Beng Tie: I Deceived Everyone with the Game Settings

The author has a good idea. The game Advent combines the two elements of Iron Break and role-playing, and the combination is not bad. The protagonist's personality is quite likable, and the plot development has some bugs (I still think Natasha's bombing zone of wiping out all NPCs and players is OOC, but if you switch to the homo-Raven, a mercenary full of blood, it will be about the same), but overall it is reasonable. It can be eaten as a snack once in a while But guess why I suddenly came to write a rating [laughing evilly] OK, the previous is my true feeling, now is the output time. The author's classic takes himself too seriously, the humorous earphones only protect against the spirit of speech, and the abstract regional legend breaks the card. Do you really regard the game special effects that were deliberately lowered to take care of the mobile phone (the early version of Huangquan's ultimate move can crash 90% of the player's machine), the relatively monotonous action module due to the limitations of game performance (refer to Bengsanli's direct two sets of actions and the knee-high Hanabi and Sword Fairy Keharu) and the relatively small number of CG animations due to development cost constraints (except for the main core up, there are basically no traditional animations similar to "The Last Lesson" and "The Queen's Advent") as the true strength of the character plot? I keep talking about the intensity of the plot, but apart from respecting the fact that the plot can obviously bring Pinoconi to hell with a single blow, isn't the rest just a flaw? In the past, I would delete the book and run away. This time, seeing everyone's anger, I decided to embrace it and keep it for fun. Come on, author, don't let everyone down, hahahahahaha! 11.10 Am The author hasn't updated in three days, so he probably gave up due to being criticized. I hope the author has a good rest and strives to make progress in the next book. Of course, it is more likely that the author was directly reincarnated and changed his account.

Getting a character means getting all the character's strengths, not the strengths in the game. Underworld's sword can at least split the sun in half. Every star core hunter explodes stars, otherwise they would have been caught long ago.

It's quite funny. It's a funny article. Facts have proved that people will laugh when they are extremely speechless. Sorry, I forgot to adjust the rating just now. Do you like the intensity of my humor and plot? The Invincible Earth Headset surpasses the company's Mecha Anti-Word Spirit. The very good settings make my brain spin. I like my newborn Star Core Essence to withstand a shot of the Doomsday Beast. Is it just that the energy is out of balance and about to explode, but it is killed by a three- or four-story building? Like my mom, interstellar civilization, high-tech, tens of billions of ruthless characters, can they still be alive and kicking when hit with a submachine gun? I found out that I had adjusted the wrong rating again, and then I realized that I had read this book for more than two hours, and a one-point score would be included in the score evaluation.

Within a few chapters, I took over the setting by myself, and Huang Quan showed up at the beginning of the chapter without even being drawn.

So far, it looks good, I hope it won't be written about Crash or Eunuch Even the screenwriters did not dare to write about Luka breaking Yan Qing's defense during the martial arts ceremony.

Chapter 69 Are you really drifting and starting to let yourself go? Or do you want to stop updating? Or was it replaced? To be honest, my combat power is so bad. If I can still think of this book in the future, I will come back and read it.

Not bad, just a little bit less The earphones are single-proof against the spirit of speech, and the earth's technology is greatly divided. Space bumpkins, meet the earth's technology boys! [Smile]

I think the content is quite interesting. Even the main plot is too unexpected. What is the situation between the protagonist and the earth now? Shouldn't this kind of outline be given directly from the beginning? Otherwise, some clues should be given in each chapter. Stop Riddler. Are you trying to deceive everyone with the game settings? Isn't it completely deceptive? I thought it was a behind-the-scenes leak.

The writing style in the front is pretty good, but there may be a problem with the expression in the back. Well, let's just treat it as self-suffering. The writing style can actually be broader. I want to make the thinking the same structure instead of adding too much to the book. It needs to be orderly and can be connected. Of course it can be inexplicable, but it is best not to have real-life examples. If corrections are made, they must be made clear, but they need to be reasonable. It's okay. Take your time. Come on. Thank you anyway. But there won't be any reminders, and I'll just write one more book as soon as possible. Just treat this book as a practice and rewrite, because now the image it gives to readers has become worse. But don't take it off the shelves. If this is the first new book, I hope this book has an ending and the setting can be changed. But I guess it will become a good book after the word count is increased. It will still be good if you adjust it slowly. Come on. I will pay attention to it, this book is not bad.

Howl! Don't stick to the original setting of the character, be flexible and reasonable, please give me more [Sending Hearts] I withdraw my preamble, we tomatoes have our own jjxx

Apart from the fact that the degree of simulation or acting after the transformation has no effect at all, and the character after the transformation is still the original character of the protagonist, there is no feeling that the transformation has affected the character, it is quite good.

Let me give you my dear five stars. What do I want to see more now? Do you know? I would rather see the main character wearing it. Wearing a vest and acting with the officials. The routines are official, I would rather see the highlights of the protagonist.

I'm really afraid that the author will cut the book. At the beginning, the ratings were like this. It will get better. There are only a few books that I can read. If this happens, how will I survive? [Crying] This book has great potential. I suggest you wait until the fireworks are released and change the cover to a fireworks display. It might be better. It's a good book. It's really beautiful. Trust me. [Sending my heart]

Hey, although I hope that the protagonist will communicate or report to the relevant departments after the end of the first script instead of leaving directly, but the author did not write this, forget it. This novel gave me the feeling of a slow-burning type, which is too slow and a bit delayed. The main plot is not obvious, so I still give it a five-star encouragement (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ).

According to this statement, your ability is effective in this Li world. You are nothing outside.

Great, it's our own spell to fight back [laughs]

Well, (a little rant) the number of characters continues to increase but the previous characterization is still very shallow. The copy has no story and no suspense at all. However, the plot foreshadowing still has merit, and once the length increases, it should still be very accessible to the audience. So, ahem…. [Learned]

After reading Chapter 66, I personally felt good about it, but the protagonist's inner drama made me feel abstract, but I didn't mind! It's just too little. Why isn't it a complete article with millions of words? I'm almost out of books I'm interested in reading! [Not enough][Not enough][Not enough] Great author, come on! [Send flowers][Send flowers][Send flowers]

The writing is good, but a bit lacking. It will take some time to grow. It's good to watch, but the main character's role is a bit small. I want to see the main character blast a few copies to show off.

It's so exciting. I watched it all afternoon, but it's a pity that it's a little less compared to others. I'm still very curious about what Bai Hong plans to do in the future. The person he plays has more or less come into the official spotlight. I'm really curious about what kind of development there will be in the future.

It's very interesting. The author's writing seems to suit my taste. I originally thought it was a behind-the-scenes story. From the moment Kafka was beaten by someone and vomited blood, he felt poisonous. The explanation later was quite reluctant, but later he blew himself up and exposed his identity. [Vomit] [vomit] [vomit] It's really poisonous

Uh uh uh uh uh uh uh uh poison is my sister, and there are combat power settings. . .

I want to see Xue Yi [crying] [crying] Arrange for the protagonist to wear a snow suit, Xue Yi is so handsome [crying] [crying] Please! !

Very good, very good

It's really good. It just came out so the score is relatively low. I predict it will be above 9.3 In the future. Better than most Bengtie novels

Update, it's a good book, the characters are not too OOC but the volume is small.

Great, it's just too slow. I'll come back to see you after chapter 150 or so.

It looks good, the characters are not OOC, the writing is good, but the updates are very slow.

Okay, very good book

Very beautiful, come on