Quick Travel: Targets Are Always on the Verge of Blackening

After reading more than 50 chapters, I suggested that there be less dialogue between the system and the protagonist. As I watched it, I became more and more irritated [laughs]. I thought it was my problem. When I went back and scanned it, I found that there was dialogue between the system and the protagonist almost every short paragraph. It felt unnecessary [Petrochemical]. It didn't have any effect. After reading too much, I felt that there was no big problem with the system. On the contrary, I felt that there was no big problem with the system. I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid [staring], and the character of the protagonist is not full enough. I feel that a piece is missing or deformed. Yes, it was this dialogue that made me feel that the character has been deformed. [Eat melon]. The rest is not a big problem. [Satisfied] After seeing a little bit of the campus world, I feel that it is a bit illogical. I don't know what is wrong. It's just a feeling. [Investigation] The relationship between the protagonist and Gong in the small world can be added appropriately. In these worlds, I feel that Gong's feelings are inexplicable. If I fall in love at first sight, [Stunned] doesn't feel right to me. [Thinking] The writing style alternates between immature and mature, a bit fragmented. Yeah, right now, I think the world of the little prince is the best. The author keeps working hard [eating melon] [like] [like] [like] [love] [KISS] [full] [learned]

Currently, I have watched the world of the entertainment industry, and I think it is very delicious. When I watched the early part of "The Sweetness of Rent," I really felt like a memoir of a deceased wife. Of course, it was not the real deceased wife, but there was an indescribable sense of memories. This feeling may also be because I was listening to music. The emotional line between the two protagonists is very clear. The rhythm of the reunion and resolving the misunderstanding after Jiang Xun left without saying goodbye is also suitable for a short story. I think it is quite good in terms of character creation. I feel that Jiang Xun thinks about things very straightforwardly. He wants Xiao Mo to be well but he doesn't want to just be far away. Looking at it, thinking that the mother will really fulfill what the mother said, it is easy to fall into a misunderstanding. In the end, both of them suffered. However, after the subsequent events, they were also out of the control of the Jiang family. Although they became poor again, they also got better later. I feel that Xiao Mo's character in this world should be more outgoing at the beginning, but later he becomes indifferent to people he doesn't know well, and has his own little temper, which is most obvious when he is in front of Jiang Xun. I cried a lot during the middle and later stages of watching it, and it was a bit astringent. Finally, super mysophobia may not be able to watch Super, but I personally don't think it's okay. Good product 🤓

It's good to watch. The world of the entertainment industry is very exciting, but it's also the most uncomfortable to watch. The villain is too powerful, the attack is very paranoid, and the two little bitter gourds are tortured to the point of dying. I feel very depressed and desperate in the later stage. In the end, the double death seemed to be the last resort. The deaths of the two people left no trace. The villains did not get retribution, Shou did not prove his innocence, no one commemorated them, and no one felt sorry for them [grievance]

It's good to watch. The double death in the fourth world is a bit sloppy, but the author also dealt with it in time after readers' reactions. It's particularly good www. The following is suspected of being a spoiler. Woohoo, the relationship between them is so good that it makes me cry QAQ. It was a bit unbelievable to say that the He family rebelled, but in fact, it was to break the federation from within. It really made me excited. No wonder the He family's family emblem was mentioned at the beginning, and the content contained in it is loyalty! Xiao He and Xiao Mo, you should be well. At that time, it seemed that everything was getting better, but suddenly the situation took a turn for the worse. I cried QAQ. This is the end of the matter. Long live the empire! (Actually, I am a bit of a human supremacist) The war is really painful to watch. It is said to be a fairy tale eh QAQ. Tragedy is to tear beautiful things apart for others to see. In fact, seeing the Western Front already felt a bit wrong. Even more so after Verdun came out. The war really hurt too many people. When I read the author's words at the end of the chapter, I felt even more insignificant and death came suddenly. May the world be peaceful and there will be no more wars!

