Another World**********

Yes, it is really rare for Tomato to find someone with your writing skills. Not long ago, I discovered a peaceful world of cultivating immortals, and so did yours, but it was just a Western fantasy. Very lucky and very satisfied. This novel is suitable for reading slowly and slowly constructing it in your mind. The author does not drive too slowly when he should drive (). It is highly recommended.

The writing style is very good and the descriptions are very detailed. Too many words may seem like a low number, but in my opinion, they are indeed an indispensable part of the Western fantasy genre. The early stage is dull, but the plot takes off in the later stage. The author is also very imaginative and very attentive. It is by no means comparable to AI.

The writing style is acceptable, not like the local tomato🍅. However, the word "fan" in the title of a certain chapter is a hint of dyslexia floating in for no reason. And in the paragraph, "the area ahead..." Appears in a certain two-word game. You, the author, don't want readers to know that you are playing [laughter] In terms of plot, the Riddler doesn't seem to have left many clues, so I'll go into details in later chapters when I have time. Also, I want to eat meat! Can I still sign up for the teaching training cram school? It would be fine for me to be a transfer student or an auditor. [Blowing kiss]

It feels better than most Tomato novels. The magic-related knowledge gave me the feeling of watching Harry Potter for the first time. If you don't like this, you can just watch the plot, which is pretty well handled. It's just that the first 20 chapters were a bit uncomfortable to read, but after that it became very comfortable.

The previous content is okay, and there is a lot of information that is acceptable. When it comes to the historical reshaping part, the content increases dramatically and is a bit slow, which can easily sap readers' enthusiasm. The pace is too fast. It would be better if the big frame events were moved later, such as the first semester holiday. Easy for readers to accept. Come on, author✊

I like this book very much, but unfortunately, the rating of this book will not be very high. First of all, the most obvious shortcoming is the gorgeous rhetoric, the sea, you are all water! It is true that the author is quite good in both the use of words and sentences and the writing skills. However, except for some parts that are obviously expanded by AI, the author's descriptions can create a unique atmosphere and make people fall into the story. However, such complex descriptions make it more difficult to read. At least I read some chapters several times before I could understand them. Of course, apart from the shortcomings, the work itself is very good. The important reason for its low rating is that its unique narrative (The Riddler) and relatively complex plot development as well as the author's writing style have lost readers who will not spend a lot of time reading carefully, and this type of readers currently accounts for the vast majority of the Tomato website. Generally speaking, this kind of works should appear on some literary websites instead of Tomato

There is a feeling that it seems very tired, there are too many foreshadowings, and the story line seems a bit unclear at the moment. Is it Ronos or the princess? |･ω･｀) However, the writing is quite good, the setting is complete, and the emotional line is a little rushed, but overall it is not bad. Try to enrich and polish the story line as much as possible, and it should be quite good. Come on👍

The setting is to my liking, but the language in this book is too complicated and falls into the category of a light novel, especially in the early stages. But as long as I can accept it, it's not a problem.

The writing is very good. This is the first time I have read a book on Tomato that is worthy of slow reading. The current score of 7.4 Is much lower than the real level. The first few chapters feel a bit messy, but the more I read, the more I like it. I personally think it is jelly.

It's pretty good, the writing is also good, and the setting is quite complete, but sometimes it's too riddle-like, giving people the feeling that I'm watching something. Overall, it's good, and the princess is really good.

The writing is too riddle

The protagonist's own identity is shrouded in mystery, and there is also a mysterious princess (heroine?) Whom he seems to have known before. The main line has no details

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is so cool [shy]

The author is not like a tomato person [smile][smile]

I really can't stand it anymore. The writing style of this novel is really good and it's very comfortable to read. It's a pity that the author's name makes people have no desire to read it. It's obviously a very good book.

99%, Rare. I haven't seen such a good book on Tomato for a long time.

The language is very beautiful, and the author's literary skills can be seen in the words and sentences; the plot is a bit convoluted, and requires brain reading; the emotional line of the characters is advanced without delaying, kissing without ambiguity without pulling; the contrast is high, attack and low defense. The heroine with white hair and blue eyes is awesome. By the way, I was introduced to the image of the hundred-eyed giant in Azur Lane (although the two characters are completely different) The disadvantage is: it is too short and requires the author to spend a lot of money.

It's really good, and the content is also very attractive. It's just that the early stage is a bit like Riddler. I don't want Daotina. I want to see the male and female protagonists making love.

Excellent work, with profound writing skills, fascinating storyline, and grand and complete world view. It can be seen that the author should have a complete outline, but there is too little.

Such an awesome book actually has such a low rating. It really makes people feel that most people who read novels nowadays are too impatient and miss the opportunity to appreciate exquisite books.

It was pretty good, but the male main course was a bit off.

It looks great. When will the male and female protagonists get together?

Recommended for people with hypoglycemia or anemia

How many words does the author plan to write? [Thinking][Thinking] Should we focus on copies or actual development? ? ?

It's really good. I clicked in by chance, but the data is not very good and there is a possibility of it being cut.

Wonderful writing, good yandere, makes the village of Estherland spin [sneaky laugh]

Delicate brushwork, there are few works by Tomato that make people feel peaceful [almost crying]

The heroine's crazy and deep love is really the highlight of this book! ! ! Damn it, this kind of writing style in which a cold yet hot yandere puts down her body for you is really great! ! !

There were too many riddles in the early stage, but after Chapter 40, the perception obviously improved.

The heroine's name is Cecilia, but the picture on the cover is under the big moon.