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It's okay, but at the core of the two-male protagonist, it's still the classic and timeless formula of a soft, stupid and beautiful x affectionate and forbearing male protagonist, but I still hope that the author will try a challenging character design. Readers can't imagine the protagonist they want, and the protagonist's creation will make people feel stupid and embarrassing. The readers want what the protagonist wants, and the protagonist is portrayed at the level of a normal person You can get the protagonist that readers want, and you can also get the protagonist that readers can't imagine. The creation of the protagonist will make people feel smart and shocking. Most of the protagonists on this platform are of the first type, be cautious when you are tired of stupidity.

It's very interesting. I basically read novels just to have a good time. I don't go into too much details, I just want to have fun reading them. The scene in the middle where Master is drunk and has nightmares makes me heartbroken... I hope they will be fine in the future and don't abuse them! Looking forward to further development~ I didn't finish it when I rated it five stars before, but now after watching it, I feel that I can't accept it anyway. It was said to be 1v1, and a third party suddenly appeared later. Don't know what you want to express? Design this plot. The line in the middle is really baffling, why does it have to be so cruel? After the torture, nothing was said clearly, it was like torture for the sake of torture. I don't like it, especially when a third person appears later. Why is it necessary? In order to reflect the heart-throb characteristics of the male protagonist, I thought that there wouldn't be too many scenes with a third person, but I didn't expect that all the scenes later on would be this person's scenes. It's really a waste of people's time.

The only thing that left a deep impression on me was Feng Yanwan. It was difficult to calm down. That kind of love that is forbearing and restrained. No matter how much you love, you still choose to respect and let go. That kind of sour feeling in the heart is easy to empathize with and has great stamina. The last extra chapter is a good explanation for him. The writing style of the extra chapter is really amazing (perhaps because I have invested a lot of emotion into this character. I subjectively feel that the writing style of the extra chapter is good). The emotions are very delicate. The sound of the phoenix really feels complete. I hope they will be happy in another world. The update is not finished yet, I want to know how his body in the cultivation world is processed, or if he is the new host. Generally speaking, the two male protagonists in Tomato are quite good, they are not awkward, the writing is okay, the protagonist is not very feminine, even if he is squeamish and fierce, he is not too dramatic, making people think of girls. The character development is quite rich. I want to see the follow-up of Jiang Mian and Jinyu. However, there are indeed many shortcomings. For example, many people cannot accept the cuteness of the protagonist. It is too childish and the character is too popular. I have read countless books in the year of Master and Disciple. Some misunderstandings are also inexplicable. For example, the Oolong contract with Feng Yanwan is really child's play. There is also the brotherhood with the head brother. The plot in the script is really unclear. But I really think Feng Yanwan wrote it very well. Let's take the five stars as his and clear the mines on his own.

How should I put it? I like them very much in every aspect. I feel that Baili, Shaoyu, Head Feng, and Head Yun are all very good. Baili is arrogant and pitiful, Shaoyu is the kind of gentle and noble young master, and Head Feng is the kind. Well, I don't know what to do. To put it another way, he is just as annoyed, super cute, and has the feeling of being secretly pampered by Master Yun. I also like it very much. I feel like five of them can be together. I feel that they all match well. I don't know which one to choose. It's a pity that this article is 1v1. To be honest, I think all four of them are very doting, loving, and worthy of love. To sum up, I really like this book, and the author can update it. I hope the author will update it, because it's really rare to read it in one day. Well, that's about all. I really like this book. It's hard to find one that is in line with my thoughts in all aspects. It's a pity that it is the biggest 1v book. It's a pity. Especially the Feng Zhang Sect. I like it myself. This little tsundere wow, I really love the author. I must work hard and update it! I really like [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] in your book. Come on, come on. I hope they can play with Meimei in Chapter 2000. Shura field. The author must be 1v2. I really like Fengfeng, and I really, really don't want to abuse him. I really wanted Fengfeng and Huanhuan to be together, but he and Baili are officially married, so I just want to let it go, but I really don't want to abuse Fengfeng because of Huanhuan and Baili's love. I really can't do it. Is it okay to 1v2? I really like this book of yours. You are really the most patient one for me. I usually just throw the other unfinished ones aside, but you are the only one I chase every day. I stock up every day. I miss you every day. I really love you. Now I suddenly find that many readers don't like 1v 2 eh. In that case, delete Baili, and let Fengfeng and Huanhuan be together [shy][shy][shy]

