Zhanshen: Coming for You

I like this fanfic [Adoration]. The only dissatisfaction I have with the original work Zhanshen is the heroine. The heroine's arrival was a bit sudden for me, so I don't really like it. The author's writing style is good, at least better than mine [laughing] Maybe it's a bit forced, but I hope the author's writing can reach the finale of God-Decapitating [Eating Melon] Emotions are impossible to have at once for Lin Qiye and Qiye's character, so it's good for the author to write about emotions in a subtle way. When writing, write about feelings at the same time. This kind of feeling is best between brothers. On top of friendship and love, don't be too ambiguous or too alienated [eating melon] but this requires a lot from the author [thinking] so all the above can be ignored [almost crying] In general, I hope the author will not give up on this book [almost crying] I like it very much [blowing kiss] I hope the author will read more and pay more attention to your health. It's easy to catch a cold in the cold weather recently and wear more clothes [sending heartfelt]

In fact, I couldn't watch it at first, but I kept reading it because of the title of Two Men. To be honest, the more I read, the more interesting it becomes. Many people are asking why there are no emotional scenes and not much interaction. However, this kind of first acquaintance, then understanding, then trusting, and then falling in love is really attractive and difficult to write. I gave it a five-star rating because the author really wrote a lot of delicate and nuanced emotions that are not available in a fast pace. Moreover, the author not only wrote good emotions, but also had a lot of feeling in the battle scenes. It is really not enough to watch! Do you understand that I really didn't pay much attention to this article at first, so much so that now I just wait for 0 o'clock and click refresh all the time to see the updated changes? Thank you, the author. My five-star praise is sincere and not watery at all. It is really beautiful [like][like] She's really good-looking, Jihyun is so gentle and heart-warming

It looks good, but I want to know if the main character is on the right?

Who cares? [Almost crying] I really want to know

It looks good. I personally think the rating is much higher than it is now. At present, the plot will be more in line with the original story at the beginning. The charm of the book will become greater in the later stages, so I look forward to it. 1. The emotional line is very natural, slow to warm up and not OOC, and easy to interact with. 2. The writing is well-written, and some settings are also very advanced and appropriate. 3. I know enough about the original character, the characters are basically not OOC, and the analysis and understanding of the plot are also good.

It has been blocked, will there be a day when it will be unblocked?

The emotional line is really well written, and the super delicate relationship between the two male protagonists is very interesting, especially the character of Lin Qiye is very well grasped. At the same time, the friendship and family lines are also very good, and the relationship between the protagonist and the 006 team is very warm.

Nice. But I've already eaten a vegetarian diet for Chapter 62 [I'm about to cry] Let's get some sugar. The child is going to have hypoglycemia [crying] [crying] [crying]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why, why [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's super good-looking. I've already read the latest chapter and I still have more to say. The author's writing style is very logical and doesn't make any drama at all. The character design of the protagonist is also great. He doesn't steal the role of the protagonist group. He even reminds the protagonists appropriately when there is a deviation due to the butterfly effect. He is low-key, powerful, handsome and graceful. Looking forward to a big update from the author [Love]

The overall feeling is okay, there are too many puzzles, not much sense of contradiction, and a lot of fun. However, the emotional line is a bit slow to write, but it is normal. The relationship between people is always the most inexplicable thing. Looking at each other is always the most intimate kiss between people, which is the communication between souls!

Why is such a good book rated so low? I think the author is a girl. She is also a veteran of dual male protagonists. It just makes up for Sanjiu's shortcomings of not being able to write delicate emotional scenes. I really love it🥰

Dad, where have you been? Please take it away, I can't do it without your book [crying] [crying]

Comment after reading all the chapters! This book is really bland, especially for those of us who are into CP, all the chapters put together. That little bit of food can fill the space between my teeth, but it can only fill the space between my teeth. [Didn't see enough][Please update][I'm about to cry][Cry]

Oh my god, it's super pretty. Come on, author, come on and update it. It'll be tied soon. Teacher, teacher, can you increase the emotional connection between them? Don't imitate the book I read before which was abruptly changed to a socialist brotherhood [face covering] Rolls-Royce, don't cut their emotional lines [love] Although I know there are knives, they can cut anything, but don't cut their emotional lines. My little heart can't stand it. Don't get me wrong [love] [love] [love] It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, why is there no one? [Send heart] I love it so much

Nice! ! ! I think the score should be higher. No knife for now (but I feel like I can't run in the later stage) and Lin Qiye's progress is quite normal, not too fast. It's still acceptable. After all, after watching so many twins, this is the slowest and most realistic progress I've seen. After reading this, I couldn't stop at all. I was waiting for the author to update it every day. Looking forward to the following plot, it will be very exciting [Love] [Please update]

It's very interesting, but the interaction between Hyun Ji and Lin Qiye is a bit lacking. I recommend the author to update ten chapters every day! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

As soon as I got home, I found that the sky was falling. Why was the novel blocked? What happened? Does anyone know? Someone please reply to me, please! No, I'll press down the pressure, please come back!

Super, super, super good-looking, the writing is online, the descriptions are delicate, and the plot changes smoothly. The characters are particularly lovable and the emotional lines are also very likable (whether it is family, friendship or love). There are just too few, and I can't read it at all [crying]

This book is super nice, and it doesn't feel OOC at all. The characters are well presented, but the updates are a bit slow... (The author probably understands what I mean)

Very nice, but why is he gone? ! !

It's very interesting. I look forward to interacting with Lin Qiye more.

It's good to read. I love reading it. Please write more. I really like this type of book, not to mention that it has two male protagonists. I like it even more. Well, it's not enough to read.

It's so good, please update it soon, it's not enough. I like this kind of slow-burning, unobtrusive emotion. I'm waiting for his update every day [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [shy] [shy] [admiration] [admiration]

It's really good-looking. Although I haven't finished reading the original book, this one is really good-looking! The writing fits the original plot very well and is basically non-ooc, which is the key point! Good writing!

Why was it blocked? Ahhhhhhhh! No, I finally found it ಥ_ಥ(ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

Good-looking, good-looking and delicious [admiration]. The author's book is so good [laughs]. One bite is not enough, the serialization can update three chapters every day. [Shy] The characters are full of personality. The article is relatively slow and very detailed. The general background of the characters is also described. The characters get along well with each other. Anyway, it's a good thing [laughing] I hope the author will work hard to update and not stop updating [I'm about to cry] I wish the author peace and success [blowing kiss]

The writing is very good, the battles are also very detailed, and the emotional lines are also relatively delicate. I don't say anything about what I like right from the beginning. The character of the protagonist is really good, a very gentle child. For a moment, please return the book quickly! ! ! ! I've been waiting for eight days! Waiting every day!

It's so good to watch, it's so uncomfortable to keep up with the update. The author will update it soon [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Baby, why is the article gone? [Crying] I was reading it yesterday