God-Killing: the Descendant of Pangu, the Most Severe Father

Nine out of ten fics, leaving you with only one copy of Phoenix It has a good look and feel and is very entertaining. The author is good at making jokes, and the main plot is also quite interesting. I really like watching Gu Tianchen get along with several ancestral witches. The absence of a female protagonist is also one of the advantages of this book. She will not be hindered by feelings. Anyway, I personally like this kind of protagonist without a love line. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but considering that you have already written more than 500 chapters, I gave it the full rating. Just don't stop updating it! ! !

The plot is well written. It not only follows the original work, but also has its own innovative parts. The setting of the Ancestral Witch Palace is also good, but the specific description of abilities is not very clear. The author's setting is good but the writing style is not good. Overall, it is very interesting. I look forward to the author's improvement [Sending heartfelt wishes]

The content is good, but the writing style has been checked a bit. It would be better to describe it in more details.

Come on, eat with confidence, The author, please try your best to update, Good reviews, keep it up, Rewards will increase permanently.

This book is not bad, much better than the Supreme God next to it. I hope the author can maintain this state and continue to finish the book.

Oh my god, this is so beautiful. The overall feeling is a bit abstract and very funny, but the fighting aspect is also great. It's so beautiful. I finished it without paying attention. I hope the author can do more. Come on, author, you can do it! ! ! [Like] [Like] [Like] To be honest, there seems to be nothing wrong at all, the plot is very smooth, and the protagonist does not completely steal Qiye's limelight. I really like the character of the protagonist, and he will just do it when he encounters trouble! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

The author's writing is very good and there are many jokes. It's both emotional and funny I finally finished watching it, after following it for more than a year.

One of the three best novels among fans, I think

Dear readers: I have the honor to recommend a fascinating novel to you. This work successfully attracts our eyes and hearts with its unique charm and profound insight. It is not only a novel, but also a work of art full of wisdom and emotion. The author of this novel depicts a vivid and real world for us with his exquisite writing style and rich imagination. Every character is lifelike and every plot is gripping. The author shows the complexity and diversity of human nature through delicate writing and profound dialogues. At the same time, he also cleverly integrated many social phenomena and life philosophies, making this novel not only an enjoyment of reading, but also a baptism of thought. What I especially appreciate about this novel is its precise grasp of details and deep understanding of human nature. Through delicate description and in-depth analysis, the author allows us to see the beauty and warmth in life, and at the same time, it also allows us to have a deeper knowledge and understanding of human nature. This depth and breadth make this novel not only an entertaining read, but also a work that can make us think deeply. Here, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to the author for his hard work. They use words to build a world full of charm and wisdom, which gives us great enjoyment and inspiration in the process of reading. At the same time, I would also like to thank all readers for their support and encouragement. It is your enthusiasm and expectations that allow this novel to be spread and circulated. Overall, this is a novel worthy of repeated reading and reflection. I believe that whether you are a literature lover or a friend seeking spiritual comfort, you will be able to find your own touch and inspiration in this novel. Let us look forward to more excellent works together!

Wonderful and funny, I watched it a second time after watching it

This book "Zhan Shen" has basically filled in all the pitfalls. It is very difficult to write a good fanfic. You must have your own innovation and a setting background that does not deviate from the original text. I will give it 5 stars first and then read it later. It's not for others to review. Brother, the few books you wrote before have all gone into the dark room. Promise me that this one will be well written. Brothers, stand up and let the author see it.

I really like the setting of the Twelve Ancestral Witches. The protagonist is also well portrayed. I personally think it looks good. The author will update it quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This book is much better to read, much better than the damn Supreme God next door. I give you a five-star review. I wish this book will be published at 9 o'clock as soon as possible. Some novels, such as the original "Zhan Shen Shen", everyone has a CP, but only the male protagonist does not have one, which feels very different. Everyone else has it, why is it that only the male protagonist does not? Unless he is a eunuch. If you don't know how to write, it's okay to have a CP in name only, and you can just continue writing about your career. Of course, if it turns out that the novel Zhanshen has no female protagonist, then this novel can be written without a female protagonist. Anyway, as far as the sect is concerned, if others have a male protagonist, they must have one, or no one has one.

This book is really super good-looking. The main character is the spokesperson for the 12 ancestral witches, and may later become the spokesperson for Pangu. Just thinking about it makes me look forward to it. I hope the author will work hard and update it to almost 1,000 chapters! Hahaha, I hope there are so many, because many of the derivative works are between 500 and 600 chapters, and they are over before you can get enough of them.

It's quite beautiful (I'm not good at expressing myself) [laughs][laughs][laughs]

[Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] It's good-looking [shy], I really like the protagonist. The character of the protagonist has become the hero in my heart. The plot is not too confusing. I like it, but I hope there will be no CP [awkward laugh] [sneaky laugh] [shy] In fact, it's okay to have a female protagonist, but I want to be particularly strong [lick the screen][lick the screen][please update]

I've seen 50% of it, and overall it's okay. The author has kept up with the times and has a lot of new jokes. Overall, it's very fun to watch, emmm... But just use appropriate jokes to add joy. I also read the comments of other readers in the comment area, and saw many people saying that the protagonist Gu has become a tool man. I didn't feel it at first, but after watching it halfway through, I did see that some parts were used as tools, but to be more precise, they were used as lenses. There was a scene where there was only a dialogue between Lin Qiye and the supporting character, and there was no scene with the protagonist. It was indeed a tool to pull the protagonist together. I hope the author can improve after seeing the comments from us readers. Author, you can advance the plot according to the progress of the original work (I have not read the original work, because there is a knife), but the protagonist should not be regarded as Lin Qiye's tool. The protagonist is Gu Tianchen, and the secondary protagonist is Lin Qiye. You must distinguish the priority. Overall it looks pretty good, so full star Big boost for the author, I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. Each one has its own highlights and shining points.

