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It's a very good book, but I plan to skip the first 15 chapters. It doesn't matter. The first part is too poisonous, and the second part is really good. There are just a lot of knives. You can resist if you can. The second part is full of stickers. Believe me, I will defeat the three old captains. It's super sweet [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

At the beginning, I thought it was a bit of a sandbox. It wasn't until I was 34 and ten chapters in that I was really shocked by the world view. I felt like I was watching 40k at the beginning. The descriptions of the characters are also very good. I finished reading it in more than 30 hours. [Like] The description of aluminum copper and transformation makes people happy [laughter] Ciallo～(∠ω< )⌒☆

I feel that the author's early pace is relatively fast, but on the Tomato platform, if the pace is not fast, it will not attract the audience. Then I feel that the author has a good grasp of the plot. It does not say it is a straight line, but there are foreshadowings and less poisonous points. Basically every turn is reasonable and logical. The biggest difference compared with other books is that it is in a reasonable place. Arranging some hot topics will not feel conflicting, but you will feel that the character is well created. Just like Xu Yi felt that the protagonist is not the Holy Body, and then inserted a hot topic, and then laid a foreshadowing for the narrative of the second-generation sect leader, successfully created three characters, talked about Xu Yi's cunning, and also said, why is this world like this? Why does the subsequent plot develop like this? I feel that this is what distinguishes it from other books, and there are many others. It has some fragments with its own characteristics. It is not like the kind of saliva, nor the kind of pure water in the later period. It is very good for a debut novel, whether it is to pave the way for the following or to describe the characters. Of course, there are still some shortcomings. Because the description is too fast at the beginning, the description of the protagonist and the protagonist master may not be so profound, and then the emotional scenes in the later part may be missing a little bit. I hope the author can arrange more plots of the interaction between the protagonist and the master in the future.

Let me tell you something, the sexual transformation part has a bit of a Blood Princess (Pineapple's) flavor, and as an old bookworm who likes to skip reading, this book gave me a lot of trouble [facepalm], but I didn't expect that there wasn't much nonsense, so I was a bit confused. Then the part called the Sect Defense War shouldn't be a problem, it felt like breaking the dimensional wall, and now the latest plot has begun to introduce new forces. It feels pretty good. It can become my third tomato book so far. I want the author to get the book. It's just, why is this protagonist almost defeated? It's so shameless [cover face][cover face][cover face]

I give full marks to the whole book. The only thing I want to say about the author is that the emotional changes of Lele's male-to-female transformation are a bit poorly described. The ups and downs are too exaggerated. There is no transition between the sudden acceptance of his own changes and the previous loss of soul. The above evaluation may also be because I didn't read carefully. Don't blame me.

It was well written, but the poor male protagonist was turned into a little lolita.

It was okay from the beginning. Although the protagonist was very scared when he saw the murder scenes, it was still okay for someone who was not a virgin and had seen too many decisive killings. But it seemed like the comments said it was pure love, so I stopped watching it for the time being because a senior sister likes him. Can anyone spoiler how it will be dealt with later on? So I still prefer to watch the harem. There are always a few scenes of pure love that are pretty good. Girls who like the protagonist don't really want to read any more. Otherwise, it will be uncomfortable if I don't accept it.

You don't have to read them all. If you are not patient enough, you can skip the first dozen chapters. After that, you can jump directly to chapter 52 without any impact at all. The middle chapters have little connection with the main plot. I don't know why, but this book gave me the feeling of reading "TieTieTieTieTie". The sword is not very sharp, but the main plot is quite exciting, so it is still worth watching.

It's okay, it's good to watch, but the transformation chapters don't feel good, and the feeling of substitution is not good. It would be better if the transformation could be explained in one go. The protagonist is not as resistant to pressure as a contemporary college student, and other transformation chapters are directly changed by the system to make it more adaptable.

The beginning is a little bit toxic, the protagonist's emotional change is a bit hasty, and the heroine's demonization in the back is actually a bit toxic, and the protagonist forgives too quickly, but the rest is still very interesting. Although the writing is at the level of a new author, the overall look and feel is still very good, and the author also said that he will fix it in the front. Finally, I am looking forward to the author's new book.

Very, very, very beautiful! The most profound novel for me! If he releases a physical version, I must buy it! [Laughing] Although it's a bit of a knife, it doesn't hurt. If I had the financial strength, I would definitely invest! It's best to hire a good dubbing team to work with this book!

Although it is not very good in terms of description and plot, it is not bad. Here are three time travelers fighting against the world consciousness. The world consciousness defeated the sect system holder, and the protagonist's system also compromised the world consciousness, but the protagonist has the heart to resist the world. [Laughing] The god among gods is Xiaoji. Although he has no system, he is still a soul, but he relies on his long years of accumulation and IQ to defeat the world consciousness. [Eat melon] The article is not very sweet, because the world view is not small and it is not an invincible novel. If I really wanted to write it in detail, I could write a million words. Because the number of words is too small, I rushed through the plot. [Understood] If it's a cool article, then you can keep being sweet, and then you'll be invincible.

