Mortals Cultivate Immortality, and Heavenly Fire Ascends the Path to Immortality

The overall storyline is very interesting, and the male protagonist's character is also very palatable, rational and scheming, but the progress is slow and there is too much preparation before practicing Qi. Chapter 145 is the second level of Qi training, Chapter 311 is foundation building, and Chapter 586 is golden elixir. After officially entering the world of immortal cultivation, the speed picks up [laughing and crying] The male protagonist has experienced many twists and turns. I highly recommend everyone to read it. It is very exciting and really good [like][like][like]

Your novel is well conceived, but it's lacking in character dialogue. The water is real water, but, but, but, but, but [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit], it's annoying to hear

Yes, I like the protagonist who specializes in blood skills. Because after watching the Blood Sky Continent in Mortal, he was sacrificed by the blood of the real immortal Ma Liang. It was quite a pity [crying]

Many people think the author is very slow, but I think it's okay. I prefer the slowly unfolding fairy tales. I think this is very suitable for my taste and I think it's very interesting. It feels like watching Fan Xiu Xian Zhuan before. Why was it so fast when I first started writing about cultivating immortality? Why was it so disconnected from the previous chapters? It took you more than 1 million chapters to go from having no spiritual roots to having spiritual roots, but it only took you one year to go from introducing Qi into the body to the third level of Qi refining. Isn't it a bit too fast? Do you think my question is correct? Is the qi training period 12 levels? 1-3 Is the early stage of qi training, 3-6 is the middle stage of qi training, 6-9 is the late stage of qi training, and 9-12 is the completion of qi training. One year of Qi refining means one level of Qi refining in April, two levels of Qi refining in August, and the initial stage of Qi refining is complete in December. During these 12 months you still have to refine the medicine [fear]. This is not a genius. If he returns to this speed, he will not be able to build a foundation at the age of 25. In fact, the first 100 or so chapters are quite interesting. The Gu insect goes from Realm 3 to Realm 4 to Realm 7. There are foreshadowings and hooks. The logic cannot be said to be very good, but it can still be smooth.

I feel like the writing in Xiuxian is very good.

It's still a wonderful book, just read a few more pages and you'll be able to get into it!

So far it looks good, a bit like a mortal!

Haohaohao. The writing is pretty good.

Beautiful and logical

Ok, i like it

The writing is okay

Like is very good, support

Not bad, you can watch it

It's so beautiful. Come on, too.

When writing classical fairy tales, there should be no ready-made words. What should be left, right, east, west, north, south?

It's very well written, and it's considered top-notch among mortals.

Not bad... But it doesn't need to be written as a masterpiece. It's better to be a recreational novel, simple, easy to understand, easy to read, logical, reasonable, and enjoyable.

The writing is good, but it was a little shaky at first. But when it comes to the world of cultivating immortals, the writing is very good, especially the fights are written very carefully! !

It's beautiful, better than most books, the best among the best.

A masterpiece, with powerful writing, clear thinking, and smooth plot. Give me a vigorous update! ! ! ! ! ! !

The early stages were pretty exciting and the plot was reasonable.

Encourage and support the author, I think you can take a look

This novel is invincible to me! ! ! I really love watching this kind of rhythm! ! ! ! The author is awesome! ! ! ! (The best written by mortals in Tomato! This one)

The logic is clear, the plot is reasonable, and the writing is excellent.

It's very well written, why don't you write it again?

Well written, please support it. Isn't your cultivation a little faster?

Very attentive and good plot

Not bad, not bad, not bad. It's very good, and I can keep reading. There are many books written by authors that are okay at the beginning, but become harder to read as you go to the back. Your book is good.

The plot of this novel is super interesting

It is currently a good book on Tomato. It has a bit of a mortal feel, the plot is okay, and the description of the fighting is not bad. It is not like those little white novels that are really unreadable.