It made me laugh so hard that I loved watching the 360 and the protagonist scolding each other. The protagonist is the kind of spoiled wife who speaks dirty words without being pretentious and very cute. Bangchui is suspected to be the pet name of the protagonist in 360. If you hit me, you will be scolding me, or if I am a third-rate person, come on. It develops very quickly (referring to the original male protagonist having fun). It may be a little awkward at the beginning but it's so funny that you can skip it. It's sweet at the end.

When I read Chapter 84, I noticed that there were hints of 1v2. I went back and read the synopsis and found that it was true. I read the book review and felt really blown away. But so far, I think it's pretty good, but I won't read it any more. The writing is pretty good, but I didn't read the synopsis. It was quite heartbreaking. When I saw the chapter where Xing Ci was obsessed with the devil, and when he said the sentence about his fate that he also wished he could not escape, I really cried and fainted, but I really can't accept 1v2. , The article is still good-looking, and it is really heart-breaking. I finally found a great book, but I couldn't accept it. I really feel that I will never stop reading the introduction in the future. It was originally recommended on the homepage. After reading a few chapters, it felt really good. I didn't like to keep the character in the book before, but this one is an exception, but it is also very heart-breaking. In fact, the five-star rating is because this book is regarded as a fairy in the eyes of people who like this. I just can't watch this kind of thing. When Feng Wanyan appeared, I thought he was CP with Yun Yan, but it turned out to be 1v2,,,,, and it felt really heartbreaking. But the writing is very good. I will definitely read the introduction when I have a long memory.

Nice! Extremely sweet! Real! I won't lie to you! I've finished reading it all! It's so sweet that my heart twitches! Everyone go and see it! The author's writing style is very good. When I read it, I actually liked the first part of Jiaojiao and Phoenix. Jiaojiao is really cute! I just like this kind of venomous tongue, it feels so good to be scolded, hahahaha! The general plot above gave me the feeling that it was like a scumbag. But it's very good and beautiful, and it's really exciting... It's so exciting that I can't even breathe (Baodan! Author, can you be nicer to them? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, am, were being tortured first, and then tortured me, was so angry that I had a cardiac arrest!) Thank you [sending my heart] But there was one point where a strange name suddenly appeared. When I was reading it, I wondered if I hadn't looked carefully at the front, but after recalling it, I felt that I had never seen it before. It was only after I read on that I found out their identity. I don't know why it felt a bit sudden. That's all. Overall: Love it! Not cruel at all, really! Real! Feel free to go and see it! Ordered! [Smile]

It's very good-looking, and it actually made me tie it. This master has a soft character, and the group dotes on the coquettish baby. I like the plot where the apprentice swears to attract heaven to testify. I like this kind of pure loyal dog, this kind of crazy loyal dog, I love it very much.

The character's personality is full and rich, and the plot is relatively smooth (it feels very sweet). The master is really cute and delicate ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა. The writing is also good and worth reading.

