Xiangliu: My Lord, Like the Wind Upon the Water

It is a short and concise article, and I finished it quickly. The setting is quite unique, and it is one of the more innovative among many Yaoliu articles. It's just that the writing style is a bit immature~ Some of the location settings are contrary to the original work. If you read more and understand it, you will be able to follow it~ The ending is a bit rushed and has a feeling of unfinished meaning, which shows that the author is getting better and better as he writes. At the end, I saw the author saying: "The flow is not very good, I couldn't write anymore, but I still insisted on giving the story an ending." I understand the feeling of powerlessness~ Then I will also take the time to write a book review to encourage the young author! Let's talk about what I like about this article: 1️⃣Maoqiu, the arrogant and cute eagle, became his master due to his obsession with his master. He wanted to avenge his master but couldn't bear it. Although he was conflicted, he had to do it. His feelings for Yao were also conflicted. Did he almost fall? I love this little furball so much 2️⃣Fenglong, a cheerful and sunny boy, grilling fish with his bare hands is a joke in the article, everyone can eat it happily 3️⃣Although Xiao Xiangliu's appearance is a little late, she finally arrived. She is milky, ferocious, and cute. The little Hydra is vividly written in the description of a few words, which makes people smile like an aunt. I like it very much. It can be seen that the author is a very caring person 4️⃣Yao entered the dreamland twice and went to Wangchuan three times. He exchanged his eyes for the chance of Liu's resurrection, and nourished the remaining soul with his heart. He was broken and obsessed with love. It was very touching. After hundreds of years, he finally said: I love you, and I shed tears at that moment. 5️⃣The character of Tan Zhu is still likable, but the description is a bit weak and there are some contradictions. I don't understand why he protects Yao while working with Xinyue to control Cang Xuan. 6️⃣The setting of the entanglement between Yinglong, Gui Fangyi and the jade carving is good, but maybe the space is limited and cannot be explained in detail, leaving room for imagination. 7️⃣The supporting characters of Ferryman and Xinyuehu are very well written! 8️⃣Yao Liu's three eggs and three babies, I love them very much ~ If there are extra stories about the children to entertain the whole family, I will love them very much 9️⃣Cang Xuan is still a very good brother if he is not crazy. Using jade pendants to nourish Yaoliu is also to fill up the regrets in his heart. Love cannot be obtained, and hoping that she can be safe and sound is not a great love~ Thanks to the author for giving Yaoliu HE, so that friends who like Yaoliu can have spiritual sustenance. If this article can be carefully crafted, maybe the effect will be better! I just got into the game. I watched the drama and the original book. Now I am looking for various Yaoliu articles to calm down my feelings. I have just learned to write book reviews, so please forgive me if I express any discomfort! Come on, author, the more you write, the better!

It's nice to watch, but I feel that there aren't as many daily cookies between Yao Liu as when she was pretending to be Mao Qiu. She abuses Xiao Yao physically but not emotionally. There are too many private scenes of other characters in the later period (even more bloody than Yao Liu). I just want to watch Yao Liu.

Very nice! Great! In this life, Xiaoyao went to the underworld and suffered a lot in order to resurrect the Nine-Headed Siren, and brought the Nine-Headed Siren out! Use your own heart to resurrect the Nine-Headed Siren! Sincere love! Finally it was complete! Live happily together! And they have 3 children!

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Very well written, cheers

Very beautiful, sweet, sad, very good

Very interesting, the plot is very exciting

Let's continue writing the next book. The author is great [top post]

Very beautiful, keep up the good work

Nice. A short to medium-sized story with a tight plot. The writing is good.