Fire First

The writing is very good, the battle scenes are exciting, and the war is going in a reasonable direction. The main reason is that there are no system cheats, and it is very immersive. The protagonist team is very united, and the brotherhood is good, but the luck is not good, it is just a matter of fact [laughing] There is a bit of black humor in the daily seriousness of the battle, and I look forward to the follow-up. Art is explosion 😏 o, ye~

It looks good, the subject matter is very novel, but it feels a bit abrupt at first. The protagonist is abducted inexplicably. After a brief introduction, you will understand. You can make money, satisfy your pursuit of tension and excitement, and get your hands on your favorite firearms. If it were me, I would go too. I hope there will be only one female protagonist or no harem, good book

It looks great. I love it. Come on, author. Can I help you upload the pictures of the weapons you wrote?

There are many underworld scenes that make people gush out at once, and the plot is also very compact and does not drag out. The imagination is also unique, always making people think about it, and so many AI picture interactions also make people feel comfortable.

It's good, the plot is compact and coherent, and there are no flaws.

The bloody curtain of the mercenary world is torn apart with a sharp pen, and the bottom line of human nature is questioned in the adrenaline-filled fight. Although there are flaws such as the facial makeup of the supporting characters and the stereotyped tasks, its thinking on the alienated human nature of war and the text aesthetics full of metallic texture are enough to carve an inscription in similar themes.

It's great. The writing style is a bit like "Firepower is King". There should be reference to the writing style in it, but there is no plagiarism. The writing has a refreshing feeling and deserves five stars. If the writing style and conception can be one step closer, it will belong to Wan Zhang, and it can be climbed up the ladder to be a masterpiece of God. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, you don't have to write them. This book should be in a rigorous style. Your own writing skills are not strong enough, your ideas are not in place, and your character description is not in place, which leads to the character's intelligence becoming dull and the story line setting collapsing. Do you think this book is humorous? I'm not very accepting.

Mercenaries! Funny classic! I basically laugh from the beginning to the end, and I still laugh non-stop about novels and books ~ treasure! After meeting each other for a long time, I finally met Funny Xiaowanyi and asked for it! A novel to read! Awesome 🎊Awesome! Desire all the works of this author! Novel! Hurry! Go quickly!!!

The author is so good at writing, hahaha. I was laughing so hard that I was all covered in rice🍚The description of the weapon was not boring. This is a plus for a military blind person like me. What is it called, what is it used for, and how much does it cost? I understood it all at once, and it does not affect the plot, 666! There are also female supporting characters, the writing is very good, they don't feel stereotyped and annoying, and they are vivid and have different personalities. The main protagonist is a steely straight man who is invulnerable to all kinds of poison hahaha. When a beautiful hacker girl promised that he could do whatever he wanted as long as he rescued her from prison, he actually asked people to unblock the game and even spent 800,000 dollars to buy accessories. Hahaha, I was really convinced.

It's so beautiful and very funny. I just laugh when I look at it. I can't help it 😄