It's very beautiful. I thought Phoenix was going to be alone for the rest of his life, but it turned out to be a twist. I like it😍

Holy shit, I don't know what words to use to describe it. It's just a novel. It gives me a really shocking feeling. The author is really awesome. Sometimes I really feel that the writing style is amazing, especially when the author turns the tide and fulfills the readers' wishes. It just feels so awesome. Apart from the fact that I don't have a car, I really recommend reading this article. It's really good to read. At the end of the day, I still want to sigh that the two young lovers are really good, and I hope they can stay happy forever. [Cry][cry][cry]

There is a bit of a knife at the back. Shen Qingliu's entanglement with Phoenix in the main text has no result in the end. This part directly killed me, you know. The corpse spots are all downplayed, but fortunately, the extra story is sweet. This book is really good-looking, the characters are very distinct, and there is also the heartbreak value after the separation of Baili Chengmozun and the master. It also hurts a lot. Because after absorbing that bead, he could only lock himself in a coffin and be forced to be in seclusion for two years. Although I feel a bit let down by Shen Qingliu. But after all, the power contained in it is too huge, and it is impossible to say that once integrated, there will be no worries. In order to promote the subsequent plot, this is normal. Also, I feel how sweet the feeling between the head brother and Liu [thinking] [making faces] Phoenix's humble love makes me feel heartbroken. I knock the master and the apprentice, the master and the senior brother, and the master and the Phoenix. Oh no, no, my wife is not good at herself. This book is really super, super good-looking. Read it in one breath

The author writes well and recommends it, but please do not leave comments. In the comment area, a group of victims are guilty, and another male is morally kidnapped. I was so immersed in the plot that I burst into tears. As a result, I accidentally clicked on a comment, which made me so angry. It especially affects the perception. Don't leave a comment, don't leave a comment, don't leave a comment. (I don't favor any male protagonist, I think they are all very good, but when I opened the comments and saw someone scolding the characters, and using moral kidnapping as a theory of victim guilt, it was very annoying) If you leave comments, the impression will drop directly, so don't leave comments. The comment section is full of gods. I feel that if I am offended, I have to forgive. If I don't forgive, I deserve to suffer. It's so simple.

To be honest, the writing is very good and the characters are very good. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. When I read it, the author had not finished it, but I always felt that it was a bit unfinished. I thought it was 1v1, but the plot line changed later. The author focused more on describing Feng Wanyan. I prefer to watch 1v1. I don't know why the plot develops like this. I feel a bit messy at the end, but actually I like the character of Feng Wanyan better. I think this character is well created. The author's writing style is very good. You can check it out. If you don't like my personal opinion, please don't comment. Thank you.

I really cried to death. I thought it was going to be over half way through. Whether it was the two lines of Xingci or Phoenix, I thought one of them was going to be. The more I watched it, the more painful it became. Then I didn't want to watch it for two days. I'm old and can't bear the hardship, but I couldn't bear the curiosity and looked back. Hey, hey, it's okay, the ending is happy, my heart is warm, and I feel like I am alive.

After seeing the ending, I am finally willing to rate it [shy]. I really like this kind of ending [blowing kiss]. I feel relieved to see that everyone is fine. Some people think it is 1v2, but I don't think it is. The reason is the same as one person analyzed in this rating. I am too lazy to write it, you can read it👀

Spoiler warning It's a good read, the writing is okay, the plot is average, there's a bit of abuse in the later stages but not too much (I really don't recommend reading book reviews for this part, too many people criticize the characters, which affects the perception). It can be played in both controlled and offensive situations. →The character of Shou is a little bit cute, and she is a group favorite, but I don't think it is written in a feminine way. Everyone has their own cuteness, just accept it. If you can't accept it, don't impose it. →Shuangjie, I don't know why it became 1v2 in the later period. The author was very careful. The real world and the traveled world each have a different attack and a different attack. →Everyone in the protagonist group has their own difficulties. Everyone has put in a lot and they are all good babies. If you don't know, you may feel frustrated. One of the few stories that allowed me to have the patience to read to the end (maybe it's a matter of personal taste?). Master and Xingxing really love each other deeply. The fairy love made me burst into tears. The finale made me feel warm. I wish the author will get better and better and be favored by the God of Wealth ~ What is this ending doing?

Super very beautiful. The main line is clear. Rich content. The author's writing is excellent. The characters are also very good. I really recommend everyone to watch it. If it doesn't look good, scold me to death. I won't cry. This book is comparable to Teacher Spear. I really like it and recommend it to everyone.

