After I Changed Sects, My Master and Senior Brothers Regretted It and Begged for Forgiveness

Overall it gets five points. Let's talk about the advantages first. The heroine has no major flaws and the plot is smooth. It can be seen that the author pays great attention to the characters, including the characters of several senior brothers. I don't think the heroine and Chi Ningning are considered rivals, so there is no clichéd plot. The plot of Beetle is good (the story background of the single Beetle King) is really touching, and the author is also very diligent in updating it. Please keep working hard. Let's talk about the shortcomings. It can be seen that the author really likes the setting of old enemies. The heroine and Chi Ningning, and I even think Bai Hu and Daojun are a bit like that. But the word "rival" is not simply that enemies who admire each other are considered rivals. Let's not talk about the plot between Master Xian and Daojun yet. As far as the heroine and Chi Ningning are concerned, they are far from being rivals. Although the author has no idea of ​​female competition and tries his best to portray Chi Ningning as an ambitious and mean, vicious and charming villain, at some point he will inadvertently compare the moods of Chi Ningning and the heroine to highlight the purity and kindness of the heroine. There is nothing wrong with this comparison method in itself, but it is not suitable for old enemy relationships. The so-called old enemy means that we are equally matched on opposite sides. I am another you, and I know you better than you do. I hate you simply because you stand in my way. I hate what you're doing, but at some point I can relate to how you feel. I appreciate you not only because of your strength and means, but also because of some qualities that scare me, even if you ruin my plans again and again because of these things. It is obvious that the heroine and Chi Ningning are far from being enemies. They are like being tied together by a thread. If they cannot resonate, there is no soul sympathy for each other. Moreover, the article mentions old enemies and admiration very directly, which makes the relationship between them seem too blunt. Would it be more subtle and smooth to use facial expression description instead of psychological and narration? Another very common problem is that the relationship between the heroine and the senior brothers progresses too fast, like a castle in the air. Emotions should go from unfamiliarity to testing to careful adjustment. Of course, this is not a big problem and does not affect the viewing. And the last point is that the heroine has no equally matched friends. Her seniors are her elder brothers who are more powerful than her, her master is the boss who always supports the show, and Chi Ningning is her rival. She lacks friends. Like-minded, equally matched friends. They are boys and girls with dazzling talents, comrades who have gone through hardships together, and friends who can be called geniuses even without the aura of the protagonist. So far, the heroine has no growth line, and sometimes she doesn't act like someone who has been beaten by Qianho. This may be related to her personality, but it does not affect the viewing. Well, that's about it. It may be a bit nit-picking, but I still have to say good luck to the author, the article is very good. Please stop praising it, I have stopped reading this book due to personal preferences and catchy points. To be honest, I didn't expect that the plot of just ten chapters would make me abandon the article, but the author's last few pictures made me uncomfortable. The author is obviously pushing the banner of feminism. Luo Ying did nothing but seek fairness and justice for her senior brother, and then she can win the favor of most female cultivators by defeating Chi Ningning in the competition. If Chi Ningning had won that game, would she have received the same treatment as the heroine? Moreover, the whole article does not mention the suppression of women in the cultivation world. Just because female monks rarely reach the finals, does it count as suppression? I think the three obediences and four virtues should be the shackles of women in the mortal world, but the existence of female monks shows that there are women who have broken through the difficulties. If they really want to help women, they should help those who are unwilling to be trapped in the world, instead of just talking in the world of cultivation. I read an article that said whether an author loves women from the bottom of his heart does not depend on how the heroine is portrayed, but how well the supporting actress is portrayed in the article. It's obvious that several of the supporting female characters are not very likable. Chi Ningning is the villain and not a supporting actress. I probably only remember Qin Si and her master Yu Yuzhen as the more positive supporting actresses. Qin Si, an obvious tool man, carries the flag of feminism and cheers for the heroine. When she first appeared, she defended her junior sister against the heroine, and then she slapped her junior sister in the face for fairness? (It seems I watched it for too long and cannot remember clearly). Seeing her slap me in the face makes me feel very uncomfortable. Her junior sister did something wrong, but the victim is not this senior sister. Even if she needs to be punished, it should be left to the fourth senior brother or the sect's law enforcement hall. What does she mean by slapping people in public to appear fair? Will anyone really be entertained by this kind of plot? And she only punished the culprits, what about those who spread rumors? She just let it go so gently? Although she is a senior sister and has the right to discipline her junior brothers and sisters, she never thought of thoroughly investigating when rumors spread before. She and her master Yu Yuzhen are like afterthoughts, usually pushing people out immediately after discovering that their junior sisters/apprentices have done something wrong. Her second appearance was in a competition, where she fought against a disciple of Wen Dao. She was about to lose, but when she heard that the heroine had won, she immediately fought back and defeated the others. I know the author wanted to write about women helping each other, but this is really outrageous. Yu Yu, the real person, had no feelings for her before and even had a good impression of her because she gave gifts to the heroine. But then I thought, no, the victim is the fourth senior brother. Why is she sending an apology to the heroine? It wasn't until she started mocking Mr. Dao that I realized her status as a tool. Her apprentice Qin Si is similar to the heroine's follower, and she is another protector of the heroine. What right does she have to ridicule Daojun's disciples? The disciples she teaches either want to ruin the innocence of others or spread rumors according to others' opinions. As a master, she is even less qualified than Daojun, but she can still make fun of her. Doesn't her face hurt? The heroine's own character has also become weird. In the article, she has a dismissive indifference towards the former second senior brother, but in fact, the heroine was nervous and entangled before Shi Kong fought with him. If it weren't for the second senior brother's enlightenment, I don't know if she could have let it go. She now has the aloofness of a reborn person, feeling that she is out of the ordinary, and that people and things before seemed like that. This will not make the heroine look indifferent, but will only make her look pretentious and arrogant. This is probably the reason why I gave up writing, arrogance. She has an inexplicable arrogance towards people and things in the past, and the author is also very active in cooperating with the plot. For example, if the former senior brother and the current senior brother meet, the current senior brother will definitely win. Each of her senior brothers is better than each of Chi Ningning's senior brothers, as if she is better than Chi Ningning. There are also authors who will specifically describe the scenes after the defeat of the former senior brothers. I remember she used a word to describe the failure of the former junior senior brothers, called ugly. It's just because he's afraid of bugs that he acts ugly. This word has a very clear connotation of judgment, but I don't think it should be judged. Everyone has something to be afraid of, just like the younger brother is afraid of the time he was imprisoned in the past. Why doesn't anyone think this is ugly? Because we know that people all have past events that they cannot bear to look back on, and there is no difference between being afraid of bugs and being afraid of looking back on the past. They are both fears, and there will be no difference between good and bad because of the person you are afraid of and the object you are afraid of. Casual judgment will only make people want to throw those bugs in the face of the person who evaluates him. Gu has a bad reputation, so no one should be wary of him. All the emotions described in this article (brothers and sisters, mutual help between women) are very cliched. To be precise, they are superficial but not deep. It makes people feel that their natural command is to love the heroine rather than because of the heroine's personality. The heroine herself doesn't necessarily have much of a character. All her actions are to serve the plot, so the above problems arise. But I am still willing to reserve five-star praise for the author, because there is a saying in the article that is right. It doesn't mean whoever has more is justified. When there are more women, men's situation becomes that of women.