The first small world and the third small world are beautiful, and the double death is actually caused by him. Anyway, I can't imagine how two people in the third small world will die. Why should they die if they are both good babies? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Can they die of old age? [Shy] No, it's the fourth small world that's beautiful. I skipped two small worlds in the middle and forgot about it [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Now that the matter has come to this, let me support you first. I can feel that the plot and writing are getting better and better! I picked it up and read it. I wasn't too interested in the western fantasy one, so I skipped it. I also skipped the one in the entertainment industry after hearing reviews saying it was a little frustrating. Because it's a quick time travel, I feel like there shouldn't be any big obstacles to understanding the plot. (If there is any, I will kneel down and apologize. Sorry, sorry, sorry) 1. Regarding the dialogue between the protagonist and the system: In fact, I think that dialogue is the only way to see the protagonist's self in time travel. Otherwise, he would have been pretending to be the original owner's character in the plot. Would the protagonist still be shown in front of us? This is part of the reason why I don't like to read immersive quick travel. I feel that immersive is like a unit essay. It has lost the meaning of watching quick travel for me. 2. About if: Why doesn't it feel like the protagonist? This is precisely because the inner dialogue between the protagonist and the system has been eliminated, and what is left is a shell like the "original owner" without the protagonist's spirituality. 3. Regarding the emotional line: When I first started reading, I thought the love between the two protagonists was inexplicable. But when I first started reading the novel, I read a lot of fast-travel movies. At that time, I had read both good and bad ones, so I had seen many scenes in which the two protagonists fell in love at first sight as soon as they arrived in the new world. It was a common problem that I was about to wear something, so I reluctantly accepted it and looked down. But I can feel that the emotional line is improving bit by bit! Take the mermaid article I'm reading now, for example. Shou is one of Gao's lifesavers. When a bunch of children surround him, he is the only one who can communicate with him. Then they get along bit by bit later on, and this emotional line is very reasonable. I hope the author will make more progress in the future! 4. About the small world is all about double death: Please sing with me, "Double death is HE!" (Just kidding) This varies from person to person. For me, watching the quick time travel, as long as the final ending is he, the small ending be is also okay. It still depends on the individual. If there is a baby who can't accept it, just avoid it yourself. 5. Five stars does not mean that this book must be extremely beautiful and without any flaws. But based on the data of the current book, I think the quality of this book can help. One more book review, maybe it will be more help for a book to enter people's horizons! 6. Some words: "God's milk", "His father's", etc. This is a mixture of scolding mother and father, but it still cannot be separated from the general environment. Is the choice of words the author's personal selfishness? It's actually great. Try to strive for something, even just a little bit, without being able to break away from your own environment. He is also very courageous and powerful. 7. Control issue: Tomato environment. This package is somewhat control-friendly and should be acceptable to most mothers, but let's talk about the extreme ones. If you have an aggressive baby, you may want to test whether it can be eaten. 8. The above is only my personal opinion after reading this book. If you find any errors in my description above, you can have a friendly discussion with me. I will not reply to you if you curse (⋟⋞) 9. Read the author's responses to other book reviews. Is this originally a hand-training book? Please be sure to finish writing it! I want to see the finale of that he (´∀｀.ヾ) Authors, please don't put too much pressure on yourself. The creation of the work itself cannot satisfy everyone. The love and hard work you pour into it will make people who understand you happily read it for hours or days. Having said that, I still want to thank you. Thank you for your creation! Please continue to create!

Are there so few people watching? I feel that the writing is really good, whether it is the plot or the emotional line, and there is also a bit of traffic. The previous worlds all had double-death endings, which might be a bit uncomfortable, but once the if line was written, it was fine. It's very good, and it has a lot of words. Although it's a serial, it's almost finished. It's very interesting.

I feel like my writing is getting better and better. The third world is quite interesting [I understand]. I personally like the world of mermaids, but unfortunately not many people watch the double death genre. Come on, author. [Sending my heart]

The author's writing style has been improving, and it is getting better and better as time passes.

It's amazing. It's really good at writing. The ideas are very bold and novel, and the character creation is also very three-dimensional. Anyway, it's so good that I don't know how to praise it enough. Big cheers for the author, it's so beautiful! ! ! The writing is so good! ! Really... Amazing... My blood boils all over when I see it

It's okay, but it's BE. I don't watch BE.

The author works hard to update, there are no more little stars when I see them. I really want to know what happened next. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The writing is quite good, but the world of the entertainment industry is so miserable that I was exhausted from reading it [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical]

It's very beautiful. I started watching it from the third world. I think the system dialogue is okay. Overall it's very beautiful. If I get a perfect score out of ten, I'd give it a 9.

In fact, I feel that the big-letter system and the dialogue with the protagonist are very good. It's nice to watch. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] Come on.

Good, good, good, good

Good-looking, very new type, not bad, not bad

I like the protagonist very much, but when I saw the if line, I felt that it was not the protagonist, which made me feel very disconnected and out of touch.

It looks good, but I can change the book cover. I missed it because of the cover before. Fortunately, Yang Persimmon insists on recommending this book haha

Good looking ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶зThe author, please come on [please give more updates][please give more updates]

Really good-looking! ! ! The emotional line is very delicate, but it made me so heartbroken💔 [crying] As I get older, my heart can't stand the stimulation, but the author's writing is so good that I bear the pain and move forward!

A very nice article! ! !

No, the more I look at the back, the more sad I feel. Are they actually two little bitter gourds? I cried TT