It's very interesting. I especially like the character of our protagonist Shou, who is so coquettish and the group's favorite! I really like it😍but I was tortured later [crying][crying][crying][crying] They are all so nice,🥹🥹🥹🥹It's obviously not their fault. But the ending is very happy [laughs][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's good to watch, but Phoenix is ​​a bit upset. I thought it was a threesome, but the two of them turned out to be very sweet. Phoenix is ​​sad, and the middle part is a bit sadistic. Watching it in the middle of the night will also make you sad [Blow Kiss]

This book is really beautiful, I really like Ye Qingliu's delicate and soft feeling! Who can say no? It's just that this book is really beautiful! And the author's writing style is pretty good too! I have endless things to say about this book! It's my fault that I'm short of words! I'm going to study now. Look!

I came here based on the recommendation on the home page. It's really nice and my type. I have been looking for a book on this subject, and I have read quite a few, but the more I read about it, the less I feel about it. This book satisfies my requirements for a plot, and the characters are well drawn. (I really love Ye Baobao's character❗❗❗) I give him my five stars (my first time giving it). According to the books I have read so far, although his genre is relatively popular, some of his angles are very novel. I appreciate the content of the author's recent chapters. Basically, there are no plots or characters that make me feel bad. I hope the plots will become more exciting as they are written. ˘ᗜ˘[Look forward to ing.]

Overall, I really like Jiaojiao's character. She is pampered by everyone. The emotional line is not even my favorite. What I love the most is when the whole family of Taixu Sect gathers together and makes noises. Jiaojiao is really loving. However, the emotional line makes me feel a bit complicated. I glanced at the comments before reading it, and I swore that I must be the protagonist, but later on I couldn't help but feel sorry for Phoenix. As someone who is usually a bit of an emotional mysophobia, I suddenly hoped that this article would be a threesome. Xiao Xingci is actually quite good, but I feel that Liuliu cares for him and prefers him for the purpose of the mission, so the love he gives back seems not that special. Instead, it is other people who are attracted to Liuliu, whether they are from the same sect or the Dayuan Sect, which makes me feel that that part is more real. My favorite scenes are the scenes where the head brother teases Jiaojiao and Phoenix dotes on Jiaojiao. Probably because I have watched Crazy Batch so much that Xiao Xingci's paranoid love is not so reassuring anymore. And I can feel that Liuliu is so happy and lively when he is with his fellow disciples Phoenix and Phoenix. It is actually quite interesting to write about his character as all. After all, their relationship was too weak during the years when Xingci was in seclusion. With a sudden turn, so many beautiful people and lives were given up to choose Xiao Xingci, which made people feel mainly guilty. Personally, I feel that except for a few emotional lines after Xing Ci becomes possessed, which are a bit uncomfortable, the rest of the writing is pretty good! Thank you for bringing such a cute character like Jiaojiao. Overall it is very interesting and everyone is not too particular about emotions. It is still a pretty good novel! I really like Jiaojiao!

The writing in the book is amazing, and the plot is really enjoyable to watch. Of course, among the characters, I like Feng Pixing the most, Feng, Ye, and Yun are like brothers in the parallel world. They are also supported by stars. It's hard not to be happy.

It's really beautiful! Don't abandon your books just because the phoenix comes out! No! Tonic! ! ! ! The teacher's writing is very good! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Super, super, super good. I watched it in one night. He stayed up until the early hours of the morning crying to death. It wasn't particularly abusive, but I couldn't see the slightest bit of abuse. Well, it's still pretty good. The ending is pretty good too. If you have the kind of 1 V1 that's particularly mysophobic, don't watch it. Anyway, it's the kind of movie that can be watched without thinking, so it's more suitable to be read in one sitting at night. If you're the kind of person who likes to pick out details and dwell on it, don't read it. Because I read it in one sitting. I'm the kind of person who likes to dig into details and think about things when I'm reading a text. I randomly played this one after watching another one. So I just took a casual look at it. It's quite good to read it in one go, but if you look into it carefully, don't read it. It feels like the author wants to write a group favorite. Np but I can't write it on Tomato. I once again advise those with 1V1 mysophobia not to read it.

