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It's beautiful. When it's funny, I laugh so much that my stomach hurts. When it's sweet, the sugar content is over the limit but it's sweet but not greasy. The reason why I only gave it four stars is because some of the descriptions in it really, really pissed me off! Step three times! So, I will give it four stars and let it go for a while. I will wait until I forget the disgusting feeling of those thunderous points before I come back to watch it (Manual Goodbye. Jpg)

Damn, the child wants to see all the directions (˵¯͒¯͒˵), such as: Zhou Ping, Wang Mun, Yue Gui, Whirlpool, Tian Ping, Lin Qiye, Shen Qingzhu⌓‿⌓

There are a lot of foreshadowings, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are very good, the plot is exciting, there are many cars, there are many ambiguous scenes, there are many emotional scenes, I really like watching this kind of plot with our team participating in the recruit training, it can be better seen that the emotional lines are carefully written [shy]

It's really beautiful, rich in content, and well connected. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the front. It's quite exciting, and it's considered very good among fan fiction. However, I suggest you read "I Learn to Kill Gods in a Mental Hospital" first, and then read this one, otherwise it will be difficult to understand.

I really like Da Da's writing. I have found other fanfics. The heroine's highlight is too bright, either taking away the highlight of the original night, or saving the person who was stabbed three-nine times (although this is very good). The changed plot line makes me feel that the night is no longer necessary. The author let the heroine save it. It changed everyone's soul but did not change the original work too much, and the important thing is that everyone listened to the advice. After all, I read the "Zhushen" fanfic to make up for the heart that was stabbed three-nine times. Isn't it because I was reading a novel based on this name that is not very consistent with the original work. I love it in big letters. [Adoration] Finally, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. If it doesn't conform to other people's feelings, you can comment if you want, but don't attack my young mind [blowing kiss]

It is not ordinary good-looking, it is the ceiling of God-killing fan fiction in my mind. The author is very bold, based on more imagination in the original work, and there is no writing failure. Each character is very three-dimensional, and the language is delicate and silky. The author basically lays out the foreshadowing in every chapter. It is really beautiful, recommended.

This novel begins with King Mian forming the Masked Team. It tells the story of the formation process of the Masked Team, and the female protagonist Diancai is added in the middle. At the beginning, she joined very simply. Later, due to some reasons, she followed the monk through time and space, thus learning some secrets and changing the fate of some people. And it played a big role in the recent Cangnan incident. Although Cangnan still disappeared, the heroine worked really hard, and the most important thing was that she eliminated Loki, so that Leng Xuan and the girl in Team 136 no longer had to leave their hometowns. I was very touched. Zhao Kongcheng did not disappear, and the first person to come out of the mental hospital was Sun Wukong. I like it so much. I hope the author will update more every day. Thank you for your hard work. Thank you very much. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

In this novel, the heroine traveled to the world of God-Zlayer because of a curse word, and had a complete training camp life with the Masked Team. The emotional line was not abrupt, and she was sweet and cruel with the king. The author also thoughtfully marked the emotional lines in the chapters, which was super thoughtful. The author's writing style is very good, and you can definitely read it as the second book "Zhan Shen Shen" (I'm not trying to trick people, don't criticize if you don't like it) Butterflies cannot flap their wings easily. This book perfectly explains this sentence. Because the heroine changed certain things, the ending of Da Xia failed, and then the cycle started. It's the same loop as the original work. This is the first time I've seen this in a fanfic. It's super nice.

So pretty! I'm just curious about what happened to Wang Mian and the others last time? I'll think about it after I finish the update. It's okay to tell it in a side story or through Wang Mian's mouth. I really want to see the female Neptune, but in the end it can only be Wang Mian! ! ! Is there any foreshadowing? Anyway, the final ending doesn't have to be a knife.

The regrets in the original work are indeed made up here. Everyone is the protagonist in their own life. They may be small, but they are all uniquely great. Like this book very much. The plot is extended and expanded, and the foreshadowing is small and accurate (don't mind if the adjective is wrong). I love this book so much, the author praises it very much The last little request, is it true that you can't write the history of Cai Cai's peach blossoms? [Shy] I'm so looking forward to it. It's so cool to be able to pass through thousands of flowers without a single leaf touching me.

So pretty. I love Mi Lu very much. She is very cute and cute. I really like Wang Ming teasing Mi Lu [Adoration] [Adoration]. The other team members are also very good. I hope there will be more emotional scenes! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author must update ten times a day ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh updating me. It's not enough to read [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The author is diligent in updating, the content is warm and interesting, Wang Mian is very innocent [shy], some details are well grasped, and more importantly, it is still Masked Otome! !

