I Transmigrated into a Book to Redeem the Villainous Master, but My Disciple Turned Dark

Very nice! As a veteran who has read countless master-disciple stories (bush), this article still attracted me. The plot is not cliché and has its own new ideas and ideas. The writing style is more delicate. Each character has its own characteristics and the shaping is relatively full! The description of the fight gave me the feeling of watching a male video, which is really amazing. But I would like to make some suggestions of my own: 1. The progress may be a bit slow, especially the description of the fight. Although the description is very good, it will be a bit boring if you read too much. You can select some key points to write appropriately and skip the others. 2. Although the protagonist's emotional line is a sub-line, I really feel that there is so little in the early stage (I haven't watched the later stage yet), and there is very little physical contact. Both of them are too well-behaved. I want to eat sweets. Everything else is very good ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ It's just a personal suggestion, no malice, could the author finish it all at once? I want to read it 🥺

This is my first time writing a long review. This is the best article I have read since I entered 🍅. The first is the setting aspect. The setting of the subject really impressed me! The character image is very full-bodied, and from beginning to end, he is the image of a very powerful and vicious-mouthed master. Shou understands Gong's psychology very well. From Gong's point of view, he guides him bit by bit and guides him out of the shadow of his previous life and out of his inner demons. He is so gentle and powerful, and he often makes jokes to reduce the disparity caused by his status and interact with other people. I really like it so much! Then, Gong is also a talented player who is careful and tenacious. As Shou's only apprentice, he will not be forced to love cheats like in the brainless sweet novels. He was touched by Shou's tenderness and slowly discovered that he had different feelings for Shou. He cared more about his master and worked hard to catch up with his master on his own. In fact, I don't really like the setting of differences in status and strength, because the superior will always compromise, or the inferior will be given some tricks to even the disparity, and the process of the attacker and the recipient being motivated to love each other is missing. But the emotions in this book are very natural. Although the perspective is biased toward the recipient, the two convey each other's emotions very truly and smoothly. Furthermore, it is the image of the supporting role. Usually, the description of the supporting characters in the novel is not so detailed, and at most it is just a background board to complete the plot, but this novel! This book is completely different. You can feel that the author has set up each character in great detail. The echoes and foreshadowing are smooth and natural. The writing style is also very good. There is no pretense like all kinds of obscure classical Chinese texts that have been cobbled together in ancient times. This book is very well done! Finally, because this article is not finished, the above are just my thoughts so far. If there are any subsequent changes, I will review it again. Sorry if any offense was caused. But now I still want to praise the author, this book is really great! I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development, and I hope that this good book can be discovered by more people!

There is no plot of working hard to cultivate and pursue the great road, it is always a conspiracy. The master CP said whether it was sweet or not, and it was wrong to say it was not sweet. There was a feeling that it was a pity to throw away the food if it was tasteless. The master always held it in front of the disciple, with the appearance of an elder, not as an object (Taoist companion). It was more like what the disciple said, the master was conniving towards him, not loving him. As a bystander, this feeling seems to be forced by the apprentice. The master is indulgent enough to allow him to do this and that, but that's all. There is no ascension, no great way, no public relationship (that is, a discerning person can tell they are a couple), and no Taoist couple. Master can truly be himself in front of his senior brothers and friends! Really, I always act like an elder in front of my apprentice (object)! It's held!

The emotional line is well described, but the plot is very vague in comparison. If this is not a romance novel, then it is absolutely nothing to read. But the author's advantage lies in this. She has good control over romance and character design, and the character design of the protagonist is also very likable. I have read too many similar stories about Master, where they all dress up as the villain Master and then panic and behave in a manner that is full of flaws. In the end, he turns into a child and becomes a small animal in an extremely OOC way to act cute. The author's article is not like this, so the settings of the lotus demon and the weapon trainer are very curious. It's a pity that the plot is not exciting enough. Although some important nodes are foreshadowed, it seems to be as boring as reading a textbook, without a sense of excitement and expectation. Keep up the good work, this book is already acceptable in Tomato.