It's great! Go, go, go, go! The affectionate male lead really kills me... The plot is very wrong, but when I watched it, I always felt that the speed of the relationship development was a bit strange. The writing and plot are very good👌🏻I'm spoiled!

Very, very beautiful. I like Phoenix very much [crying][crying]

Oh my god, this book is really good. The author has written Ye Qingliu's charming character very well. It's not artificial at all and it's very cute. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing-are-of-to-are-does-does-is-pretentious, and this charming character of Ye Qingliu's charming character." Ah ah, 321 is a confession! !

It's been a long time since I've seen such an amazing master-disciple article (the content contains spoilers, please read with caution! Some words and sentences are copied from the original article, the writing is not very good, there may be some mistakes, teachers, please don't dig it! I wrote it for a long time!) Ye Qingliu, Baili Xingci. I read a novel by chance, and because of a sudden death, I went through it and the two met. At first, Baili Xingci was so angry that he wanted to cut Ye Qingliu into pieces with a thousand knives. He wanted to lock Ye Qingliu in the altar and give it to the Nine Kings and Twelve Tribes to enjoy as they pleased... Of course, the original Baili Xingci did this. At first, Ye Qingliu was afraid that Baili Xingci would retaliate against him, and that Baili Xingci, who became a demon king, would treat him like the original novel. Afraid of being treated worse than life, he wanted to hit his head against a pillar and die. 360 Stop him and comfort him. Afraid that Ye Qingliu would not be comfortable using someone else's skin, he put a small bright red mole on Ye Qingliu's body, which was exactly the same as the position on his own body. Ye Qingliu trembles every day, afraid of OOC and the increase in Baili Xingci's black value. He diligently accumulates points to find a way out for himself in the future... But he obviously didn't do anything. In order to reduce the blackening value, he tried his best to protect Baili Xingci. When Baili Xingci was framed and burned down the library, he opened the microphone passionately in front of the eight peak masters and attacked the eight peaks. He spent points to repair the remaining scrolls and felt sorry for the points. But Baili Xingci's blackening value didn't move at all. Ye Qingliu gave up and became indifferent. He was unreasonable and making trouble with Baili Xingci (actually Jiaojiao), even if he was not rational, he was strong. However, Baili Xingci's darkening value was completely worn out by the drunken coquettishness. At this time, Ye Yu could finally be himself. ………………………………………… Later, Baili Xingci fell in love with Ye Qingliu, and Ye Qingliu also had a secret affection for Baili Xingci, but he felt that he was as dirty as the original Ye Qingliu, and he never dared to face his own emotions because of his feelings towards his apprentice. When did it come out? Ye Qingliu didn't say it directly, and I don't know exactly what words of love are. It was probably when he and Baili Xing resigned from the Demon Realm or before the Demon Realm. ? Ye Qingliu almost collapsed because he entered the dream created by the Nightmare Beast and saw himself chained on the altar and humiliated by the Nine Kings and Twelve Tribes. Baili Xingci was also pulled in and saw all this bloodbathed the Demon Realm. After coming out, he erased Ye Qingliu's memory, and Tiandao swore: swear to be loyal to him, protect him with his life, and be good to him, otherwise he will die a good death. Ye Qingliu was in a coma for ten days and couldn't wake up. Baili Xingci couldn't wake him up for one day, so he used the Liwu Sword to cut a wound. A whole ten lanes. ………………………………………… Baili Xingci absorbed the Fire Bead and came to the Demon Realm to bloodbath the Nine Kings and Twelve Tribes. However, he absorbed the Flowing Fire Bead but did not cultivate with the heroines Ruan and Yi. Because he was worried that Baili Xingci would be backlashed by the Flowing Fire Bead, he went through great pains to steal Feng Wanyan's crescent moon to help Baili