I've finished watching it. First of all, it's very good to watch. Secondly, it's very good to watch. Finally, it's still very good to watch. Emmm, what can I say about the relationship between the heroine and her masters and brothers? It means that the relationship between the brothers and sisters is beyond a certain point, but the relationship between lovers is still one-sided. The heroine has never considered this aspect and is devoted to Taoism. The brothers also practice Taoism first, and secondly, at certain specific moments, they will have slightly different emotions. To say that the love between men and women is a bit too much. The biggest highlight in the book is probably that the heroine took off a senior brother's clothes, healed his injuries, and then immediately put them back on again, without any thought at all. Although everyone seems to be saying that Master is the male protagonist, but there is no accurate conclusion, I vote 1Vn. The key is that I like these male protagonists very much. I like the arrogant and stinky Master who likes to pretend to be cool. The nickname of Man Killing Machine Four Volts is actually for male mothers. I also like the senior brother who is nagging and worrying, and the second senior brother Fozi who loves to drink and fucks if he refuses to obey. I also like the third senior brother Fuzi who has a tragic past and secretly regards the younger sister as a benefactor and is willing to let the younger sister do whatever he wants. I like it the most!! It must be put on the final stage to make a shining debut!!! That's it!! Our fourth senior brother!!! In the early stage, he was a sick, white-haired boy in a wheelchair. Because he was born poisonous, no one could get close to him. He went through many disasters, but he was still kind-hearted. He was afraid that he would hurt others, so he drove away anyone who wanted to touch him like an exploding kitten. He obviously longs to get along with his junior sister, but because of his physical condition and low self-esteem, he only dares to let his Gu insect secretly protect his safety. He is a beautiful senior brother with soft hands, a fragrant body, and a thin waist (stamped by his junior sister)!! He is an innocent and clingy little dog, he doesn't dare to speak his mind, he only hides his thoughts aggrievedly and lets the little junior sister go out to practice while he stays at home silently, and then crazily misses her clingy puppy in the days when the little junior sister is gone!! Super innocent and super good at the same time!!! When the junior sister asked him to take off his clothes, he shyly took off his own clothes slowly. He was very obedient!! She's so well-behaved and a bit coquettish, oh my god, I love her all the time, so please be sure to be 1Vn. I don't want to see the soft little senior brother who is so dependent on the heroine end up loving her, and I don't want to see the second senior brother who regards the heroine as the only roof to protect her from the wind and rain after it rains, but she doesn't get it in the end. The kind of stories I personally dislike reading the most are those where the male protagonists obviously have their own characteristics but end up being 1V1, because I really don't know why the heroine wants to keep her virginity and for whom. I don't know whether it's the heroine who keeps her virginity, or the author behind it. Some men have had a harem for more than ten years, while women have kept their virginity for more than ten years. It must be 1V1 double cleansing, and I am really convinced by the article that men are unclean but women must be clean. So I don't like it at all when it's obvious that the male protagonists have their own merits but they all like the female protagonist, and the female protagonist doesn't have that kind of interest. In the end, it's still a 1V1 story. I don't know what kind of chastity I keep.

