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It's okay. The author has his own thoughts but lacks experience in writing novels. However, the author is very active and the character conflicts are relatively stiff. The plot of the Black Forest has a bit of a sudden change in style. It is a failure that the system is incomplete, and some of the enhancements are left outside. Although the author explained in the comments that it will not be received by others, since there is such a setting, it would be better to directly indicate it in the article from the beginning. For example, when the protagonist asks a question during the system explanation, the system will answer. There is also the setting of the Platinum Star ability on the hat. The author's comment said that it will be solved by tasks in the future. It is better to add a paragraph directly to the item description. For example, after completing the xx task to extract the ability to the host, and then the protagonist asks what task, the system will ask for the xx plug-in or something. Many settings that have little impact on the plot will be displayed as they should, and don't wait for readers to guess. The author is very active plus one star.

It looks good, but not many people see it, so don't die!

It's well written, the protagonist has a good character, he understands his shortcomings and improves quickly, and the author responds promptly to paragraph comments, adds fresh plots, and is good

It's really beautiful, good luck to the author

Good health, but so short

It's okay, at least it's not poisonous yet

Won't you write another one?

Author, you must keep updating, come on, I don't think I can live without you.

It's interesting, keep up the good work, author

The viewing experience is very good, the overall plot is coherent and the characters are distinct.

Feel like something is missing

The character of the protagonist is very good. If you can write more adventures with Barron at home and abroad, it would be better [laughing evilly] [like] It seems to be very good at the moment. The character of the protagonist is quite good. I still prefer the kind of travel and adventure around the world in the early stage. I wanted to read it before, but I couldn't find it. It's okay and not too abrupt. Now it's more to the main line. I hope to add some adventures with Barron. It feels like it has a different flavor. It's just that there are not many people watching it at the moment. Come on, the author [Like] (I'm a little afraid that the author will be gone one day)

It looks good to me＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／／

It's really good.

Good, come on, well written

Come on, well written

A good fan work. [Praise]

Very pretty, not bad, not bad

Looks good, really good

Good health, good health, good health, good health, good health

The first part is pretty good, but the author needs to work harder and encourage me. I should have seen some problems from this book. I also felt like I couldn't read it halfway through. I hope the author can work harder.

More updates, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates, more updates

The plot is very substantial and the combat power is not broken.

It looks great. I love watching more! More updates! More updates! I hope the author will not stop adding oil!

This book is good, but the score is a bit low. The three views and image of the protagonist are quite in line with my requirements for a new generation of online male protagonists. The plot is good, and the original plot is well written.

An awesome book among jojo

I laughed angrily, when I first read this book, I didn't give you a rating. Today I suddenly remembered your book and clicked on it. It showed that I gave you a one-star negative review😅

It's so beautiful, but the number of words is a bit short.

The writing is pretty good, but no one reads it.

The author must add the gargoyle mask and the red stone of Ai Zhe, which will make you directly invincible.