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The pace was a little faster in the early stages, but I watched it more after arriving in Ars. However, the points of view and ideas are good. It does not follow the original plot. It is unique among Tomato Jobless. [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

The content is quite good, but I have a suggestion: don't mix third person and first person.

The level is okay, but it's too short and not enough to read. Stop being a eunuch [learned]

Really good looking, looking forward to getting my hands on it

Very well written, support me

Except for the author inserting a person who is not in the original work, everything else is good