The only one, well, it's really the only one. I've already recommended it to people around me before I finished it. And basically as soon as they finished listening to it, they wished I could share the book with them during my vacation. At present, it seems that the progress of the plot is very stable and very interesting. People are looking forward to what will happen next. And I have to say that the content is also very novel to a certain extent. In this era of robbery and robbery (╳) Junzhi, you must become a person who is cold on the outside and not hot on the inside, but must not be cold to achieve your master's goal of cultivating righteous disciples with great success (clench fist) It's rare that the character's image is so full-bodied and not too facial-looking. It's created to the extent that a person with this kind of character would do this in this situation. And the relationship between the master and the apprentice is really cute. . (You two must keep getting along like this (make a sound.)) The jokes are surprisingly appropriate. It seems that even if Xiao Ruyu opens his eyes and his name changes to Yu Ruxiao, it seems that he is still secretly making jokes under the quilt (╳ I applaud him). The text looks light, but it is very good. It is probably like the step of adding fragrance to the tail. The fragrance has not come out yet, but in time it will leave an impression of a fragrant text. (Oh my God, ignore this girl. It looks like she doesn't know what she is talking about. She is a little girl who was severely poisoned by the Proust effect (should be called this.).) In short, teacher, you must write when you open your eyes, and conceive when you close your eyes!

I've read two-thirds of this book. The writing is very delicate, the fighting is very passionate, it's very interesting, and the protagonist's relationship is also very comfortable. The sub-CP is also good, but I feel that there are always ominous premonitions, bad situations, and memories that I can't recall. It makes people panic and anxious. The plot is a little dragged out, and a third of it doesn't know what the main plot of the book is about. It only knows that it is about upholding justice. I really can't hold it back and write a review. I'm not criticizing the author. This is the most real feeling I had after reading this book ❤️ ❤️

Excellent product! But the plot setting more than thirty chapters ago feels a bit samey, and the writing is a bit watery, which makes it easy for people to abandon the article. From the beginning of more than 40 chapters, the writing was very good. I once suspected that the author had changed the editor to polish it, especially the fighting part. It was very well written! It looked very graphic. The shaping of the characters is also becoming more and more distinct, and the psychological activities and thoughts of the characters are very mature. The relationship between the master and the disciple is also gradually developed and understood, rather than being overly deliberate and respectful one moment, and then being together like a car accident the next. Personally, I think this is one of the best-looking works on Tomato among so many dual-male master-disciple stories (ps, if it's not unfinished, it's still being serialized after all) My guess is that it will take more than 400 chapters to finish. I read several books while waiting, and I almost forgot about the previous plot 🤦

[What] I don't know why this book's rating is not so high? Is it because it's not over yet? I feel like it should be above 8.5 Rather than 9 o'clock or higher. I feel that the overall writing style and rhythm are pretty good. I like this kind of emotional breakthrough that follows the logic of the plot step by step. It is not so abrupt. The slower it is, the more enjoyable it is. Although this kind of story that combines elements such as master and apprentice to become immortals, travel through books, and become black is already bad, but sometimes it suddenly becomes good. I've always wanted to find this kind of article, but I really can't stand the writing style and logic 🤦 This one is rare and very interesting. Even with the name Yuheng, I always find it easy to get into trouble 😂 Come on, author, keep up with this update frequency, I hope I can catch up to the end [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's so cool. Men see menstruation, and women get crazy when they see it. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River. It's so cool. It's like God is my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so happy that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water😭😭😭

I haven't watched it for a long time and it's finally over🥀 The emotional line is really very delicate and flowing. After reading it, I feel like I can't get out... I also like this rare deputy CP. The explanation about Lu Zhixue is relatively vague, but I can figure it out in my head. I really want to watch the extra chapter about him. It's really heartbreaking for this pair of brothers, but if both of them die, it's a good ending, hahahaha (already crazy) In the extra chapter, this line by Senior Brother Yu Wu is really nice. It has great stamina and makes me very sad. Can you write an if line 😢 if Yu Wu is not possessed by a demon or something like that?