Xingci absorb the Flowing Fire Bead. The head brother Yun Yan forcibly took Ye Qingliu back to Taixu Sect. Feng Wanyan came to the door and said: "Marry me." Ye Qingliu accidentally dropped his own blood into Feng Wanyan's crescent moon. Ye Qingliu and Feng Wanyan became a Taoist couple, and the Taoist couple's contract was Feng Wanyan's crescent moon. Feng Wanyan wanted to take Ye Qingliu back to the Dayuan Sect, but Ye Qingliu refused to do so. He clearly agreed with Baili Xingci to stay away from Feng Wanyan, but in the end he even received the certificate. Ye Qingliu was flustered, fearing that Baili Xingci would be backlashed by the Fire Bead if he found out. No matter what request he made, Feng Wanyan refused to let go. Ye Qingliu knew that he was ashamed of Feng Wanyan, but the Taoist couple's contract had to be resolved. Ye Qingliu was in a dilemma, and kept delaying the trip back to Dayuan Sect with Feng Wanyan. He wanted to wait for Baili Xingci to come back. He was gambling. But he made the wrong bet. Baili Xingci knew that Ye Qingliu and Feng Wanyan became delirious after becoming Taoist couples, so he broke the barrier and left. Ye Qingliu was excited and heartbroken and fainted. Baili Xingci did not appear for two years, during which time he never received a reply to any of his letters. Ye Qingliu didn't know that Baili Xingci had almost lost his mind and could only fight for the last bit of clarity to nail himself in the coffin and destroy the meridians thousands of times, heal them, destroy the meridians, heal... Two years passed like this. In the first year after Baili Xingci left, Ye Qingliu and Feng Wanyan released their Taoist couple contract. He lost most of his cultivation and all his spiritual power, his spiritual platform was completely destroyed, and every inch of his hair was white as snow. Countless days have left some things blurry. Pain. Ye Qingliu was in pain. Densely painful. But someone who was so afraid of pain still agreed with the Taoist couple without hesitation. Baili Xing resigned from seclusion. He knew everything, knew that the master who was so afraid of pain still forcibly broke the Taoist couple's contract, so he lost most of his cultivation and all his spiritual power, the spiritual platform was completely destroyed, and every inch of his hair was white. He came to apologize. Demon Lord Baili Xingci stepped into the gate of Taixu Sect. The moment the mountain guarding formation sensed that Baili Xingci was carrying demonic energy, it was automatically triggered, and the terrifying pressure suddenly pressed towards Baili Xingci desperately. Baili Xingci had never used demonic energy to protect his body, so he knelt on the first step without hesitation. The seemingly ordinary steps were lit up in an instant when Baili Xingci knelt down, reaching to the sky as far as the eye could see, bursting out with dazzling brilliance, like a white belt across the sky. Baili Xingci slowly put his head on the steps. One kneel, one kowtow. Extremely pious. His speed is not fast, but rather slow. This time, he was clearly determined and allowed the pressure of the ladder to fall on him, suffering the pain that Ye Qingliu had suffered. Because everyone was afraid that Ye Qingliu would know that Baili Xing resigned and was soft-hearted, they got him drunk. But the amount was enough to make him drunk for two days, so Ye Qingliu woke up at night. He sat on the soft grass, his eyes dim, his hands on his cheeks, and his eyes slowly lowered. Ye Qingliu saw it. See clearly. ………………………………………… Ye Qingliu and Baili Xingci returned to the Demon Realm. The misunderstanding is finally solved. The two finally understood each other. "I, I want to worship heaven and earth with you." "You, what did you say?" Baili Xingci gently held Ye Qingliu's hand, and lowered his gaze to the beauty mark on the inside of his wrist. "Master, do you have another name?" "Ye Yu." "Incomprehensible." ………………………………………… Feng Wanyan returned to modern times and met Ye Yu. When Ye Yu read the novel again, he found that it had suddenly changed beyond recognition overnight. Sudden death... Through the book... Ye Yu... He remembered it all. "Phoenix!" ——End——