[No System] [Not Invincible] [Few Cases, Mostly Daily Life] [One Female Lead] [Some Characters’ Personalities Have Changed] [The Good Guys Are Powerful] [Organization Traitor] [Amnesia + Turned Small] [Sometimes Grows Up] [Also Known as: Ai Haibara’s Long Journey of Winning Someone Over]
[Also Known as: A Brand-New Life After Losing My Memory]
Vermouth: “Will you think of me again? Baby!”
Miyagawa Yuu: “Sorry, I really have forgotten a lot, so I don’t know who you are.”
Ai Haibara: “It’s okay. I’ll help you remember, so let me introduce myself first. My name is Shiho Miyano!”
Conan: “This guy... is terrifyingly strong!”
Kaito Kid: “Uh... I won’t get in your way. I’m leaving!”
The overall feeling is good, but the escape of the protagonist is not explained well. Is Xiaolan so easy to fool? Are there so many people in the Blue Castle?
I feel pretty good. I could just make the main character simpler. I suggest you learn from the one next door @