Ahhh, it's so good. This is the only one I've seen. The last scene with the God-Slayer King is the male protagonist. It's good. Keep up the good work. The only bad thing is that there are too few. I hope the author will save the draft and give us a chapter of 1200 or so one day. Hehehe @PIKACHU who loves instant noodles

Very very beautiful! It's better than anything I've ever seen. Compared to traditional fan fiction, this feeling is more in line with God of God. There is no sense of disobedience in including the heroine. The plot is also linked one by one like God of God. The most important thing is that you can read sweet articles while reading CP. It is really a masterpiece! Big push!

It's so beautiful😍I love it. Overall, I feel that the protagonist is "time". According to the original work, it was unrealistic for Wang Mong to pursue Cai Cai from the beginning, so later on he discovered that it was Wang Mong from another timeline who had returned to the past. It's all about "traveling back in time", but when I saw the first episode, where the fateful flashback happened, I didn't know where I was back. I kind of forgot about the previous plot [face covering]. If any friends saw it, I hope they can comment.

Nice! Nice! Nice! Say important things three times! I like the heroine's character very much, she is sassy and decisive, although sometimes she is forced to be funny by the system. The heroine and Wang Ming's cp are so good! This time, the captain beat the long river of time, and everyone was saved [crying] Wow, wow, I cry~ It makes up for the regret of the original ending, and I express my crazy gratitude to the author!

It's so sweet, I just love so much sugar! It held me in control for eight hours after I clicked on it, and the corner of my mouth never dropped. It was too funny. Wang Ming and Weiwei were all vivid and vivid without any OOC. I read more than fifty chapters in one go, and the fried chicken was so good!

The author really writes very well [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's really good to watch, Wang Mun has traveled from the future, and the emotional scenes between the heroine and Wang Mian are also very sweet, emm... But you have to ignore some of the hidden knives, um... Overall it's also very sweet. Well, yes, I highly recommend it anyway [shy][shy]

This is the first time I have seen such a good fanfic. To be honest, I have never commented on it after reading so many novels, but he is really good-looking! ! ! There are a lot of foreshadowings and pictures provided by the author. I also like the emotional line, and there are a lot of climaxes. I really recommend it [Adoration] [Laughing]

The plot is very detailed, the emotional scenes are quite explosive, and it's a bit funny. When I read other fanfics, I was only halfway through this book, and it's still pretty good. I'm just following this one now.

Very good, good-looking^ω^, with a lot of foreshadowing, and very real, because it is very satisfying to watch others suffer, especially to see others suffer the same suffering as you have suffered. Very sweet, must be five stars Warm reminder, the following content may contain spoilers. If you don't want spoilers, please don't read it yet. At the same time, it is also to make up for the regret. Zhao Kongcheng did not sacrifice and awakened the Forbidden Ruins, which can be regarded as making up for the general's regret. The heroine is also very strong. Medusa's agent did not surrender to the enemy, and neither did Han Shaoyun. Even Sister Hongying gained an idol for no reason... [Laughing] And the Ancient God Church, hahaha, it was all destroyed. And our Sword Immortal, as long as he has read two novels, it won't be a problem. Hehehe, you give me back the 19th and the 39th, and the 39th, you give me back the Zhou Ping! Moreover, I am wondering, Yijiu, Yijiu, so many readers are complaining about you, can you hand out less knives? Look at this writer, how self-aware he is! Compared with your knife, it's only 0.000001%, Hum! Throughout the book, I never expected those 114 love letters to the heroine... I wanted to laugh, but I didn't dare, for fear of losing all my merits. And is Cao Yuan really a wife? I also have more useless knowledge. I never thought that the Time God Ruins could be so useful.

I like the heroine's character and her writing is very good. Come on (⑅˃◡˂⑅)

This book is one of the top three among the God-killing fanfics I have read...! ! ! ! ! ! The only drawback is that there are too few and it's not enough to read (╥╯╰╥)ง Why doesn't the author write more?

This book is so good. Everything I want to read is written down. It almost looks like I have the same brain.

I really like the emotional line between the heroine and Wang Mian, and I hope the author will continue to update it!

It's super good to read. Although the emotional line written by the author is a bit fast, it's really sweet. It's great to watch more stories about women chasing men and then watching men chasing women. Moreover, this book is no longer centered around the protagonist. Everyone has their own characteristics. Anyway, I highly recommend it [Like]

It's so beautiful. I hope the author won't give up. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] [Sad] I don't really like love plots, so write more group portraits [Blowing kisses]

It's simply a masterpiece. I guarantee with your personality that if you don't read this book, you will regret it for the rest of your life. I didn't want to read it at first, but many people recommended this book, so I read it. It's really super good-looking and sweet! ! ! ! ! ! !

I still like it very much. I remember that when I first started reading it, there were only about 50 chapters, and it was finished without even realizing it. The rating also went from more than seven points at the beginning to just over nine points now. Keep up the good work, the author! I look forward to continuing to write better Zhanshen fan fiction ~ [Making faces]