It's a very novel and interesting article. It's very different from the previous articles about cultivating immortals. The only shortcoming is that the emotional line feels a bit blurry. Don't let all the senior brothers fall in love with the heroine.

Looks good, don't do it, just brother and master love me

Such a good-looking article, why is it only around seven o'clock? I've seen it a few times. If you like slaps in the face, come and read it. The heroine is really free and easy and works hard, but the author, you don't want the female protagonist 🤦 Why did the heroine's senior brother crush her in the competition? What about the two golden elixirs of the senior brothers? That's not it. It does not represent the heroine's strength, but it also arouses the jealousy of Chi Ning, who thinks that he is the favored son of heaven [Shocked] In fact, it makes sense for him to resent the heroine, because the heroine stabbed him 🤔 I actually don't have any dislike for him, he just wants to Revenge is more extreme than revenge [laughing] Some of the author's writings are quite good, such as letting the heroine enter Bai Jin's dream to save him, letting him feel the warmth he has never touched 😢 or enlightening the Beetle Immortal to let him know that he is not hated by his mother. Evil, anyway, my mother knew he was not her biological child and still doted on her, etc. I like this place very much, it touched my heart a lot 😫. I also hope that the author can improve and write better and better articles, so that readers can completely put their hearts into it [KISS] I think the heroine's character change has become a bit stiff 🤔 She is lively and cute towards her current master and senior brother, but she feels very disorganized towards her previous "master and senior brother". How to describe it? [Rolls eyes] There is a sense of superiority and nobility. In fact, I don't think there is any need to communicate. There are many ways to make them regret 😠 1. For example, making the heroine become strong inside and not caring about those scum. On the contrary, doing tricks in front of those people will make people feel more concerned. Those people (?) [Shocked] 2. Or let them realize that the heroine's departure means they have lost a servant in the sense of the word, which makes them feel empty in their hearts. They will think of every bit of the heroine's time with them, and slowly they will realize that they have actually wronged the heroine a lot (?) 🧐

