Jing Xuan's Adorable Big Shot

The details are pretty good, but you can think more about other plots, you can use less embellishments, and you can have more interactions between the two. There will be some battle plots later, and there will be a little sweetness. You Jingxuan will prepare a surprise for Xingchen. How can Xingchen hide his little vest, and how can he secretly reveal his little vest and demand punishment without the Fifth Master knowing?

Could have more conversations

There is a lot of detective content, the front is serious and the back is very interesting.

It feels a bit like a detective at the end, the comic can continue to be updated, and the content is very rich.

There are a lot of details and the description is very good, but the dialogue could be reduced a bit. Fun, a little serious at the front and more relaxed at the back. It's very good-looking, and the heroine is very handsome.