The writing in the Zhan Shen fanfic is quite good. I personally feel that there is nothing that I think is too poisonous (maybe I read it too quickly), so I recommend it. It's just that there's a little less writing, but it's still quite comfortable to read.

Clear organization and appropriate description. Use demeanor, language, action and environment to describe the situation well. Especially when talking about Zhang Shi, although it is not very clear, you can still feel it, as long as you can feel it with your heart when talking about the classroom. That sentence is empty but has no soul.

Super pretty! The protagonist, Brother Mangzi of the Wu clan, has high damage with his left hand and high damage with his right hand. The relationship with the rest of the Night Team is also well written. I like this kind of group portrait writing! This is the only novel with more than 1,000 chapters that I have read the finale. I never had the patience to read such a long novel before. I can only say that this novel really suits my taste. I didn't like melee combat before and only liked long-range shooters, but now I really like melee combat. Super recommended!

It's not bad. It basically makes up for the regrets. Old Zhao and Chen Muye were resurrected in the middle and late stages, and there are no regrets after that. The general plot direction is similar to that of Zhan Shen, with important plot points. However, it is different from the original work because of the butterfly effect. For example, a force that caused trouble in the later stages was Solve it in advance, and another force will appear later to do it. It probably goes like this. Most of the time, the plot is quite happy. The protagonist is a reckless man, which is quite funny. Even the gods and chaos in the back talk very funny. I haven't read such a long novel in a long time, and I am a little tired. [If you mind leaving the following content alone, if you really want to complain about the plot, you can post a separate review of the book. Don't leave me alone to gain a sense of presence. I don't care whether you read this book or not] This person is not invincible from the beginning, nor can his strength be improved a lot all at once. At the beginning, it is inevitable to follow the original plot and join the 136 team to participate in special training. These are inevitable. Other fans also have this kind of plot. After the Cangnan God War, Gu Tianchen had the strength to walk in the fog after escaping from prison, and he woke up There will be changes when more ancestral witches come and have more skills. Because they have to complete the mission of the ancestral witches to leave the palace, many original plots are there, but they are background panels, such as the plot of Qian Yu Qiye. When Gu Tianchen went to other divine countries to do troubles and came back, the Japanese plots were almost the same. There are also plots that go back to two thousand years ago. Three teams of people went to different time and space, and the headquarters also arranged three teams of people to search. The plot of two thousand years ago will be narrated in two or three chapters, and then we will start to talk about the plot of other time and space. Gu Tianchen went to find the ancestral witch, and the ancestral witch and the others obtained the inheritance of the ancestral temple. The plot of the original book is more like telling us the development period of the novel's plot compared to the original work. It's more like a point in time, and the protagonist of this book is Gu Tianchen. Gu Tianchen has twelve ancestral witches to release and twelve tasks to do. Gu Tianchen mostly works hard to complete the tasks, just like he has been collecting divine fires to release Zhu Rong in the early stage, and the time to complete the tasks is reflected in the original plot. If you don't mind, feel free to read it. Gu Tianchen is a fun-loving and reckless man, and some of the plot descriptions are particularly humorous. If you mind that there are many plots in the original novel, don't watch it, and don't say anything in my comments.

This is the most comfortable Zhanshen fanfic I have read so far.

The author is really very good, but two chapters a day are really not enough. I beg the author to update more [laughs] But I still hope there can be a female protagonist

When I read Chapter 46, I felt like I had watched God Slayer all over again, [awkward laugh]. Please recommend a fanfic that is not exactly the same as the original work. Even the time, place, characters, and even the moves and turns and fights are the same as in the original work. Then I might as well read the original work. Adding characters to the original work and going through the plot again is really profitable.

It's really good-looking. The 8.0 Rating is too low. Hurry up and write! ! !

It's really good-looking, the combat power is not too high, and some plots about the witch clan have been added. The author will continue to work hard.

This book is really Shui Lingling. The content of the book is really Shui Lingling. But you know why Shui Lingling's score is not high. Can you remove Shui Lingling? Watery [staring]

Just read him as a mindless and cool novel. This is the most interesting fanfic I have ever read. The protagonist is quite funny. It would be perfect to give him a CP (I hope it is not a female character in Zhanshen, but one drawn by the author) [Learned]

It's pretty good, but I don't know if it has a female protagonist.

The author of Shui Lingling really wrote a watery novel. The protagonist of Shui Lingling not only speaks with watery words, but also behaves with watery characters. The author of Shui Lingling really hit my heartstrings. I decided to give Shui Lingling a watery rating to the author of Shui Lingling. Shui Lingling, I wrote so many watery words, but it was also easy for Shui Lingling.