In the Apocalypse, This Zombie Is an Old Man!

I just wanted to write a book and give it a try. I was really not very satisfied with it at first. Because it was my first attempt and I didn't dare to write in too detail, so I just brushed over many places. I was afraid that I would be punished for violating the rules. I hope you can forgive me for this, but I personally feel that there is still progress. I really hope that the bosses can comment on the shortcomings. Of course, you have to read it first before commenting. As for the only outsider's comment so far, after reading it for less than 40 minutes, he started to complain. The comments were all the pitfalls I set and the content that I didn't dare to write too detailed. After I sprayed it and gave it a low score, I ran away. I emo'd for half an hour, and finally I met a dog on the side of the road. I apologize to everyone. I really can't write. How should I put it? I can think of an outline and the main story line, but no matter how carefully I think about it, I can't do it at all. It may be that I have already finished everything I want to write, and I am not good at that kind of matryoshka... The ending will definitely be completed, but it may feel like there is so much foreshadowing, and it ends with a bang... [Face covering]

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Daily life from a zombie perspective is my favorite type