The front part is quite good, but I don't know if it is the kind of novel where the brothers all love the heroine, or the kind where the master and the heroine have a pure friendship. It really describes too much interaction between the heroine and Bai Jin. Although I haven't finished it yet, and there is also some ambiguity between them, the plot is still relatively slow, and it is not the kind that focuses on cultivation. A lot of space describes the interaction between the heroine and the senior brother, and the psychological changes of the senior brother. From the secret realm to returning to the master's door, almost every detail is taken care of 🙂. The heroine is also a very kind-hearted person. She doesn't seem to have any plans to take revenge on the white lotus. Although she has to wait for herself to grow up before hitting the target with one hit, it is still a slow process. After seeing Chapter 60, the heroine has only built the foundation for the second time, and then went to the secret realm to find flowers to improve her qualifications. I don't know how to put it, it's pretty good-looking. I personally think the front part looks better.,, She even touched the master's tail. Although the heroine didn't know that it was the master, the ambiguity was definitely there. Forget it, she and her senior brother Bai Jin actually had an affair. Anyway, I don't want a plot where my senior brother and master all love me. If there are multiple male protagonists, can it be marked as multiple male protagonists 😂

It's very beautiful. I really like watching it. . To be honest, can the heroine win over all five masters and brothers? 😘 😘 😘 I really want to see Master Kyuubi's uncontrollable love.

I think this book is really brilliant for this subject matter! Although I have just read more than 70 chapters, the descriptions are very delicate and there are many touching places. The writing style is elegant and warm. In fact, after reading this, I can imagine the very natural comic scenes. The plot also gives people a "simple" feeling, just like the simplicity of the road, without so many twists and turns, which is very suitable for relaxing reading. I have read another novel with the same theme, but it was very annoying that the former senior brothers always jumped around repeatedly. Moreover, the character of the heroine that I can see in this book is also what I like very much. It is a kind of liveliness and simplicity that is visible to the naked eye and I will be deeply affected by it when reading. It is very natural and not stupid at the same time. The author's way of describing also accounts for a large part of the reason. In this book, the innocence of the heroine is reflected in the "White Fox Great Immortal" in her eyes. Her innocence makes her feel that this must not be her master. The good thing about the author's writing is that the part surrounding this doubt is very short. As a reader, I cannot bear to expose it, and it will not make people feel uncomfortable. Then Chi Ningning's portrayal of the villain is also pretty good. Here we can occasionally see the author's God's perspective explaining the relationship between their "old enemies" in the third person. I think this is a good guide, and it also makes me feel less subjective "hate". As a villain, it is also a good description. And the last little suggestion: There are so many subsections that I'm not used to it at first. I think many people will give up on this book in the first few chapters because of this. Maybe we can appropriately reduce the subsections~ Finally, I wish the author great success and better quality, and I wish junior sister Luoying a happy family~

The writing is delicate and the plot is smooth. I love the heroine so much. It looks like it should be a multi-male protagonist, or a group favorite? I like all the male protagonists, please be sure to want them all!! Nice to watch, love to watch 🥰🥰🥰🥰

It's very interesting to watch, but I just want to ask if there is a male protagonist. If there is no story, I don't want to read it. If there is a male protagonist, I may continue to follow it. I have seen the latest chapter and haven't skipped it, but I can't figure out whether the male protagonist is the master, the fourth senior brother, or both? I can accept it if there is a male protagonist or multiple male protagonists. If not, I may not be able to accept it. If the article is okay, it doesn't matter if there is a male protagonist or not [Chigua]