Age, This Book Is a Bit Inappropriate

I like the heroine's character, she doesn't have internal conflicts, and she can blame others but never herself. In the later period, after cultivating immortality, too many men appeared, and the style of painting was not so happy, because the heroine had to have a divorce, and then the heroine had a partner. Everyone wanted to choose a heroine, and it was a big deal. Moreover, the heroine has just cultivated immortality and is not very good at it. She feels uncomfortable being suppressed by those men. It should become more powerful later on. When there are too many men, the emotional descriptions are no longer delicate, and they hit each other when they meet. In the early stage, when there was only one target, the writing was very detailed. Later, it felt like it was just a two-week break for the sake of a two-week break. Ah, why are there so many female characters who are interested in the heroine's man, and are full of malice when they see the heroine? Even after being convinced and cultivating immortality, he still does this and that.

The writing is very good, the writing style, the setting, the main characters' personalities are quite good, and there is nothing too great. It's just that he suddenly turns to fantasy later on, and the span is a bit big (if you don't like this, you can avoid it in advance). So far, the author's writing style and the characters and plots of the protagonists allow me to continue reading. I hope that this level can be maintained in the future. In addition, for now, the heroine is definitely a cultivator of immortality. In the follow-up content, I don't hope that the male protagonist will also cultivate immortality. If he also follows the heroine in cultivating immortality, well, I don't really hope that the heroine will reveal her trump card in front of the hero, because I have seen a similar era before. As far as the current plot is concerned, I want to give up. The heroine and the main male characters were cultivators in their previous lives. This era is just a small world. According to the current development, they will definitely leave this world and return to the world of cultivation... I want to give up.

It's a good-looking and ridiculous story, and the heroine's spirit is beautiful all the way. But in the later stage, I have to complain about the cultivation of immortality, because I really like to read the cultivation of immortality. I feel that the cultivation of immortality written by the author is so simple and easy. The level does not match the level. Upgrading is like riding a rocket, and you have reached the stage of transformation (currently) I only saw it in the stage of transformation), and the heroine did not have the same powerful momentum as in the stage of transformation (maybe the author mainly focused on lightheartedness and comedy, so I didn't go into details), so someone like me who often reads fairy tales found it unpalatable when the author wrote it like child's play. But the author's writing is very good. I just want to share my personal opinion. Come on, author.

Except for the occasional problem with the heroine's character, everything else is pretty good. Are there currently six male protagonists? As for Shen Yicen (the original male protagonist), he probably forgot about this person after writing about it, right? When I saw the latest chapter, the heroine setting was so problematic that it almost overshadowed the other highlights of the book. I'm not saying that, the heroine loves to take advantage too much and is greedy. She can be described as ungrateful. The key is not only greed, but also taking money from people who care deeply about her. Egoism is not enough to describe this feeling.

It's a very interesting and joyful period novel. Just be happy without thinking. [Laughing and crying] But why can't I have both... I read that there is a period book with two men... Wuwuwuwuwu Jin Shuheng is also very good [grieved] Can I have both...

Everything else is pretty good, except for the constant female rivalry. Even now that the fantasy series has come out, there are still a lot of descriptions of female protagonists engaging in trouble. I feel like it would be better to focus on the interaction between the heroine and the male, or add more words about cultivation.

Only children make choices. Adults must all have to choose. All three male protagonists are fine. The female protagonist's temperament is so interesting [Blow kiss]

The thief is good-looking, both in the early years and in the later stages of cultivating immortals. The current male protagonist is Du Jie, but I don't know whether Shen is the male protagonist. I haven't written about it for a long time. Aren't his parents working in the bullpen for renovation? It's a pity that Shen is not the male protagonist.

It's good to watch. The more you watch it, the more fantasy it becomes. There can't be only one male protagonist. If there is only one, I won't want to watch it [laughing]

Fairy~ I really like this kind of sublime heroine! ! I feel that the heroine is really cute. She has no shortcomings except for her strong sense of morality. Even if she wants to go home, she can coax the hero to get her first. Maybe she will get tired of it by the time she can go home. There will be no regrets.

I think it's pretty good-looking. I like all the male protagonists who have a lot of contact with the female protagonists. I think they will become thinner later on. I have to! I quite like Zhan Ning's fatness. I hope everyone can ascend to the upper world together and be happy together in the future! ! The most important thing is that I really like the heroine's character. She doesn't let herself suffer or be wronged. She also has a bit of humor and is very clear. This article is so exciting to read~[Please update]

They are all so cute. The heroine has a very interesting personality. If it were her, I would also want to be friends with her. Although she usually likes to take advantage of small things, she can distinguish between right and wrong, does not hold back and takes revenge, and avenges her on the spot. The male protagonists are also interesting. I hope there are more emotional scenes.

It's quite an interesting article. I've read more than half of it. I feel that this article is better without cp. After all, this style of sand sculpture is more suitable for building a career while doing sand sculpture. There is a lot of friendship and a little love [please taste it carefully]

It's just that the front part is so exciting, but the plot of cultivating immortals in the back is not understandable. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite good, and the other NPCs are unremarkable and unimpressive.

Do you think this is just a simple and beautiful period article? No, this is an abstract novel! Just when you really thought so, you suddenly realized that this was a book about cultivating immortals! After reading novels for so many years, this is the first time I see such a direction. It is very novel and interesting, and it is very well written. Come on, author!

The plot is amusing, but it's not that cool stories outweigh cool stories, so I'll regret not watching the series. It's just not finished yet. I've watched 100 movies recently without saving a single one. This is a must-read for everyone who saves and waits. Author, if you produce excellent products, you will definitely have fans.

It's good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking. This novel is very well written. The writing is clear, fluent, and contagious. The heroine and the hero have good characters. The heroine grows up and becomes stronger and stronger. In short, I really can't put it down this novel! The storyline is exciting and the characters are vivid. I like this book very much!

The heroine's spirit is very touching, she can go crazy at any time, and she must take revenge when she takes revenge. The male protagonists are all handsome, each with their own characteristics, and their mental condition is also very good. It feels like the author has written later. It was just a simple period novel at the beginning, but now it has revived its spirit. It feels like the author has let himself go later

Very interesting and interesting. I like such a wanton and crazy heroine. In fact, my favorite is the scumbag Aquaman... Unfortunately, the heroine is still a little bit worse at hahaha.

The heroine of the novel is very funny. She is really my pistachio. She is like a fighter in the novel. I like it so much [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I'm kidding, I can write from chronicle stories to immortality stories, and it doesn't make people feel out of place. It's amazing.

It's really good to watch, but it's a pity that there are so few of them, and it's uncomfortable to watch them serialized.

It's great, I love watching it, I just want to know if there will be one male protagonist or multiple male protagonists in the end😏

Epileptic literature wearing the vest of chronology cannot be compared with ordinary chronology. It is very good. Let yourself go, the mental state you yearn for.

It's beautiful, different from other era articles, and very attractive. I hope the author can write according to his own ideas, not what the readers think. Come on!

It's good-looking, a bit meaningless, a bit funny, and the heroine bounces back and forth between madness and sanity. The writing style is relaxed and pleasant, with a clear center line. It deserves a five-star rating. It is not easy to write something different in a period article, and you must score high.

It's so funny. It's the first time I've read such a funny period piece.

Good looking, good at cutting off Wenka

I really like the heroine's character, she's so happy and awesome👍🏻

The plot is too slow. It was pretty good at the beginning, but it's not too amazing after watching it. It's just my personal opinion. Some people will like this kind of thing. Overall, it's pretty good.