Very good-looking, the male protagonist died in Chapter 12 [Learned]

If it weren't for platform restrictions, the two heroines in the little black room would probably be very exciting. Xiaodao Yiqing and big knife hurt the body [smile][smile][smile]

It looks pretty good, but the only flaw is that due to the deletions, the plot before and after it is a bit disconnected, and it looks a bit lost. (I haven't read the rest yet. Can there be deleted content... [Laughs crookedly])

I hope I can keep writing, it's really interesting. Don't stop updating, please🥺[I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

I haven't read online books for a long time, so I picked this one after a long time, and I just finished it in the past few days. I felt really comfortable reading it in one go. The book is a good book, with almost no poisonous points. The author is very good at writing a book for the first time. [Blow kiss] I like to read the transformation novels the most, preferably the one about hundreds of transformations. It just so happens that this one is in line with XP and the writing is very good. Out of ten, 8.9 Points

I felt that the description of Qu Jingqiu was too heavy-handed, a little too masculine, and it was a bit uncomfortable to read. But I still have to give it a thumbs up. The content is wonderful, the characters are rich in descriptions, and the characterization is 10 points. If it comes out as a physical book, I will definitely get it.

Let's talk about the bad points first: Lele has a demented physique whether he is a boy or a lolita in time travel, and he can always turn hidden dangers around him into big bosses. (Maybe inherited from mother Aba Aba Advantages: This book is much better than the one that travels back in time to do tasks and goes home without asking anything about the heroine. This is truly enjoying each other's love (I give this point five stars). Others: Some people may not be able to accept that Lele is stupid in the early stage. In fact, he does have the characteristics of being stupid and cute, he will not lie to the master, he is too purposeful in doing things and it is easy for others to see, etc... Also, the male and female protagonists are only in name here. The female protagonist has already been broken by Lele. Later, when Senior Sister Huang became stronger, she basically protected Lele (great, no need to say more). The male protagonist has not seen the female protagonist a few times (I don't know why people always say this and that about the male and female protagonists). The author also foreshadowed some small details that are not easy to find. Only when you look at it later will you realize that it is all foreshadowing. It is very good and interesting. Summary: The author has not given a big deal, it is very sweet (except for the omission of a small part h). The author's writing style is not very profound, and there are many good ideas written in general, but it is acceptable to me. This book is the only "pure love" book I have read recently. The author will not fill the protagonist with unnecessary emotions, such as the brain-congestion plot where the protagonist makes the heroine feel guilty and then leaves and returns to the original world. Worth it! [Like][Send heart]

This book is considered to be a better quality one. 1 The plot has both sweetness and sharpness, mainly sweetness. The sharpness is also explained later in the article, but it cannot avoid the poisonous point in the early stage of giving medicine to the protagonist after not telling him. Senior sisters shouldn't write about it, but I just love it so much and multiple senior sisters confess their love. 2. The protagonist did not have the Holy Mother's heart because of the annihilation of the sect. After confirming each other's feelings with the master, he did not avoid anything. The system feels like a resurrection prop, which does not affect the viewing. 3 The ending is not rushed (I can't think of anything to say, so I will follow the author's third point to make up the number of words) (●'◡'●)

Yes, it reminds me of an old friend: "There are three good things about a lolita: she has a soft voice, a soft body, and is easy to defeat!" Someone in the spaceship hummed a tune, which was quite smooth. This is not what Chu Feng said. After hearing this, a row of black lines appeared on his forehead. Because, after the girl finished speaking, she looked at him with her big eyes and said, "What are you looking at? I'm talking about you, Chu Loli!" [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]"

The content is good-looking, the logic is clear, and the humor is very interesting. The psychological description of the protagonist can better express the funny and humorous style of the whole book. At the same time, the twists and turns of the plot give people a feeling of being on a roller coaster. I think the part about obtaining the system is the funniest and humorous, so I think this book is super good!

This book is so interesting that it made me fall asleep at 4:56 last night. I read it all day again today and the plot in it is simply amazing, sharp and delicious.

This is the only fairy tale I can read.

A great article. I hope there is a little less character development of the protagonist. I hope there will be more in the future.

From a personal point of view, this book is good, but the main character changing from male to female is really awkward. This book is also the first one that I am interested in on Tomato. It is quite attractive to me. The overall concept and background of this book are well written, but there are some loopholes. , For example, Dai Lan is the will of the world. Although he cannot directly intervene, his indirect intervention is indeed a bit weak. It is a little bit okay, but the overall sense is very good. We are just a BB with not many readers. Come on, the author. I hope to create another good story. I hope the author will succeed in his sophomore year.

It's a beautiful and exciting book. The first fifteen chapters are indeed a bit poisonous but still acceptable. Although the subsequent plot has a knife but not much, the main body is still sweet, and the deleted parts are also very exciting. I look forward to the author's new book [Love] [Love] [Love]

I like it, I hope the protagonist and the master can have a good ending [sending my heart]

So far, it's still pretty good.

It's very, very beautiful. The author must not stop updating it [lick the screen]