The Heroine Time Travels: Crazy Criticizes the Heroine for Always Wanting His Eyes

It looks good (✪▽✪), I like it. Both the heroine and the hero are so cute ~ The writing is smooth and the plot is warm. It feels like what happened is natural. I love reading sweet stories. It soothes my little heart that was made to cry to death by the last sweet sadistic story I read.

It's my favorite character [Send Heart], and the relationship line is pretty good, that's right... I wish the author would write more about the relationship between them, their interactions, etc. [Send Heart], I mainly wanted to see them falling in love, but I felt like I only wrote a little bit (not enough), and I wrote a few chapters about getting to know each other in the early stage, and one or two chapters in the middle. There is a transition in explaining the relationship, and the last one or two chapters conclude their relationship. There is really too little description of the interaction between their relationship lines [crying] [crying], not enough to read at all (I like to see the details in the relationship line, and the author's description of some small details of the relationship is quite good [like])

No one has commented on such a beautiful book. The writing style is really good and the plot is exciting. The female protagonist who is a bit perverted and the male protagonist who is crazy is really well written. It is very interesting and I love to read it. More to come.

Finished reading, it's okay

Good looking, highly recommended [like][like][like][like]

There are not many emotional lines, most of them are career lines. Although it is not explicitly stated that the heroine falls in love with the hero, the process of the heroine falling in love with the hero can be seen from some details.

It's my favorite type. I'm crazy about the heroine with high strength value VS the handsome young man, but there are not many emotional lines, not enough

It's pretty good, but the ending caught me off guard [smile]

The heroine is slightly yandere, the pace is fast, but the characters are well drawn.

Not enough, I personally like to watch [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It looks good, the plot is smooth, I like the characters of the male and female protagonists

It looks good, I feel that the career of the court accounts for 60%, and I can be happy in the end. There is nothing special in the middle.

Good-looking, good-looking, I like the heroine, her character is amazing [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][admiration][admiration][admiration]

I like the author's writing style and the plot is very smooth [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Pray for peace and happiness (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

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It looks like a pretty good short article, worth reading. Highly recommended.

It's okay. I've finished watching it. The heroine is more interesting.

The heroine is strong and she is real. Unlike some writers who brag about how awesome she is, she can't do anything well when things go wrong [Like]