worldview outline was finalized, the author himself was able to read more. The overall pace of the book is slow (Abydos was 500,000 words long and now it is 1.4 Million words long. The second chapter of the Millennium Chapter is not over yet [face covering]) I admire myself for being able to write so much. The outline of 9 chapters plus the final chapter will be written until the end of the year of the monkey (you can see the last chapter of the fourth volume of One Hundred Ghosts at Night). And most of them are textual research, and some of them are actually a bit unclear. It takes patience and understanding. The world view in the book incorporates many familiar settings or references many mythological concepts to complete the academy city of Kivotos. The setting is naturally different from the official one. The story line of Kivotos is similar to the story line of the parallel world. Fandom cannot represent orthodoxy. There will definitely be a happy ending in the end, there will be some small twists and turns in the process, but the outcome will definitely be redeemed. (On this stage, get your own salvation) The concept of "self-stage" is actually implemented in the entire story, but the length is too long and it has not been directly revealed yet (poor! Anyway, I hope you will support me a lot.

The worldview is relatively complete, the characterization of each character is also perfect, and the plots are arranged appropriately. Let me sum it up, it is a masterpiece (no kidding) Random thoughts: When I talked about Kabbalah's Tree of Life, I suddenly thought of EVA ()

The narrative rhythm and narrative style are very good, and many of the "crazy" plots are very suitable to my taste. And the discussion about "self" in it gave me a lot of inspiration and insights. In short, it is very good. I hope the author will write better and better. [Laughing evilly] Want to see the reading time

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more It's easy to be confused in the early stage and be persuaded to give up. But it's nice to watch, love to watch, watch more To tell a joke, I used to be worried about whether no one would read the novel I would write in the future (a book written after the college entrance examination), so I should continue writing. This book made me less confused. After all, I wrote a lot of ideas but no one read them, so I still kept writing [smile]

The world view is not bad, come on author

I don't know why the popularity of this book is so low. It has more than 900,000 words. The author also has the perseverance to help you.

Personally, I think it's okay, although I don't understand what I'm saying. Σ( ° △ °|||)

Good looking, really good looking teeth

Why is no one watching? I think it's okay.

Well written, good luck to the author

It looks good, it just looks good, but there are some places that I can't understand.

Strength! Ba! Powerful! Just like this style

The book is not bad, the world view is relatively complete, the content is very interesting, not boring, and the setting of the protagonist is also very interesting.

Why is it written so well? No one is optimistic about it. What a pity. Is the circle too small?

And if you can work hard, I will support you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very interesting. Why is it only read by more than 1,000 people with more than one million words? ? [Cover face]

Very good, the author has worked so hard! It's so scary! Come on, the author is great [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] You are a strong person and someone I will always learn from. I believe you will be successful in the future! [Like][Like][Like]

So cute and good-looking, with five-star teeth I have to say, overall it looks very good. Be happy when you should be happy, be serious when you should be serious. Apart from a little too much punctuation, the look and feel is very good. The number of stalks is very large. The worldview is well integrated

This book is very nice

Very good book, made my popcorn machine spin.

It looks good as a one-month plan. People who play Bilandu are very satisfied.