After Becoming a Vicious Female Master, the Heroine Comes for Revenge

In Chapter 44, the heroine died in my imagination, and then I wrote the scene in my imagination. I don't know if my writing is good or not. It's the first time I wrote 😳😳😳 Tianjian Peak Jiang Mo suddenly looked back and looked in one direction A beautiful figure came leisurely with her hands behind her back A white hair like pale stars condensed at this moment Like the pale god of death, but also like the witch of vicissitudes of life At this moment, the sky slightly revealed a ray of morning light There seems to be a chill in the air Everything seemed to slow down at this moment, and the long river of time seemed to slowly condense. The figure raised his hand leisurely, and a simple long sword appeared in his hand The sacred object of Tianjian Peak! Holy Spirit Heavenly Sword! The qi machine penetrates the world and seems to kill everything! The holy instrument of full recovery! Lin Qingxian slashed out a sword leisurely The world seems to be frozen at this moment The breath of the holy soldier seems to be able to destroy everything. The sky and the earth seem to be divided into two parts. The world seems to be frozen in a black and white photo, with only black and white remaining. There is no limit to reach! Countless runes suddenly manifested and released immeasurable divine light. Tianjian Peak's peak protection formation! The power of destroying heaven and earth seems to be restrained here, and no trace of it is leaked. Jiang Mo stood up and stared at the black and white Is this still the ending? The tenderness these days has been false after all... Ginger Moth's pupils were shining with dazzling and majestic golden light, and her beautiful hair was flying. The golden light is like the gaze of a god, and the power of the god is like prison. She punched out, and the boundless light rushed toward the source of black and white like an ocean. The black and white sword energy across the sky and the earth seems to be illusory, being submerged by the vast golden ocean, and will disperse at the touch of it. The majestic and boundless light drowned the pale figure at the end of the black and white There is only one sentence left that echoes here "You have really grown up..." Jiang Mo was startled, and tears slowly fell down unintentionally. Master, she seems to be going to die? Why… Tears fell on the ground inadvertently, and Master's tenderness echoed in my mind The last memory is fixed under the wishing cherry tree May the world become gentle and treat all kind people kindly... May the moth's wishes come true... Those pictures seem to be right in front of you, but yet they are so far away Jiang Mo came back to his senses and looked there, with tears in the corners of his eyes. Under the gaze of the morning light, a simple broken sword was stuck sideways on the ground. The morning sun shone through the hilt of the sword on the ground. Jiang Mo looked at it blankly, tears running down his cheeks uncontrollably.

The forced torture written earlier was not good, but it doesn't matter because I came here to see the education and training🤓👆

It looks good, but can the protagonist's front armor be strengthened?

Good, very good, super good, but there are still some small flaws. From the death of the heroine Lin Qingxian to Lin Qingxian's resurrection and the reunion of master and apprentice, the writing is not delicate enough, which makes people feel a bit stiff, but overall it is very good. Come on

Hiahiahia [make a face] [make a face] [make a face] I want to eat a knife 🥺 🥺 🥺 let me eat a knife [stop] [stop] [stop] Well, I want to see Jiang Moth's ugly appearance now hiahiahia

It's a good story, but I really don't have the patience to read it later. It's a running account and an ancient plot. I can see the beginning at a glance. Some of the protagonists in the front suddenly died, which also made me quite confused. The foreshadowing was not enough. It could have been a more shocking death. However, the author did not use it as a breaking point and quickly arranged to meet. It's quite good here. It looks very comfortable. There is no sense of powerlessness that neither of them has a mouth. Overall, it is very good.

It feels like an adaptation of "The Scum Villain's Self-Saving System" Lily [awkward laugh]

If the convention was still being held when the main character in the 40-odd photos died, and I found out the truth later, I went out for a walk, a firework exploded in the air, and then I saw on the back of the group photo it said, "Xx, I can't walk with you, I want to be happy." That would be a killer 😄

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It was well written, and then I looked at my previous works. Damn, I've read two of them. No wonder I thought this book was well written and followed the author.