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Good looking, damn Rudy can have a harem, why can't our little Erin have a harem? (Annoyed) Of course our little Irene is no better than Rudy, and the beauties in the harem have three thousand teeth! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I haven't seen it, but I think it's good [laughing evilly]

Just think of the protagonist as an indigenous little girl, not like a reincarnated person at all.

Although I like Lily quite a lot, I have read a lot of Lily articles, and I have read almost all of No Job. The emotional line between Erin and Avril is still not very clear. Normal sexual orientation would feel better, but since it is Lily, I think it is better to insert more of this special emotion. The previous feeling is just a normal master and apprentice, at best, they can be regarded as good friends.

I have read Chapter 22 so far, and overall I feel pretty good. But I would like to give a small suggestion to the author. So far, there is no description of fighting here, or the fighting scenes have been mentioned in a few words. I hope there will be more chapters in the future. After all, it is impossible to write jobless without fighting. If you feel that you are not good at writing, you can try AI. AI is not good at writing long plots, but the battle scenes are pretty good.

Look, look, look, the book is so good, long live Lily! The characters are consistent, the plot is restored, the branch plots are reasonably arranged, the secondary characters are highly interactive with the original characters, and the author is updating it quickly! ! ! More lily, thank you! Shasha

I saw someone commenting that this book is very beautiful and has the flavor of the original. I think so too. It's very good at writing. I really like the way the author depicts the growth of the protagonist step by step. As for why the rating is low? My evaluation is unique to Mujo Tensei; in my mind, this book can definitely achieve full marks. Above I don't know if I stayed up late and got confused, or something. I always feel like I'm missing some important plot points while reading. First, I was transferred, and I felt like people dispersed as soon as I turned my eyes. And then I felt like this too That's weird, is this my problem? Or are there any book friends who feel the same way as me?

The writing is very good and detailed, but it's a pity that I haven't written many chapters when I discovered this book. I really want to read the following content.

This book shocked me as much as the original. If I were to say no one wanted to reincarnate, this would be the first, but no one would say it was second. It has brand new characters, a brand new story, and a new development. Writing more than 1 million words would be a swan song.

Very well written! Although it is not a mindless novel type, this kind of growth story is very unique and makes me interested in reading. Recently, I have been listening to it while drawing, and the more I listen, the more addictive it becomes. Rather than adding characters based on the original work, I think this can be called an independent story like a side story! ! I like it very much, and I hope the author can keep writing like this. The description is very careful, and each character has a separate introduction. Even the semi-cute newcomers who have not understood the original work can understand it [please update] Author, you must keep writing - and where did Irene travel through time, or is she a time traveler?

Very well written, keep up the good work

It's a good book, but not many people have read it. I'm afraid the author suddenly stopped updating it.

Overall, it's pretty good. The description of Rudy's power generation in Chapters 89 and 90 is okay, but the character of the heroine is a bit broken. The innocent character cannot be weak and apologize blindly. Everything in the book should be centered on the protagonist. Don't sacrifice the heroine for Rudy [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]. There is such a rush to reconcile and so on. Contradictions and conflicts are also the highlights of the book[smile]

It's a very nice novel, a relatively good job-free novel. I hope the author will continue his work. Getting better and better

Let's wait and see for a moment, it's a bit difficult for me to interpret the words without "" [Thinking]

There is potential. Although there are not many people now, the author's writing is still good [Like] I have caught up with the latest in the past few days, so I will update it. There are no obvious disadvantages. The only shortcoming is that it is not enough to watch.

It's obviously very beautiful, but why are the ratings so low and there are so few people? [What] Come on, author.

The writing is good, it would be better if it can be finished and I haven't updated half of it since I have read too much.

It's super good-looking, really good-looking, and it feels like watching the original work (definitely)

Beautiful and well written

Looks good, no big problem [blowing kiss]

It's good but not too hot, I recommend it. The best no-job reincarnation fic I've ever seen!

Really nice to look at.

Very good, must be five stars

Author-chan, come on!

It's not bad, but it's quite poisonous for the teacher to show up like this.

No, why is there no update? I had a copy before, but it was blocked after not updating it for two days.

Come on, I'll post one when I see no one comments.

Bro, please update another chapter, I can do anything😭🖐✋👢

Fortunately, I can see her growing up along the way.